Zindagi Bhar Woh Safar Karta Raha......

by khwaish on August 08, 2009, 04:16:51 AM
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Zindagi Bhar Woh Safar Karta Raha
Har Haal Mein Aage Badhta Raha....

Zindagi Ke Maayne Rukhna Nahi!!!
Jo Rukh Gaya Uss Ka Kad Ghatha Raha.....

Hausle Buland Ho To Hi Yeh Safar Asaan Hai!!!
Manzil par Pahunchne Ka Ek junoon Sa Dil Mein Uske Palta Raha...

Manzilein Abhi Aur Bhi Hai!!
Naa-Kaamiyabi Ke Ek Ehsaas Se Par Woh Darta Raha.....

Khwaisho Ne Dil Mein Ek jagah Si bana Li!!
Umeed Ka Diya Dil mein Uske Jalta Raha....

Log Kehte Hai Ke samundar Ki Gehrai Mein Hi Moti Chupe Hote Hai!!!
Aur Ek Woh Tha!!! Jo Zindagi Bhar Gehraiyon Se Hi Darta Raha...

Aadmi Insaan Ke Fitrat Ka Hai!!!
Umar Bhar Raah Apni Badalta Raha....

Khud Ki Khaamiyon Ko Nazar-Andaaz Karne Wala!!!
Auron Ko Hi Kyon Humesha Parakhtha Raha.....

Uske Jeene Ka Andaaz Hi Kuch Yuh Hai!!!
Zindagi ko Jeene Ki Koshish Mein Pal-Pal Woh Marta Raha....

"Khwaish" Zindagi ka Safar Bas Kuch Yuh Hai!!
Jo Chale Seedhe Raah par To Manzil Bahut Kareeb Hai!!!
Jo Chale Tedha,Woh Bas Girta Raha....

Zindagi Bhar Woh safar Karta Raha...

   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2009, 04:31:44 AM »
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Waah Waah Khwaish ji.. Wakai tafeef e kaabil kalaam pesh kiya hai.. bahoot bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2009, 06:23:06 AM »
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Waah Waah Khwaish ji.. Wakai tafeef e kaabil kalaam pesh kiya hai.. bahoot bahoot Khoob!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sophi..Aapne Iss Kalaam Ko Apna Waqt Diya..Teh Dil Se Shukriya.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2009, 07:28:23 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI    KHWAISH JI.....

CHALTE RAHEN SADA APNI RAHA PAR,
MANZIL KO DOONTE HUE ZINDAGI BHAR.
KABHI RUK NA PAAYE APNE KADAM,
MAALIK DENA HUM KO ITNA DUM.
KI CHALTE CHALTE HI CHALEY JAAEY HUM,
POORA HO JAAEY YUN ZINDAGI KA SAFAR.
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2009, 08:00:09 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 08, 2009, 04:16:51 AM

Zindagi Bhar Woh Safar Karta Raha
Har Haal Mein Aage Badhta Raha....

Zindagi Ke Maayne Rukhna Nahi!!!
Jo Rukh Gaya Uss Ka Kad Ghatha Raha.....

Hausle Buland Ho To Hi Yeh Safar Asaan Hai!!!
Manzil par Pahunchne Ka Ek junoon Sa Dil Mein Uske Palta Raha...

Manzilein Abhi Aur Bhi Hai!!
Naa-Kaamiyabi Ke Ek Ehsaas Se Par Woh Darta Raha.....

Khwaisho Ne Dil Mein Ek jagah Si bana Li!!
Umeed Ka Diya Dil mein Uske Jalta Raha....

Log Kehte Hai Ke samundar Ki Gehrai Mein Hi Moti Chupe Hote Hai!!!
Aur Ek Woh Tha!!! Jo Zindagi Bhar Gehraiyon Se Hi Darta Raha...

Aadmi Insaan Ke Fitrat Ka Hai!!!
Umar Bhar Raah Apni Badalta Raha....

Khud Ki Khaamiyon Ko Nazar-Andaaz Karne Wala!!!
Auron Ko Hi Kyon Humesha Parakhtha Raha.....

Uske Jeene Ka Andaaz Hi Kuch Yuh Hai!!!
Zindagi ko Jeene Ki Koshish Mein Pal-Pal Woh Marta Raha....

"Khwaish" Zindagi ka Safar Bas Kuch Yuh Hai!!
Jo Chale Seedhe Raah par To Manzil Bahut Kareeb Hai!!!
Jo Chale Tedha,Woh Bas Girta Raha....

Zindagi Bhar Woh safar Karta Raha...

