Zehr de do mujhe.....

by sidra04 on November 07, 2013, 09:05:54 PM
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Ek choti si ghazal aap sab ke liye...


Aapko, aapkaa banaa deNge,
Ab koyee raasta banaa deNge.

Zehr de do mujhe khudaa waaloN,
Ahle-but waaqeyaa banaa deNge.

Humse aise na aap ab miliye,
Dillagee Khaa-ma-Khaa banaa deNge.

Ab hamee daastaaN sunaate haiN,
Aap to Be-wafaa banaa deNge.

Pehle sun leNge Log haal-e-dil
Phir tamaashaa miraa banaa deNge.

Hai unhi par ye jaaN fidaa Sidraa,
Zindgee jo sazaa banaa deNge..

Sidra...
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«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2013, 09:23:06 PM »
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Wahh!! sidra jii kya khoob likha hai aapne..
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«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2013, 09:23:15 PM »
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buhat khoob... ithi chhoti beher main likhna buhat dushvaar kaam hay, magar achha nibhaaya hay aap ne...
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«Reply #3 on: November 07, 2013, 09:23:34 PM »
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Perfect, behr mukammal hai, bahut bahut khoob. Ye sher bahut pasand aaya:

Pehle sun leNge Log haal-e-dil
Phir tamaashaa miraa banaa deNge.
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«Reply #4 on: November 07, 2013, 09:26:28 PM »
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ek rau ke saath daad haazir hai
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«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2013, 09:28:26 PM »
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Quote from: sidra04 on November 07, 2013, 09:05:54 PM
Ek choti si ghazal aap sab ke liye...


Aapko, aapkaa banaa deNge,
Ab koyee raasta banaa deNge.

Zehr de do mujhe khudaa waaloN,
Ahle-but waaqeyaa banaa deNge.

Humse aise na aap ab miliye,
Dillagee Khaa-ma-Khaa banaa deNge.

Ab hamee daastaaN sunaate haiN,
Aap to Be-wafaa banaa deNge.

Pehle sun leNge Log haal-e-dil
Phir tamaashaa miraa banaa deNge.

Hai unhi par ye jaaN fidaa Sidraa,
Zindgee jo sazaa banaa deNge..

Sidra...


bahut pyara ghazal likha hai aapne sidra jee. bahut daad
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«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2013, 10:40:26 PM »
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on November 07, 2013, 09:23:06 PM
Wahh!! sidra jii kya khoob likha hai aapne..

Thanks Saman..........  khush raho dear

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«Reply #7 on: November 07, 2013, 11:25:58 PM »
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Quote from: vb on November 07, 2013, 09:23:15 PM
buhat khoob... ithi chhoti beher main likhna buhat dushvaar kaam hay, magar achha nibhaaya hay aap ne...

thanks for the like and your views VB.........

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«Reply #8 on: November 08, 2013, 01:56:50 AM »
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Zehr de do mujhe khudaa waaloN,
Ahle-but waaqeyaa banaa deNge. icon_scratch

Pehle sun leNge Log haal-e-dil
Phir tamaashaa miraa banaa deNge.
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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2013, 03:17:49 AM »
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WWWWWAAAAAHHHHH ........is "chhoti si" ghazal ki wusatein bahaut badi hain Sidra ji .... aap ko beshumaar daad !!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2013, 12:30:30 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on November 07, 2013, 09:23:34 PM
Perfect, behr mukammal hai, bahut bahut khoob. Ye sher bahut pasand aaya:

Pehle sun leNge Log haal-e-dil
Phir tamaashaa miraa banaa deNge.



bahot bahot shukriyaaaa Iftakhar ji.... sher ko pasand karne ke liye khaas shukriyaa... aate raheN

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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2013, 01:27:57 PM »
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Pehle sun leNge Log haal-e-dil
Phir tamaashaa miraa banaa deNge.

Bahut khoob Sidra jee
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«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2013, 01:56:52 PM »
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Sidra ji, Bahut umda ghazal!
khaskar ye dil fareb she'r -

Ab hamee daastaaN sunaate haiN,
Aap to Be-wafaa banaa deNge.
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«Reply #13 on: November 08, 2013, 03:21:26 PM »
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Quote from: sidra04 on November 07, 2013, 09:05:54 PM
Ek choti si ghazal aap sab ke liye...


Aapko, aapkaa banaa deNge,
Ab koyee raasta banaa deNge.

Zehr de do mujhe khudaa waaloN,
Ahle-but waaqeyaa banaa deNge.

Humse aise na aap ab miliye,
Dillagee Khaa-ma-Khaa banaa deNge.

Ab hamee daastaaN sunaate haiN,
Aap to Be-wafaa banaa deNge.

Pehle sun leNge Log haal-e-dil
Phir tamaashaa miraa banaa deNge.

Hai unhi par ye jaaN fidaa Sidraa,
Zindgee jo sazaa banaa deNge..

Sidra...

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Kya kehne sidra bahut khoooooooooob... badi achchi ghazal se nawaza hai tumne.. dheron dheron daaaaaaaad..
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«Reply #14 on: November 08, 2013, 05:11:59 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 07, 2013, 09:26:28 PM
ek rau ke saath daad haazir hai

Saini saahab.... aapka bahot bahot shukriyaa. rau ke liye alag se thanksss Usual Smile

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