Zindagi Mein Sabse Mushkil Hai Kisi Ka Kisi Par Aitbaar Karna..

by khwaish on July 16, 2009, 03:49:51 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 21, 2009, 06:11:32 AM »
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Har lafj khub,bahut pyare jajbaat....bahut bahut behtrin likha hai aapne khwaish ji....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

       Fakr use bhi hoga,jiske saath har raah par chalta hai tu
       Khushnasib hai wo,jo uski itni kadar karta hai tu

       Khuda kare yu hi chalte rahe kadam aitbaar ki raahon par
       Khushiyan rahe sada uske daaman me,Jiske liye har pal dua karta hai tu


Thankyou Sooooooooooooo Much Dear Friend!!!!

Aapki Inn Duayon Ke Liye Dil-O-Jaan Se Shukriya Dost!!!

Aur Bhaut Hi Khoob Andaaz Mein Aapne Yeh Duayon Di..

Bahut Bhaut Khooob Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #16 on: July 21, 2009, 04:30:31 PM »
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Wow Khwaish ji,kitni bhi tareef karu kam hogi, icon_scratch
mindblwing,excellent,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
very beautiful lines by Kaash ji,Popp ji,Dbd ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause

Thanks A Million Madhuji...

Thanky You Soooo Much Dear For Always Reading and Appreciating!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: July 21, 2009, 04:43:22 PM »
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Bahut Khoob!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriyaa...

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«Reply #18 on: July 22, 2009, 04:18:01 AM »
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wah wah Khwaish Ji

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sarveshji..

A Comment By You Always Inspires Me To Write Better..Thankyou Sir!!
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«Reply #19 on: July 22, 2009, 04:19:33 AM »
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Zindagi Apni Has Kar Basar Karte Hai!!
Nafraton Ke Raaston par Naa Safar Karte Hai...

Woh Log Aur Honge Jinhe Apne Humsaaya Par Bhi Yakeen Nahi!!!
Tu Saath Hai mere!! Hum To Bas issi baat Pe Khud Par Fakr Karte Hai....

Toot Jaate Hai Woh Ghar Jinki Deewarein Mazboot Naa Ho!!
Zindagi Ke Har Kadam Par Khud Se Zyaada Yakeen Hum Tujh Par karte Hai...

Mohabbat Gehri Tab Hoti Hai Jab Hum kisi Ke Gham ko Apnana Seekhle!!
Sirf Teri Muskaan Ka Khaayal Nahi Hoon Main!!!
Teri Aankh Se Gire Hue Ashko Ki Bhi Hum Kadar Karte Hai....

Tujhse Door Rehte Hai par Tujhse Juda Kabhi Ho Nahi Sakte!!
Har Pehar, Har Lamha  Hum teri Fikar Karte Hai....

Tere Har Dard-0-Gham Ka Ilaaj hai Paas Mere!!!
Suna Hai, Dawaon Se Zyaada Duawein Asar Karte Hai....

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai ke Zindagi Mein sabse Mushkil Hai,
Kisi Ka Kisi Par "Aitbaar" Karna!!!
Jo Naa Samaj Sake Iss Jazbaat Ko,
Woh Naa Jaane,Apne Mohabbat Ka Kya Hashar Karte Hai....

             ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Nice creation Khwaish bhaiya  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #20 on: July 22, 2009, 04:20:55 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahot khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji

apni ghazal me aapne dard mohabbat aur zindagi
sabhi se mutallik ashaar rahke hain
aur bahot umda likha hai

kuch koshish kar rahe hain likhne ki
ummeed hai pasand aaye

zindagi me zindagi jeene ko zindagi kahte hain
manzilon ke safar hi raahon me asar rakhte hain


dard ko dard samajh len hum to alag baat hai
varna to dard haqeeqat me nahi zahar rakhte hain

zindagi me mushkil hai yun to dost aitbaar karna
par zindagi ke tasalsul bharose se hi peher karte hain

mohabbat to khamoshi aur uski raanayiyun me gum rahti
Khumaari ke mausam to shab ko bhi sahar kahte hain