   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

'Chalnaa hee jeewan hai!' key shaashwat kathan ko sudrudh kartee, aapkee yah kavitaa wichaarotteyjak aiwam pathniiya hai, Khwaish ji! Applause Clapping Smiley
 
Chaltey chalo ruko naheen;
Chalo kshitij key paar!
Sammukh sindhu: prayaan ko,
Noukaa hai taiyaar!

            - 'Ramwatiya'/abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2009, 05:47:18 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 08, 2009, 07:28:23 AM
KYA BAAT HAI    KHWAISH JI.....

CHALTE RAHEN SADA APNI RAHA PAR,
MANZIL KO DOONTE HUE ZINDAGI BHAR.
KABHI RUK NA PAAYE APNE KADAM,
MAALIK DENA HUM KO ITNA DUM.
KI CHALTE CHALTE HI CHALEY JAAEY HUM,
POORA HO JAAEY YUN ZINDAGI KA SAFAR.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Caraji..

Aur Bahut Khooob Kaha Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2009, 05:55:33 PM »
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wah wah khwaish ji... wah wah ... yeh huyi naa koi baat ...

isi tarah aap likhtey jayieh.... wah


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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2009, 08:23:27 PM »
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bahut khoob khwaish maza aa gaya janaab kya kehne hain

zindagi bhar wo safar karta raha
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«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2009, 06:41:17 AM »
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'Chalnaa hee jeewan hai!' key shaashwat kathan ko sudrudh kartee, aapkee yah kavitaa wichaarotteyjak aiwam pathniiya hai, Khwaish ji! Applause Clapping Smiley
 
Chaltey chalo ruko naheen;
Chalo kshitij key paar!
Sammukh sindhu: prayaan ko,
Noukaa hai taiyaar!

            - 'Ramwatiya'/abd bundeli

Bahut Bahut Bahut Shukriya Abd Saheb ji..JO Aapne Iss Kalaam Ko Apna Keemti waqt Diya..Teh dil Se shukriya Aapka Saheb icon_salut

Aur Bahut Bahut Khoob Abd Saheb ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Chalte Chalo Rukho Nahi,
Ab Bas Karo Khud Par Aitbaar,
Chalne Par Hi Manzil Milti Hai
Sochne Wala bas Karte reh jaata Hai Intezaar
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«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2009, 06:53:16 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 09, 2009, 06:41:17 AM
Bahut Bahut Bahut Shukriya Abd Saheb ji..JO Aapne Iss Kalaam Ko Apna Keemti waqt Diya..Teh dil Se shukriya Aapka Saheb icon_salut

Aur Bahut Bahut Khoob Abd Saheb ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Chalte Chalo Rukho Nahi,
Ab Bas Karo Khud Par Aitbaar,
Chalne Par Hi Manzil Milti Hai
Sochne Wala bas Karte reh jaata Hai Intezaar

Thanks khwaish ji! You're welcome!

Panchhee! Ab aagey badho:
Barhh jaayegee bheerh!
Sammukh neelaakaash hai;
Kshitij paar hai neerh!!

               - 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #10 on: August 09, 2009, 07:00:45 AM »
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Bahut khoob khwaish ji... zindagi me aage badhne ke liye kabhi kabhi kuch na kuch samjhauta to karna hi hai...tab hi insaan khush khud rah sakta dusron ko bhi khush rakh sakta hai...bahut hi acha likha aap ne...
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«Reply #11 on: August 09, 2009, 07:01:11 AM »
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Thanks khwaish ji! You're welcome!

Panchhee! Ab aagey badho:
Barhh jaayegee bheerh!
Sammukh neelaakaash hai;
Kshitij paar hai neerh!!

               - 'Ramwatiya'




Bahut Khoob Abdsahebji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Eh Dil,Ab Himmat Naa Haar,
Woh Dekh Manzil Hai Uss Paar!!
Jo Chal Sake Yeh Kadam To phir Darr Kis Baat Ka,
Aane De Saamne Ab Har Mushkil Ko,
Ab Hum Bhi Hai Taiyaar..
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bahut khoob abd ji...
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«Reply #13 on: August 09, 2009, 07:10:34 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on August 08, 2009, 12:57:25 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause bahot bahot khoob likha hai
Khwaish ji,hamesha ki tarah bahot umda

raah raahi manzil sab aadmi hi hota khud hi hota hai
phir bhi aadmi zindagi bhar chalta hai,safar karta hai


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaashji..Aur Sach Kahan Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Raah,Raahi,Manzil Yeh Sab
Aadmi ke Hi Bass Mein Hota hai!!
Chalte To hum sab Hai,
Par Manzil tak Pahunchne Ka Junoon!!!!
Bahut Kam Dilon mein Hota Hai..
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very beautiful gazal Khwaish ji,bahut khoob mindblwing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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