इलज़ाम न ले...अमित प्रकाश "मीत"

by amit_prakash_meet on July 21, 2012, 11:53:40 AM
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ये यार तू तो मेरे सब्र का इम्तिहान न ले
दुनिया से ठुकराया हुआ तेरे पास आया हूँ
इनकार न कर, अब तो मेरा दामन थाम ले  |

तेरी महफ़िल में तो दिलजले ही आते हैं
फ़कत एक टूटा दिल लेकर मैं भी आया हूँ
पनाह दे इसे दिल में, कोई और नाम न ले |

संगदिल है ये दुनिया संगदिल था वो सनम
किस तरह से जाने दामन बचाकर आया हूँ
पियूँगा सिर्फ निगाहों से, हाथों में अब जाम न ले |

न अपनाया अब भी तो हो जाऊँगा मैं फना
छोड़ सब कुछ तेरी ही पनाह में आया हूँ
अपना ले "मीत", सर पर ये इलज़ाम न ले |
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«Reply #1 on: July 21, 2012, 01:18:05 PM »
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Bahut khoob Amit jee
Khoob likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #2 on: July 21, 2012, 01:30:59 PM »
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bahut khoob Amit ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 21, 2012, 03:22:14 PM »
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bahut hi umda aur lajawab qalaam dhero daad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2012, 03:14:02 AM »
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Bahut acche janaab
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2012, 08:29:29 AM »
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bahut achcha likha hai aap ne ....
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2012, 10:20:50 AM »
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Bahut khoob Amit jee
Khoob likha hai aapne.
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Thanks a lot MKV ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2012, 11:03:18 AM »
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bahut khoob Amit ji
Thanks a lot Saini Ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2012, 10:11:13 AM »
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bahut hi umda aur lajawab qalaam dhero daad aur mubarakbaad
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
many many thanks Soudagar Ji
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«Reply #9 on: July 23, 2012, 10:36:59 AM »
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Bahut acche janaab
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bahut bahut shukriya janaab
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«Reply #10 on: July 23, 2012, 02:46:53 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Amit ji...!!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 24, 2012, 11:53:29 AM »
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bahut achcha likha hai aap ne ....
Thanks a lot Gaytri Ji
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«Reply #12 on: July 24, 2012, 12:24:45 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Amit ji...!!!
Thanks a lot Hriday Ji
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