आपको महफि़ल में आये इक ज़माना हो गया

by Krishna Sukumar on March 26, 2015, 07:23:39 AM
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आपको  महफि़ल  में आये  इक ज़माना हो गया
फ़ासलों को, क्या बहुत मुश्किल  मिटाना हो गया
 
छोड़ दे  अब  दोस्ती, वादे, वफ़ा कुछ और कर
यह चलन  इस  दौर  में  बेहद पुराना हो गया
 
जि़न्दगी ने  प्यार से की  आँसुओं  की परवरिश
दिल ग़मों का  मुस्तकि़ल  शाही ख़ज़ाना हो गया
 
इक तरन्नुम जि़न्दगी को  वक़्त  ऐसी  दे गया
आज रोना हो गया,  कल  मुस्कुराना  हो गया
 
यूँ  हुआ,  नज़्दीकियाँ  बर्दाश्त  से  बाहर हुईं
फ़ासला  तो  और भी मुश्किल निभाना हो गया
 
जो  मेरे  अपने  थे उनको  शुक्रिया कहते हुए
रख के मैं कांधों पे दुःख घर से रवाना हो गया
 
ज़ख़्म तो  पहले  ही  दीवाने  थे मेरे नाम के
उन ही दीवानों का अब  मैं ख़ुद दीवाना हो गया
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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2015, 07:53:36 AM »
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बहुत खूब एक शानदार ग़ज़ल के साथ बहुत दिनों के बाद वापसी बहुत बहुत स्वागत
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«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2015, 09:20:30 AM »
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bhai waah
kya baat hai...
iss shandaar ghazal ke liye RAU haazir hai
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«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2015, 06:09:57 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2015, 11:52:46 PM »
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bahut hee sunder ghazal hai Krishna Sukumar Jee, dheroooN dheroooooooN daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad.
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Krisna sukumar saheb,

 kiyaaaaa baaaaaaaaaat hai , bahut hi umdaaaaaaaaaa ghazal kahi hai, is nayaab aur meyari ghazal per meri taraf se eyk rau aur purkhuloos daad qubool farmayein.
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