zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahiN kartey,.......:Ghazals

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dar.d sab per AyaN nahin kartey
ham to aaho FughaN nahin kartey

bheid gehre hein dil ke jab saahib
baa.t her ik BayaN nahin kertey

jaanney waale jaa.n leite hein
haa.l arzey zubaN nahin kartey

jo rahe naa shanaa.s lafzon se
guftagu ka GumaN nahin kartey

hai bharosaa khudaa pe jub humko
waq.t kaa phir ZayaN nahin kartey

tarteebey zindagee ye hi hai jub
dil ko nohaa KhwaN nahin kartey

khamshee jab bhi baa.t kertee hai
zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahin kartey

yun hi toh ish.q ke samandar main
dil ki kashtee rawaN nahin kartey

laaiba shah


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Re: zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahiN kartey,.......

«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2014, 08:58:29 PM »

Quote from: laaiba on March 30, 2014, 08:45:59 PM

Waah Waah Waah Waah Waah......

Kya Kehne Laaiba Jee...Bahut Hi Khoooooob... Bahut Hi Gehre Jazbaat...Har Sher Apne Hisse Ki Baat kehta hua...Bahut Acche..


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Re: zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahiN kartey,.......

«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2014, 09:08:59 PM »

Laaibaa Saahibaa Aadaab... !

Bahut khoob jee bahut hi umdaa Gazal kahi hai aapne... Sabhi sher pur asar aur khoob rahe...
Badi hi naseehat baqsh aur khoob kalaam rahi jee...
Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Lkhte rahiye... Bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...

Quote from: laaiba on March 30, 2014, 08:45:59 PM


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Re: zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahiN kartey,.......

«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2014, 09:48:27 PM »

:thumbup:Laaiba ji aap hamesha bahut accha likhti hain ..Kudos 2 u


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Re: zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahiN kartey,.......

«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2014, 11:21:47 PM »

wah wah bohut hi umda waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh


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Re: zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahiN kartey,.......

«Reply #6 on: March 31, 2014, 12:27:20 AM »

Bahut hi Umdah Laaiba Sahiba. Clapping Smiley

Surindar.N Applause


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Re: zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahiN kartey,.......

«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2014, 07:39:05 AM »

just excellent ek rau


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Re: zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahiN kartey,.......

«Reply #8 on: March 31, 2014, 02:52:52 PM »

Quote from: laaiba on March 30, 2014, 08:45:59 PM

Mohtarma laaiba shah sahiba! salam masnoon

aap bhi kahen ge k hum aap he k kalaam par tabsira karnay ku chalay aatay hen.. hamara khayal hay hamen wazeh taur par bayaan kar dena chahiyay....

is ki koi khaas waja nahi hay... jub kisi beher main likhay behter kalaam ko parhen or kahin par apny naa-qas ilm kay hisaab say koi kami beshi mehsoos ho tu ji chahta hay k isay behter kiya jayay... ya apni si raayay day di jayay baaqi likhnay wala behter samajhta hay... aap ki jaanib say choon-kay hamen abhi tak manaa nahi kiya gaya, is liyay ye jasaarat kar letay hen... agar aap ko hamaray tabsira par aetraz ho to bay-fikr ho kar mana farma dejay. baaki ehbaab ka hamen ilm nahi k bura he mana jaain, is liyay abhi tak kahin aur nahi likh rahay..

ake baat or k hum khud shagird hen is liyay jo kehtay hen apnay ilm k hisab say kehtay hen.. hum ghalat bhe ho saktay hen... maqsad sirf sikhaana nahi hay balkay seekhna bhi hay... so jahan aap say ho sakay hamaari bhi tas-heeh kr dia kijay...

aap ki ye ghazal parhi... buhat khoob hay... sar-e-dast hum say bharpoor daad qabool kijay..
kuch ash-aar say mutaliq hamari kuch rayay hay... umeed hay giraaN na guzray gi...