Nice Gazal @Kaash ji  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #21 on: July 22, 2009, 04:22:44 AM »
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Har lafj khub,bahut pyare jajbaat....bahut bahut behtrin likha hai aapne khwaish ji....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

       Fakr use bhi hoga,jiske saath har raah par chalta hai tu
       Khushnasib hai wo,jo uski itni kadar karta hai tu

       Khuda kare yu hi chalte rahe kadam aitbaar ki raahon par
       Khushiyan rahe sada uske daaman me,Jiske liye har pal dua karta hai tu


Wah wah Pop  Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: July 26, 2009, 12:02:27 PM »
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Khwaish Dost, Bohot bohot khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot achcha likha hai.......aur usse zyada khoobsurat wo jazba hai jo is shayari main nazar aata hai.......!

Khaas kar ye lines bohot pasand aayi hume"

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai ke Zindagi Mein sabse Mushkil Hai,
Kisi Ka Kisi Par "Aitbaar" Karna!!!
Jo Naa Samaj Sake Iss Jazbaat Ko,
Woh Naa Jaane,Apne Mohabbat Ka Kya Hashar Karte Hai....


Bohot khoob Dost.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Dost!!!!

Apne Uss jazbaat Ko Samjha, Yeh Jaankar Behad Khushi hui Hai Talat!!!

Thankyou Soooooooo Much Dost!!! icon_flower
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«Reply #23 on: July 28, 2009, 05:12:48 PM »
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BOhat Khoob KHwaish Bhai,.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem..
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«Reply #24 on: August 16, 2009, 05:52:06 PM »
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khoob kaha khwaish sahab bhut khoob

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Aslamji..
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«Reply #25 on: August 16, 2009, 06:31:54 PM »
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Zindagi Apni Has Kar Basar Karte Hai!!
Nafraton Ke Raaston par Naa Safar Karte Hai...

Woh Log Aur Honge Jinhe Apne Humsaaya Par Bhi Yakeen Nahi!!!
Tu Saath Hai mere!! Hum To Bas issi baat Pe Khud Par Fakr Karte Hai....

Toot Jaate Hai Woh Ghar Jinki Deewarein Mazboot Naa Ho!!
Zindagi Ke Har Kadam Par Khud Se Zyaada Yakeen Hum Tujh Par karte Hai...

Mohabbat Gehri Tab Hoti Hai Jab Hum kisi Ke Gham ko Apnana Seekhle!!
Sirf Teri Muskaan Ka Khaayal Nahi Hoon Main!!!
Teri Aankh Se Gire Hue Ashko Ki Bhi Hum Kadar Karte Hai....

Tujhse Door Rehte Hai par Tujhse Juda Kabhi Ho Nahi Sakte!!
Har Pehar, Har Lamha  Hum teri Fikar Karte Hai....

Tere Har Dard-0-Gham Ka Ilaaj hai Paas Mere!!!
Suna Hai, Dawaon Se Zyaada Duawein Asar Karte Hai....

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai ke Zindagi Mein sabse Mushkil Hai,
Kisi Ka Kisi Par "Aitbaar" Karna!!!
Jo Naa Samaj Sake Iss Jazbaat Ko,
Woh Naa Jaane,Apne Mohabbat Ka Kya Hashar Karte Hai....

             ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


bahoot khoob Khwaish ji... her ek line kamal ki hai magar yah teen line superbbb

Mohabbat Gehri Tab Hoti Hai Jab Hum kisi Ke Gham ko Apnana Seekhle!!
Sirf Teri Muskaan Ka Khaayal Nahi Hoon Main!!!
Teri Aankh Se Gire Hue Ashko Ki Bhi Hum Kadar Karte Hai...
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«Reply #26 on: August 19, 2009, 02:02:00 PM »
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Zindagi Apni Has Kar Basar Karte Hai!!
Nafraton Ke Raaston par Naa Safar Karte Hai...

