Zindagi Ek Safar - "Khwaish"

by khwaish on February 11, 2010, 12:32:48 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 19, 2010, 12:48:13 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 11, 2010, 12:32:48 PM

Zindagi Ka Har Lamha Kuch Yuh Guzra,
Ke woh Beete Pal Mujhe Yaad Aaye Bahut!!!!

Daud raha Hoon Main Ab Tez Raftaar Mein,
Ek umar Thi Jab Yeh Kadam Ladkadaye Bahut!!!!

Badhti Umar Ke Saath Ab Aur Dard Saha Nahi jaata,
Ek Waqt Aisa Bhi Tah Jab Hum Chot khaakar Bhi Muskraaye Bahut!!!!

Jaane kis Raah,Kis Mod Par Bichadhte Gaye Kuch Log,
Iss Veeran Safar Mein Akela Hoon par Saath Mein Hai Saaye Bahut!!!!!

Har Koi Yahan Apne Hisse Ki Dastaan Suunakar Chale Jaata Hai!!
"Eh Chalte Hue Musafir!! Kabhi meri bhi Suun!!"
Hum par Bhi Waqt Ne Zulm Dhaaye Bahut!!!

Ek Woh Shaks Jo Humesha Hasta-Muskurata Tha,
Jab Kareeb Se Usse Jaana,TO Hairaan Hoon,
Usne Bhi Zindagi mein Apni Zakhm Khaaye Bahut!!!

Kuch Dost Aise Bhi The Jinhe Main Meri Veeraniyon Mein Dhoondhta Raha!!!
Jo Kabhi Mere Jashn-e-Mehfilon Mein Nazar Aaye Bahut!!!!!

"Khwaish" Yeh Duniya Hai Aur  Yehi Duniyadaari!!!
Woh shaks Har Ek Ka Dost hai,Jisne Sohrat Ki Seedi par Apne Kadam Jamaaye Bahut!!!

Kisi Se Mujhe Koi Gila-Shikwa Nahi Kyonki Yehi Sach hai!!!!
"Khwaish" Jab Khud Ko Aaene Mein Dekhta Hai,
Apne Andar Bhi Usne Bhed Paaye Bahut!!!!!

                      ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Khwaish ji!
Leek (Urdu Classical Gazal kee) sey hat kar kiyaa gayaa gazal kaa yah 'prayog' swaagat yogya hai! Aapney apney man ki baat kahney mein kaheen bhi koyee kotaahee nahin ki hai!

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«Reply #16 on: February 20, 2010, 02:34:04 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on February 11, 2010, 03:49:24 PM
Sach mein khwaish ji.......dil ki gehrai mein utar gayi aapki ye rachna....khud ko aaina dikhana bahut mushkil hota hai...uss se bhi mushkil apne andar chipe bhed ko dekhna.....bakhubi sach ko pradarshit kiya aapne.....
bahut khoob... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thankyou Sooooooooooooooooo Much Pooja..

Aapko yeh rachna Itni Pasand Aayi,Yeh Jaankar Bahut Bahut Khushi Hui Mujhe..

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«Reply #17 on: February 22, 2010, 10:50:27 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on February 11, 2010, 04:20:41 PM
EK UMAR THI KI KADAM BAHUT LADKHARAYE ......... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause GOOD KHAWAISH JI

Bahut Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sheba Ji jo Aapne Itna pasand Farmaya..

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: February 26, 2010, 03:23:15 PM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 12, 2010, 10:02:25 AM
Bahut Hi Khubsurat Likha Hai Khwaish Ji Aapne ApplauseApplause

Thankyou Soooo Much rishi Ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: February 26, 2010, 04:01:11 PM »
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 Applause Applause excelent bro.....dil ke behad kareeb mahsoos hui ye rachna..ek baar fir se aapne beeti hui kai baaten yaad dila di....
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«Reply #20 on: February 26, 2010, 04:06:51 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on February 26, 2010, 04:01:11 PM
Applause Applause excelent bro.....dil ke behad kareeb mahsoos hui ye rachna..ek baar fir se aapne beeti hui kai baaten yaad dila di....

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sanjeev Bro..Iss rachna Ko Padhte Waqt,Woh Jazbaaton Ko Woh insaan Zaroor Mehsoos Kar sakta Hai Jo kabhi Iss Daur Se Guzara Ho..Aapne Apna waqt Diya Yeh Bahut Hai Mere Liye..

Kaash, AAPKI BHI Kalam Yahan Kuch Likhde...