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dar.d sab per AyaN nahin kartey
ham to aaho FughaN nahin kartey

buhat khoob matla hay... daad

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bheid gehre hein dil ke jab saahib
baa.t her ik BayaN nahin kertey

buhat khoob... hamaaray khayal main pehlay misray men :hein: ki jaga :hon: behtar rahay ga

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jaanney waale jaa.n leite hein
haa.l arzey zubaN nahin kartey

buhat khoob. lekin :arzey zuban: achi tarteeb nahi hay... hamaray khayal say isay :nok-e-zubaaN: kar den to nisbatan behter tarteeb hay

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jo rahe naa shanaa.s lafzon se
guftagu ka GumaN nahin kartey

ye sher apnay meaning sahi say bayan nahi kar pa raha hay.. koi behtri ki soorat aap he nikaal sakti hen

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hai bharosaa khudaa pe jub humko
waq.t kaa phir ZayaN nahin kartey

buhat khoob... daad

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tarteebey zindagee ye hi hai jub
dil ko nohaa KhwaN nahin kartey

yahaan aap nay lafz :tarteebey: sahi nahi bandha hay... :ee: ka sound jahan bhi kisi word kay darmian men ho usay gira nahi saktay... "faa-i-laa-tun" yaani "2 1 2 2" taqtee aisay ho ge :tar (2), tee (2), bey (2): aap is ki jaga :haasiley: baandh kar check karen jis ki taqteeh aisay hay :haa (2), si (1), ley (2): ya phir 212 wazan ka koi bhe lafz..

doosray misray men :KhwaN: sahi nahi bandha hay... taqtee main isay :KhaaN: bandha jata hay.. aap nay isay :KhwaN: likha hay jis say hamen mehsoos ho raha hay k aap urdu script likh/parh jaanti hen... ghalib ka misra hay :Aur Agar Mar Jaiyay To Noha KhaaN Koi Na Ho:, is men "noha khaaN" theek bandha gaya hay...

hamara mashwara hay k :nohaa khwaaN: k bajayay aap :noha kanaaN: likhen jis kay meaning same hen... or wazan bhe poora ho jayay ga...

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khamshee jab bhi baa.t kertee hai
zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahin kartey

buhat khoob...

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yun hi toh ish.q ke samandar main
dil ki kashtee rawaN nahin kartey

buhat khoob... maqtaa buhat jaan daar hay... hamara mashwara hay k pehlay misra men :toh: ki jaga :hum: likhen to aur acha ho jayay ga...

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ye sub hamaray naa-qas ilm kay mutabiq hay... umeed hay k kuch bura na mehsoos hua ho ga... aur jahan kahin hum ghalat hen hamari bhi rah-numaai farmaai jayay gi...

wasSalaam

ahqar, vb jee


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Re: zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahiN kartey,.......

«Reply #9 on: March 31, 2014, 03:22:45 PM »

bahut khoob


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Re: zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahiN kartey,.......

«Reply #10 on: March 31, 2014, 05:14:56 PM »

Quote from: laaiba on March 30, 2014, 08:45:59 PM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah rau is ghazal ko nazr karta hoon qabul karein


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Re: zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahiN kartey,.......

«Reply #11 on: April 01, 2014, 09:23:05 PM »

Laaiba ji kamaaaaaaaaaal ki peshkash rahi... tareef ke liye alfaaz nahin mil rahe...hazaron dili daaaaad qubool kare...


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Re: zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahiN kartey,.......

«Reply #12 on: April 02, 2014, 05:37:54 PM »

Aap sabhee kaa bohat bohat shuqria , esp sir saini g rau ke liye Advil aapka b shuqria......


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Re: zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahiN kartey,.......

«Reply #13 on: April 02, 2014, 05:46:59 PM »

Quote from: vb on March 31, 2014, 02:52:52 PM

. Salam mother am Vb g Ap ka bohat shuqria , Jo aap tym nikal ker ghazal pe apne comments dete hein, our iski nok palak sanwarne men help krte hain.....apko tafseeli reply se kafi maloomat mil tee hain , samjhne men b ,isle liye tah e dil se shuqria, Ap ne Jin Assaar ki nishandahi ki hai use achi tarah se samjhne lia hai , koshish ho gee ke agli ghazal men behrer ka Jahan khyal rakhti Hun wahin mo 'ouzon alfaz our rawani ka b khyal rakhun, Aik bar phr bohat nawazish our shuqria,


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Re: zik.r phir kuch wahaN nahiN kartey,.......

«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2014, 03:16:30 AM »

bahut khooooooooooob laaiba ji

hum bhi taareef yun hi nahin karte
bahut khoob kehne se nahin hat -te


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