ZINDAGEE DEKHEE................................SAINI

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«Reply #45 on: October 30, 2012, 02:11:45 PM »
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choti behere me likh a humesha hi bahut mushkil padta hai, aur aapne wahi kiya hai, ghazal ahchi rahi, bas thodi jyada lambi ho gayi mere khayal se, doosra sher haasil-e-ghazal raha... bas yahi duaa rahegi ki aap aage v mehfil me yuNhi apne lafzoN ke rang bikherte raheNge...
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«Reply #46 on: October 30, 2012, 02:36:55 PM »
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«Reply #47 on: October 30, 2012, 09:49:03 PM »
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MaiN sahaaraa kisee ko kyaa doongaa.
Jab hameshaa hee bebasee dekhee.

Uske aage maiN ro padaa jab bhee.
Uskee aankhoN meN dillagee dekhee.

Tum ko maayoos kab milaa ‘saini’
Kyaa kabhee aankh meN namee dekhee.


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«Reply #48 on: October 31, 2012, 04:12:22 AM »
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«Reply #49 on: October 31, 2012, 05:33:15 AM »
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«Reply #50 on: October 31, 2012, 06:59:10 AM »
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«Reply #51 on: October 31, 2012, 09:14:22 AM »
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«Reply #53 on: October 31, 2012, 09:51:52 AM »
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Teree soorat  khilee-khilee  dekhee.
Aaj  fir  maine   zindagee   dekhee.

Log  jitne   mile    samundar   meN.
Sabke hothoN pe   tishnagee  dekhee.

Subh se  hee  udaas  baithaa   hooN.
Boodhee maaN sust see padee  dekhee.

Saaf  thaa  vo   jahez  kaa  qissaa.
Laash  betee  kee  adhjale e dekhee.

mujhko  usne hee jam ke  lootaa hai.
Shakl  jiskee   badee bhalee dekhee.

Mujhko   aabehayaat  kyaa     degaa.
Maine   taa  umr   maikashee dekhee.

MaiN jalaanaa  charaagh kyaa jaanoo.
Maine  jeevan   meN teergee  dekhee. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kab   n   jaane   ye  amn   aayegaa.
Jab bhee dekhee khadag tanee dekhee.

MaiN sahaaraa kisee ko kyaa doongaa.
Jab  hameshaa  hee  bebasee  dekhee.

Uske  aage  maiN  ro padaa jab bhee.
Uskee  aankhoN  meN dillagee dekhee.

Tum  ko  maayoos  kab  milaa ‘saini’
Kyaa kabhee aankh meN namee  dekhee.

Dr.Surendra Saini   


तेरी सूरत खिली -खिली देखी |

आज  फिर मैंने ज़िंदगी देखी ||
 

लोग जितने मिले समुन्दर में |

सबके  होठों पे तिश्नगी देखी ||
 

सुब्ह से   ही   उदास बैठा हूँ |

बूढ़ी  माँ  सुस्त सी पडी देखी ||
 

साफ़ था वो  जहेज़ का क़िस्सा |

लाश  बेटी  की अधजली देखी ||
 

मुझको उसने ही जम के लूटा है |

शक्ल जिसकी बड़ी  भली देखी ||
 

मुझको  आबेहयात  क्या देगा |

मैंने   ता उम्र मैकशी  देखी ||


मैं जलाना  चराग़  क्या  जानू |

मैंने   जीवन में तीरगी  देखी ||


कब न जाने  ये अम्न आयेगा |

जब भी देखी खडग तनी देखी ||
 

मैं सहारा किसी  को  क्या दूंगा |

जब  हमेशा  ही  बेबसी देखी ||
 

उसके आगे मैं रो  पडा जब भी |

उसकी आँखों  में दिल्लगी देखी ||
 

तुम को मायूस कब मिला‘सैनी ’|

क्या  कभी  आँख में नमी देखी ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी     

 

 

 



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«Reply #54 on: October 31, 2012, 01:43:56 PM »
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«Reply #55 on: November 01, 2012, 01:13:00 AM »
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sabhee kaa shukriya
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«Reply #56 on: December 28, 2012, 09:12:13 AM »
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mujhko  usne hee jam ke  lootaa hai.
Shakl  jiskee   badee bhalee dekhee.

badi behtareen baaten kahi hain aapne saini sb....bahut umda kalaam hai... aapko meri jaanib se dheron dad-o-mubaarakbaad !
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«Reply #57 on: December 28, 2012, 09:23:04 AM »
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