उनकी मजबुरी

by suman59 on August 06, 2012, 02:39:56 AM
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उनकी  मजबुरी  के  घाव  गहरे  है ,
उनकी  सांसों  पे  भी   पहरे  है
कोई देख ना ले ये सोच के कहीं
अश्क आंखों में ही ठहरे है
आखिर किसे सुनायें दिल का दर्द
करीब है जो वो तो बहरे हैं
जिंदगी को महकाते रहे
याद़ों के पल बड़े सुनहरे हैं
किस पे करे ऐतबार जहां में
नकाब में छुपे हर चेहरे हैं   
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2012, 02:55:12 AM »
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Nice Suman Ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2012, 03:07:59 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on August 06, 2012, 02:39:56 AM
उनकी  मजबुरी  के  घाव  गहरे  है ,
उनकी  सांसों  पे  भी   पहरे  है
कोई देख ना ले ये सोच के कहीं
अश्क आंखों में ही ठहरे है
आखिर किसे सुनायें दिल का दर्द
करीब है जो वो तो बहरे हैं
जिंदगी को महकाते रहे
याद़ों के पल बड़े सुनहरे हैं
किस पे करे ऐतबार जहां में
नकाब में छुपे हर चेहरे हैं   
acchi dil ko choo lene vaali ghajal hai.
kuch arz karne ki jurrat kar raha hun

naqaab hata do yahee kaha tha hamne
aitbaar hampe unhe gawaanra nahee tha
majboor dil ko kar gaye, jise yakeen tha
ki hamare siwa koi unhe pyara nahi tha
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2012, 04:18:02 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2012, 05:26:49 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2012, 05:49:29 AM »
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wah kya khoob kaha hai
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2012, 08:03:01 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on August 06, 2012, 02:39:56 AM
उनकी  मजबुरी  के  घाव  गहरे  है ,
उनकी  सांसों  पे  भी   पहरे  है
कोई देख ना ले ये सोच के कहीं
अश्क आंखों में ही ठहरे है
आखिर किसे सुनायें दिल का दर्द
करीब है जो वो तो बहरे हैं
जिंदगी को महकाते रहे
याद़ों के पल बड़े सुनहरे हैं
किस पे करे ऐतबार जहां में
नकाब में छुपे हर चेहरे हैं   


naaaaaaaaaaaaaaice.!

                         
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2012, 10:31:04 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar Suman ji...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2012, 12:12:13 AM »
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 Applause
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dil manta nahi chah panpti hai..sab kuch majbori hai Suman ji.Badhai bahut khoob likte hai ap ki kalam
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2012, 03:19:48 PM »
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nihayat hi khoobsurat ghazal, beautiful
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«Reply #11 on: August 15, 2012, 04:36:10 AM »
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umda

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Quote from: suman59 on August 06, 2012, 02:39:56 AM
उनकी  मजबुरी  के  घाव  गहरे  है ,
उनकी  सांसों  पे  भी   पहरे  है
कोई देख ना ले ये सोच के कहीं
अश्क आंखों में ही ठहरे है
आखिर किसे सुनायें दिल का दर्द
करीब है जो वो तो बहरे हैं
जिंदगी को महकाते रहे
याद़ों के पल बड़े सुनहरे हैं
किस पे करे ऐतबार जहां में
नकाब में छुपे हर चेहरे हैं   
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on August 06, 2012, 02:55:12 AM
Nice Suman Ji

tks sanjeev jee
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«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2012, 10:01:10 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on August 06, 2012, 03:07:59 AM
acchi dil ko choo lene vaali ghajal hai.
kuch arz karne ki jurrat kar raha hun

naqaab hata do yahee kaha tha hamne
aitbaar hampe unhe gawaanra nahee tha
majboor dil ko kar gaye, jise yakeen tha
ki hamare siwa koi unhe pyara nahi tha



wah kya baat hai... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: August 31, 2012, 10:02:06 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on August 06, 2012, 04:18:02 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


 Usual Smile Usual Smile notworthy
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