ZINDAGEE ACHHEE LAGEE.............................................SAINI

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YooN to mujhko zindagee achhee lagee.
Par tere sang aur bhee achhee lagee.

Aap the pahloo meN mere raat bhar.
Raks kartee chaandnee achhee lagee.

Husn kee mahfil meN kyaa achhaa lagaa.
MaiN kahoongaa saadgee achhee lagee.

ShaukhiyoN,raanaaiyoN ke saath meN.
Thodee unkee dillagee achhee lagee.

Der se teree milaa aankhoN kaa jaam.
HaaN mujhe ye tishnagee achhee lagee.

Is bahaane kaam dil ko mil gayaa.
Aapse ye aashqee achhee lagee.

Dhoondhtaa phirtaa thaa tujhko dar-badar.
Tab kee vo aawaargee achhee lagee.

Jab nazar ne aapke tan ko chhuaa.
Us ghadee kee khaamshee achhee lagee.

Thode se rang-e-taggajul meN dhalee.
Ye ghazal 'saini' teree achhee lagee.

Dr. Surendra Saini

यूँ तो मुझको ज़िंदगी अच्छी लगी |
पर तेरे संग और भी अच्छी लगी ||

आप थे पहलू में मेरे रात भर |
रक्स करती चांदनी अच्छी लगी ||

हुस्न की महफ़िल में क्या अच्छा लगा |
मैं कहूंगा सादगी अच्छी लगी ||

शौख़़ियों,रानाइयों के साथ में |
थोड़ी उनकी दिल्लगी अच्छी लगी ||

देर से तेरी मिला आँखों का जाम |
हाँ मगर ये तिश्नगी अच्छी लगी ||

इस बहाने काम दिल को मिल गया |
आपसे ये आशक़ी अच्छी लगी ||

ढूंढता फिरता था तुझको दर-बदर |
तब की वो आवारगी अच्छी लगी ||

जब नज़र ने आपके तन को छुआ |
उस घड़ी की ख़ामशी अच्छी लगी ||

थोड़े से रंग -ए-तग्गजुल में ढली |
ये ग़ज़ल 'सैनी'तेरी अच्छी लगी ||

डा०सुरेन्द्र सैनी 
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«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2015, 05:29:33 PM »
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श्री सैनी जी आपकी गजल की अधितर लाईने दिल को छू गई एक राऊ कबूल करे -आर के रस्तोगी
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«Reply #2 on: May 14, 2015, 05:32:59 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 14, 2015, 08:42:21 PM »
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waah waah waah Janaab Saini Sahib bahut hee kamaal kee peskash hai, dheron dheron daad Rau ke saath. (Rau due)
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2015, 05:03:51 AM »
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bahut bahut khub saini sahab.....
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Wah wah wah wah.Bahut khub. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 15, 2015, 01:47:40 PM »
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YooN to mujhko zindagee achhee lagee.
Par tere sang aur bhee achhee lagee.

Aap the pahloo meN mere raat bhar.
Raks kartee chaandnee achhee lagee.

Husn kee mahfil meN kyaa achhaa lagaa.
MaiN kahoongaa saadgee achhee lagee.

ShaukhiyoN,raanaaiyoN ke saath meN.
Thodee unkee dillagee achhee lagee.

Der se teree milaa aankhoN kaa jaam.
HaaN mujhe ye tishnagee achhee lagee.

Is bahaane kaam dil ko mil gayaa.
Aapse ye aashqee achhee lagee.

Dhoondhtaa phirtaa thaa tujhko dar-badar.
Tab kee vo aawaargee achhee lagee.

Jab nazar ne aapke tan ko chhuaa.
Us ghadee kee khaamshee achhee lagee.

Thode se rang-e-taggajul meN dhalee.
Ye ghazal 'saini' teree achhee lagee.

Dr. Surendra Saini

यूँ तो मुझको ज़िंदगी अच्छी लगी |
पर तेरे संग और भी अच्छी लगी ||

आप थे पहलू में मेरे रात भर |
रक्स करती चांदनी अच्छी लगी ||

हुस्न की महफ़िल में क्या अच्छा लगा |
मैं कहूंगा सादगी अच्छी लगी ||
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

शौख़़ियों,रानाइयों के साथ में |
थोड़ी उनकी दिल्लगी अच्छी लगी ||

देर से तेरी मिला आँखों का जाम |
हाँ मगर ये तिश्नगी अच्छी लगी ||
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

इस बहाने काम दिल को मिल गया |
आपसे ये आशक़ी अच्छी लगी ||
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ढूंढता फिरता था तुझको दर-बदर |
तब की वो आवारगी अच्छी लगी ||
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

जब नज़र ने आपके तन को छुआ |
उस घड़ी की ख़ामशी अच्छी लगी ||

थोड़े से रंग -ए-तग्गजुल में ढली |
ये ग़ज़ल 'सैनी'तेरी अच्छी लगी ||

डा०सुरेन्द्र सैनी 




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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2015, 01:52:07 PM »
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YooN to mujhko zindagee achhee lagee.
Par tere sang aur bhee achhee lagee.

Aap the pahloo meN mere raat bhar.
Raks kartee chaandnee achhee lagee.

Husn kee mahfil meN kyaa achhaa lagaa.
MaiN kahoongaa saadgee achhee lagee.

ShaukhiyoN,raanaaiyoN ke saath meN.
Thodee unkee dillagee achhee lagee.

Der se teree milaa aankhoN kaa jaam.
HaaN mujhe ye tishnagee achhee lagee.

Is bahaane kaam dil ko mil gayaa.
Aapse ye aashqee achhee lagee.

Dhoondhtaa phirtaa thaa tujhko dar-badar.
Tab kee vo aawaargee achhee lagee.

Jab nazar ne aapke tan ko chhuaa.
Us ghadee kee khaamshee achhee lagee.

Thode se rang-e-taggajul meN dhalee.
Ye ghazal 'saini' teree achhee lagee.

Dr. Surendra Saini

यूँ तो मुझको ज़िंदगी अच्छी लगी |
पर तेरे संग और भी अच्छी लगी ||

आप थे पहलू में मेरे रात भर |
रक्स करती चांदनी अच्छी लगी ||

हुस्न की महफ़िल में क्या अच्छा लगा |
मैं कहूंगा सादगी अच्छी लगी ||

शौख़़ियों,रानाइयों के साथ में |
थोड़ी उनकी दिल्लगी अच्छी लगी ||

देर से तेरी मिला आँखों का जाम |
हाँ मगर ये तिश्नगी अच्छी लगी ||

इस बहाने काम दिल को मिल गया |
आपसे ये आशक़ी अच्छी लगी ||

ढूंढता फिरता था तुझको दर-बदर |
तब की वो आवारगी अच्छी लगी ||

जब नज़र ने आपके तन को छुआ |
उस घड़ी की ख़ामशी अच्छी लगी ||

थोड़े से रंग -ए-तग्गजुल में ढली |
ये ग़ज़ल 'सैनी'तेरी अच्छी लगी ||

डा०सुरेन्द्र सैनी 



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«Reply #8 on: May 15, 2015, 02:26:35 PM »
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waah waah waah Janaab Saini Sahib bahut hee kamaal kee peskash hai, dheron dheron daad Rau ke saath. (Rau due)
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2015, 01:48:31 AM »
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Saini Sir ... Kya saadgi ke saath aap bayani karte hai

Aap ko Bollywood ya Ghazal singers ko apni Kavitaayen / Kalaam bhejne chahiye..
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aapki yeh gazal bhi humen sada ki tarah bahut hi achhi lagee- dheron badhayee
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