Thankyou Soooooooooooooooo Much For Appreciating Bro.. notworthy
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«Reply #21 on: March 06, 2010, 10:38:39 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 12, 2010, 11:30:35 AM
bahut khoob likha hai Khwaish ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut achi soch ke saath,nice poem  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaashji Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: March 18, 2010, 05:22:22 PM »
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bahut achhi peshkash khwaishji.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tum to chal diye rahon mein chod ke.
Tumhaara sath pakad ke hum pachtaye bahut.
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«Reply #23 on: April 17, 2010, 07:30:03 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on February 12, 2010, 11:51:15 AM
Bahut khoob Khwaish ji,sach mein dil ko chu gayi aapke gazal.lovely creation.excellent.hats off .keep it up

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«Reply #24 on: July 24, 2011, 09:38:22 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 19, 2010, 12:48:13 PM

Khwaish ji!
Leek (Urdu Classical Gazal kee) sey hat kar kiyaa gayaa gazal kaa yah 'prayog' swaagat yogya hai! Aapney apney man ki baat kahney mein kaheen bhi koyee kotaahee nahin ki hai!

                        - abd bundeli
 

Abd Aapka bahut Bahut Shukriya...

Aapke Comments Hi Apne-Aap mein Ek Inaam se kam Nahi..Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Bahut Bahut Shukriya Saheb!!! icon_flower
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«Reply #25 on: March 11, 2012, 08:50:12 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 11, 2010, 12:32:48 PM
Yeh Kalaam Ek Insaan Ke Safar Ko darshaati hai..
Yeh Kalaam Ek kahani hai ke badhti umar ke saath Insaan Ki Soch,
Uski samaj Kaise Badalti hai, Woh Kaise-kaise Halaat Se Guzarta hai,
Woh Duniya Ko Aur Duniya Ke Logon ko Ab kis Nazar Se Dekhta Hai..
Umeed Karta Hoon jin Jazbaaton mein aakar main yeh Kalaam likh raha hoon..
Woh jazbaat,Woh ehsaas Aapke bhi zehan ko chuu sake..


Zindagi Ka Har Lamha Kuch Yuh Guzra,
Ke woh Beete Pal Mujhe Yaad Aaye Bahut!!!!

Daud raha Hoon Main Ab Tez Raftaar Mein,
Ek umar Thi Jab Yeh Kadam Ladkadaye Bahut!!!!

Badhti Umar Ke Saath Ab Aur Dard Saha Nahi jaata,
Ek Waqt Aisa Bhi Tah Jab Hum Chot khaakar Bhi Muskraaye Bahut!!!!

Jaane kis Raah,Kis Mod Par Bichadhte Gaye Kuch Log,
Iss Veeran Safar Mein Akela Hoon par Saath Mein Hai Saaye Bahut!!!!!

Har Koi Yahan Apne Hisse Ki Dastaan Suunakar Chale Jaata Hai!!
"Eh Chalte Hue Musafir!! Kabhi meri bhi Suun!!"
Hum par Bhi Waqt Ne Zulm Dhaaye Bahut!!!

Ek Woh Shaks Jo Humesha Hasta-Muskurata Tha,
Jab Kareeb Se Usse Jaana,TO Hairaan Hoon,
Usne Bhi Zindagi mein Apni Zakhm Khaaye Bahut!!!

Kuch Dost Aise Bhi The Jinhe Main Meri Veeraniyon Mein Dhoondhta Raha!!!
Jo Kabhi Mere Jashn-e-Mehfilon Mein Nazar Aaye Bahut!!!!!

"Khwaish" Yeh Duniya Hai Aur  Yehi Duniyadaari!!!
Woh shaks Har Ek Ka Dost hai,Jisne Sohrat Ki Seedi par Apne Kadam Jamaaye Bahut!!!

Kisi Se Mujhe Koi Gila-Shikwa Nahi Kyonki Yehi Sach hai!!!!
"Khwaish" Jab Khud Ko Aaene Mein Dekhta Hai,
Apne Andar Bhi Usne Bhed Paaye Bahut!!!!!

                      ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #26 on: March 11, 2012, 12:34:43 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on February 26, 2010, 04:01:11 PM
Applause Applause excelent bro.....dil ke behad kareeb mahsoos hui ye rachna..ek baar fir se aapne beeti hui kai baaten yaad dila di....


Sanjeev Bro Aapne waqt diya..yehi bahut hai mere liye..

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«Reply #27 on: August 01, 2012, 08:50:08 PM »
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dost bht aala....

dard hy dil me...
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