Woh Log Aur Honge Jinhe Apne Humsaaya Par Bhi Yakeen Nahi!!!
Tu Saath Hai mere!! Hum To Bas issi baat Pe Khud Par Fakr Karte Hai....

Toot Jaate Hai Woh Ghar Jinki Deewarein Mazboot Naa Ho!!
Zindagi Ke Har Kadam Par Khud Se Zyaada Yakeen Hum Tujh Par karte Hai...

Mohabbat Gehri Tab Hoti Hai Jab Hum kisi Ke Gham ko Apnana Seekhle!!
Sirf Teri Muskaan Ka Khaayal Nahi Hoon Main!!!
Teri Aankh Se Gire Hue Ashko Ki Bhi Hum Kadar Karte Hai....

Tujhse Door Rehte Hai par Tujhse Juda Kabhi Ho Nahi Sakte!!
Har Pehar, Har Lamha  Hum teri Fikar Karte Hai....

Tere Har Dard-0-Gham Ka Ilaaj hai Paas Mere!!!
Suna Hai, Dawaon Se Zyaada Duawein Asar Karte Hai....

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai ke Zindagi Mein sabse Mushkil Hai,
Kisi Ka Kisi Par "Aitbaar" Karna!!!
Jo Naa Samaj Sake Iss Jazbaat Ko,
Woh Naa Jaane,Apne Mohabbat Ka Kya Hashar Karte Hai....

             ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Beautifully written Khwaish Ji..

Sorry kaafi der se reply kar rahi hooon. sad5

But as usual its mindblowing Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #27 on: August 19, 2009, 02:03:47 PM »
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Tere Labon Par Muskaan Rahe,
Zindagi Tujh Par Asaan Rahe

Khushian Hon Saath Tere Har Pal,
Har Ghum Tujh Se Anjaan Rahe

Har Chaah Teri Yoon Poori Ho,
Na Dil Main Koi Armaan Rahe

Tere Hathon Main Rahe Hath UsKa,
Ghar Tera Haseen Gulistaan Rahe





Lovely lines Talat Applause
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«Reply #28 on: August 21, 2009, 05:21:47 PM »
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Tere Labon Par Muskaan Rahe,
Zindagi Tujh Par Asaan Rahe

Khushian Hon Saath Tere Har Pal,
Har Ghum Tujh Se Anjaan Rahe

Har Chaah Teri Yoon Poori Ho,
Na Dil Main Koi Armaan Rahe

Tere Hathon Main Rahe Hath UsKa,
Ghar Tera Haseen Gulistaan Rahe





Teh Dil Se Shukriya Dost!!! Khush-Kismat hai Woh Shaks Jinhe Aap jaisa Dost mile..Teh dil se shukriya Aapki Di Hui Duayon ka..


Teri Dua Saath Ho to Hum bas Muskurate Rahenge,
Har Mushkil Raah Ko Asaan Banate Rahenge...

Ladunga Kuch iss Kadar har Halaat Se,
Ke Aandhiyon mein bhi Hum Apna Ghar Sajate Rahenge...

Khushiyan Hi Khushiyan Ho uske Daaman Mein!!!
Kuch iss Kadar Hum Unhe Apne Palkon par Bithaate Rahenge...

Main Yeh nahi Kehta Ke saath Mere Zindagi ka Yeh Safar Asaan Hoga!!!
Par jahan Rabb ki Beinteha Rehmat Ho Aur Aap Jaise Dost Ki Duayen!!!
To inn Mushkilo Se Kya Darna, Yeh to Aate-Jaate Rahenge....

Eh Dost, "Talat", Yeh Zindagi ki Haqeeat Hai Ke Aaj Ke daur mein
Duayen Bhi Woh Shaks Deta Hai jis Dil Aaene Ki Tarah Saaf Ho!!!!
Teri Dosti Ke Aage Hum APna Sar Jhukaate Rahenge.....

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«Reply #29 on: August 21, 2009, 05:38:01 PM »
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Thanks so much Angel
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