उनकी यादों के जब /Unkee yaadoN ke jab..................SAINI

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उनकी  यादों के जब क़ाफ़िले तन्हा दिल के क़रीब आ गए |

इक  समुंदर  की  मानिंद तब अश्क़ पलकों पे लहरा गए ||


नाख़ुदा  भी   परेशान  था   क़श्ती  भी  डगमगाती  रही |

देख साहिल पे उनकी झलक हम तो तूफाँ से  टकरा  गए ||


हमसे  मीठी  सी  तक़रार  में  बारहा  अपने  इन्कार  में |

जीत कर जब वो इतरा उठे हार का  हम  मज़ा  पा  गए ||
 

चांदनी  रात  में  आ  गए  वो  अचानक   हुए  बेनक़ाब |

झट  से  मुरझा  गई  चांदनी  चाँद  तारें  भी घबरा गए ||


वो  हमें  आज़माते  गए  हम   भी  देते   रहे   इम्तिहाँ |

वो ये समझे हम उकता गए हम ये समझे वो बाज़ आ गए ||



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Unkee yaadoN  ke  jab  qafile  taNhaa  dilke  qareeb  aa gaye.
Ik  samunder  kee manind  tab  ashq  palkoN  pe  lahraa  gaye.

Naakhudaa bhee pareshaan  thaa qashtee bhee dagmagaatee rahee.
Dekh  saahil  pe  unkee  jhalak ham to toofaaN se takraa gaye.

Hamse  meethee  see  taqraar  meN  baaraha  apne  inkaar  meN.
Jeet  kar  jab  vo  itraa  uthe  haar  kaa ham mazaa paa gaye.

Chaandnee   raat   meN  aa  gaye  vo  achaanak  hue  benaqaab.
Jhat se murjhaa gai chaandnee chaand taareN bhee ghabraa gaye.

Vo   hame   aazmaate   gaye   ham  bhee  dete  rahe  imtihaaN.
Vo  ye samjhe  ham  uktaa  gaye ham ye samjhe vo baaz aa gaye.

Dr. Surendra Saini
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«Reply #1 on: October 31, 2011, 05:39:13 AM »
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sksaini4 ji,

Waah waah janab bahut khoob
maza aa gaya, aapki ghazal padhkar.

Har she'r achchha hai.

Shubhkaamnaaye aapke saath hain.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #2 on: October 31, 2011, 06:57:45 AM »
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Wah Wah Saini Saheb Such mein MAza Aa Gaya

Chha Gaye Sir, Bahut Khoob BAhut Khoob
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 31, 2011, 07:54:31 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2011, 09:28:14 AM »
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satish ji bahut bahut dhanyawaad aapne saraahaa kahnaa kaamyaab huaa
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2011, 09:29:37 AM »
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kaash ji jis dhang se tareef ki bahut shukriyaa.
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2011, 09:31:02 AM »
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thank you very much Pranshshar ji
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2011, 09:40:35 AM »
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उनकी  यादों के जब क़ाफ़िले तन्हा दिल के क़रीब आ गए |

इक  समुंदर  की  मानिंद तब अश्क़ पलकों पे लहरा गए ||


नाख़ुदा  भी   परेशान  था   क़श्ती  भी  डगमगाती  रही |

देख साहिल पे उनकी झलक हम तो तूफाँ से  टकरा  गए ||


हमसे  मीठी  सी  तक़रार  में  बारहा  अपने  इन्कार  में |

जीत कर जब वो इतरा उठे हार का  हम  मज़ा  पा  गए ||
 

चांदनी  रात  में  आ  गए  वो  अचानक   हुए  बेनक़ाब |

झट  से  मुरझा  गई  चांदनी  चाँद  तारें  भी घबरा गए ||


वो  हमें  आज़माते  गए  हम   भी  देते   रहे   इम्तिहाँ |

वो ये समझे हम उकता गए हम ये समझे वो बाज़ आ गए ||



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Unkee yaadoN  ke  jab  qafile  taNhaa  dilke  qareeb  aa gaye.
Ik  samunder  kee manind  tab  ashq  palkoN  pe  lahraa  gaye.  Applause Applause

Naakhudaa bhee pareshaan  thaa qashtee bhee dagmagaatee rahee.
Dekh  saahil  pe  unkee  jhalak ham to toofaaN se takraa gaye.  Applause  Applause

Hamse  meethee  see  taqraar  meN  baaraha  apne  inkaar  meN.
Jeet  kar  jab  vo  itraa  uthe  haar  kaa ham mazaa paa gaye.   Applause

Chaandnee   raat   meN  aa  gaye  vo  achaanak  hue  benaqaab.
Jhat se murjhaa gai chaandnee chaand taareN bhee ghabraa gaye. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Vo   hame   aazmaate   gaye   ham  bhee  dete  rahe  imtihaaN.
Vo  ye samjhe  ham  uktaa  gaye ham ye samjhe vo baaz aa gaye. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Dr. Surendra Saini


Bahut khoob Saini sahab
Vo hame ajmate gaye... kya khoob baya.n kiya hai..bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2011, 11:05:06 AM »
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mukesh ji gazal pasand aayee bahut bahut shukriyaa. isi trah himmat badhaate rahiye
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«Reply #9 on: October 31, 2011, 12:26:40 PM »
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bht bht khoob saini ji...
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«Reply #10 on: October 31, 2011, 02:49:55 PM »
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bahut sundar rachna hai,badhai .
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«Reply #11 on: October 31, 2011, 05:10:29 PM »
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 Wah! Saini ji. Bahut umda. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: November 01, 2011, 03:45:07 AM »
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thanks manzil -eishq ji
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«Reply #13 on: November 01, 2011, 03:45:45 AM »
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thank you qais ji
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«Reply #14 on: November 01, 2011, 03:46:15 AM »
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thanks usha ji
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