ZEB - TAN KAR KE PEET - WASAN HUM NIKLE .................. HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: June 08, 2014, 01:21:55 PM »
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Waah!!
Kya kahne!!
Rau kubbol karen!!!
Shukria , Nawazish Nakul ji . Khush rahye.
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«Reply #16 on: June 09, 2014, 12:52:08 AM »
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Thanksssss a lot , Premdeep ji . God bless you.
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«Reply #17 on: June 10, 2014, 03:31:45 AM »
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Barg - e - Gul  ban ke  , na to  ban ke  Suman   hum  nikle
Teri  nazro.n  mei.n  faqat  Khaar - e - Chaman  hum  nikle
aisa kyon sochte ho ji dil ki baat na mere nazro.n se jhhalkti hai na zuba.n se nikalti hai tum jo ho wo mera dil jaanta hai!
                   tumein sab kuch khuda nahin maanta hai!! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Jab  bhi  Khatra   hua  Laahaq  teri  Seemaao.n  ko
Baandh  kar  sar  pe  Kafan  ,  mere  Watan  hum  nikle
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Roshni  de  na  sake   ,   chheene   Ghareebo.n   ke  Diye
Ban'na  thha  Najm - e - Watan  ,  Nang - e - watan hum  nikle
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Bastiyaa.n  chhaan  lee.n  ,  Insaan  na  paaye  hum  nay
Le ke  Aasha  ki  Kiran  ,  Dasht - o - Daman   hum  nikle
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Guzre  Kooche  se   tere  ,  Aaj  jo  anjaane  mei.n
Lay ke  tan - man   mei.n   Agan  ,  Shola - Badan  hum  nikle
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                       kis ghum mein thaa mubtalaa ki bahaar mein bhi na khila!!


Har  Qadam  Raah - e - Sukhan  par  mile  'Ustaad'   hamei.n
Unn  se   kuchh   seekhne   Aadaab - e - Sukhan  hum   nikle
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))mujh se seekh kete to ye haalat na hoti
Thha  Zamaane  se  chhupana   hamei.n   Chehra   apna
Zeb - tan   kar  ke   'Hasan'  ,  Peet - Wasan   hum   nikle

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 tanz hai iske motalliq main ne magzine mein padha thaa phir bhaijaan se detail mein pataa chalaa


- HASAN SHAMSI -


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Is ghazal mein Hindi aur Urdu ke kuch khubsurat alfaaz mix kar ke istemal karne ki koshish
ki gai hai . Kuchh Meanings diye jaa rahe hain :

Barg e gul = Phool ki patti ; Suman = phool ; khaar e chaman = baagh ka kaanta ;
Najm e watan = star of the nation ; Nang e watan = shame for the nation ;
dasht o daman = forsts and hills : Agan = Agni / fire ; Shola badan = fire bodied ;
Sukhan = Art / poetry ;Zeb tan = pahan kar / wearing ; peet wasan = yellow, saffron clothes
worn by saints


fazal sahab meri tarah naaznee.n ye ghazal rau ke liye line mein rahein icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #18 on: June 11, 2014, 01:18:27 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah Waah Waah or Sirf Waah...........
Bahut hi khoobsurat Ghazal SIR...
Dheron daad qubool karein SIR..
shukria Biswajeet ji.Khush rahye.
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«Reply #19 on: June 11, 2014, 08:08:38 PM »
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fazal sahab meri tarah naaznee.n ye ghazal rau ke liye line mein rahein icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!


aap ka rau icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #20 on: June 11, 2014, 10:32:54 PM »
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Barg - e - Gul  ban ke  , na to  ban ke  Suman   hum  nikle
Teri  nazro.n  mei.n  faqat  Khaar - e - Chaman  hum  nikle

Jab  bhi  Khatra   hua  Laahaq  teri  Seemaao.n  ko
Baandh  kar  sar  pe  Kafan  ,  mere  Watan  hum  nikle

Roshni  de  na  sake   ,   chheene   Ghareebo.n   ke  Diye
Ban'na  thha  Najm - e - Watan  ,  Nang - e - watan hum  nikle

Bastiyaa.n  chhaan  lee.n  ,  Insaan  na  paaye  hum  nay
Le ke  Aasha  ki  Kiran  ,  Dasht - o - Daman   hum  nikle

Guzre  Kooche  se   tere  ,  Aaj  jo  anjaane  mei.n
Lay ke  tan - man   mei.n   Agan  ,  Shola - Badan  hum  nikle

Har  Qadam  Raah - e - Sukhan  par  mile  'Ustaad'   hamei.n
Unn  se   kuchh   seekhne   Aadaab - e - Sukhan  hum   nikle

Thha  Zamaane  se  chhupana   hamei.n   Chehra   apna
Zeb - tan   kar  ke   'Hasan'  ,  Peet - Wasan   hum   nikle
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
wah waaah bahut khooooob Hasan ji
daaaaaaaaaaaad kubool karein
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«Reply #21 on: June 12, 2014, 03:33:52 PM »
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Wah Wah!!! Lajaawab Ghazal!!

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Shukria , Nawazish Shireen ji . Duaaein.
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«Reply #22 on: June 15, 2014, 10:06:03 AM »
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Waaaah waaaaah bahut khoob Hasan Sahib....sixer...maza aa gaya
padhkar....Raqeeb

Har  Qadam  Raah - e - Sukhan  par  mile  'Ustaad'   hamei.n
Unn  se   kuchh   seekhne   Aadaab - e - Sukhan  hum   nikle

                                           ...... laajwaab

Satish ji, Adab .Ghazal pasand karne aur kuch neem -aalim 'ustadon' ke liye makhsoos sher ki shinakht aur pazeerai ke liye Shukria, .
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«Reply #23 on: June 17, 2014, 05:19:31 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaah koobsoorat ghazal ko rau per aaj nahin Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shukria janab
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«Reply #24 on: June 22, 2014, 12:59:15 PM »
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Shukria Khamosh Awaaz ji , Nawazish .
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«Reply #25 on: June 23, 2014, 12:43:59 AM »
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 Thankyou !
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«Reply #26 on: June 24, 2014, 12:32:56 PM »
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wah Hasan Sahib bahut umdah, aaj kaa din sakoon-o-safal ho gayaa. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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THANX A LOT SURINDARN JI .
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«Reply #27 on: June 24, 2014, 02:58:06 PM »
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Barg - e - Gul  ban ke  , na to  ban ke  Suman   hum  nikle
Teri  nazro.n  mei.n  faqat  Khaar - e - Chaman  hum  nikle

ghazab ka matla hai..
khoobsurat ghazal
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«Reply #28 on: June 25, 2014, 05:01:38 PM »
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Ravinder ji , bahut shukrguzar hoon aapka .
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«Reply #29 on: June 26, 2014, 01:42:30 PM »
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waaahhh!!! behad hi khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai Hasan sahab !!! Har ek sher qabil e daad !!!Hindi Urdu ke alfaaz ko mix karne se khoobsurti aur bhi nikhar gayi hai !!!! Dheron daad aur mubaarakbad is shaandaar qalaam par !!!
Ghazal ki pazeerai aur khaksaar ki housla afzai ke liye tahe dil se mamnoon hoon . Shaad o abaad rahye .
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