किरदार को न देख

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 दौलत को देखना है तो दस्तार को न देख,
कुचलता जा सिरों को, रफ़्तार को न देख,

जज्बात का क्या मोल, सौदेबाजी में मियां,
जिस्म को ही तोल यहाँ किरदार को न देख,

हर इक गुनाह की काट है वाइज़ की जेब में,
गर्दन का कर ख़याल। तलवार को न देख,

रूखे-ए -हवा का कर ख़याल, ताक़त के साथ में,
मायूसियों में नाव की पतवार को न देख



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«Reply #1 on: December 04, 2012, 07:19:06 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on December 04, 2012, 06:39:44 PM
दौलत को देखना है तो दस्तार को न देख,
कुचलता जा सिरों को, रफ़्तार को न देख,

जज्बात का क्या मोल, सौदेबाजी में मियां,
जिस्म को ही तोल यहाँ किरदार को न देख,

हर इक गुनाह की काट है वाइज़ की जेब में,
गर्दन का कर ख़याल। तलवार को न देख,

रूखे-ए -हवा का कर ख़याल, ताक़त के साथ में,
मायूसियों में नाव की पतवार को न देख




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«Reply #2 on: December 04, 2012, 07:39:32 PM »
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रूखे-ए -हवा का कर ख़याल, ताक़त के साथ में,
मायूसियों में नाव की पतवार को न देख
Bahut Khoob  Applause Applause




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«Reply #3 on: December 05, 2012, 01:59:20 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: December 05, 2012, 04:35:46 AM »
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 bahut  achhi  ghazal  hai .
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«Reply #5 on: December 05, 2012, 04:40:18 AM »
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NICE LINES BEKARAR JI
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«Reply #6 on: December 05, 2012, 05:17:58 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: December 05, 2012, 08:34:40 AM »
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Bekaraar Sahaab Aadaab!



Kia baat hai janab bade dinoN baad badi hi achchi kalaam kahi
hai aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe janab bahut khoob behad
umdaa janab... Is khoob aur asardaar kalaam par humari dheroN
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«Reply #8 on: December 05, 2012, 08:38:29 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on December 04, 2012, 06:39:44 PM
दौलत को देखना है तो दस्तार को न देख,
कुचलता जा सिरों को, रफ़्तार को न देख,

जज्बात का क्या मोल, सौदेबाजी में मियां,
जिस्म को ही तोल यहाँ किरदार को न देख,

हर इक गुनाह की काट है वाइज़ की जेब में,
गर्दन का कर ख़याल। तलवार को न देख,

रूखे-ए -हवा का कर ख़याल, ताक़त के साथ में,
मायूसियों में नाव की पतवार को न देख

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«Reply #9 on: December 05, 2012, 09:22:40 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on December 04, 2012, 06:39:44 PM
दौलत को देखना है तो दस्तार को न देख,
कुचलता जा सिरों को, रफ़्तार को न देख,

जज्बात का क्या मोल, सौदेबाजी में मियां,
जिस्म को ही तोल यहाँ किरदार को न देख,

हर इक गुनाह की काट है वाइज़ की जेब में,
गर्दन का कर ख़याल। तलवार को न देख,

रूखे-ए -हवा का कर ख़याल, ताक़त के साथ में,
मायूसियों में नाव की पतवार को न देख






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Bahut bahut Khooooooooooob..!!!!!

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«Reply #10 on: December 05, 2012, 09:43:30 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: December 05, 2012, 10:09:34 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne.
mgar
"kuchalta ja siron ko,raftar ko na dekh"
zara achha an laga waise hi aaj kal la parwahi samaj men barh rahee hai. mera sochan sahi na ho to maaf kar deejeeyega 
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«Reply #12 on: December 05, 2012, 10:36:31 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai..khusoosan ye sher - 'jazbaat ka kya mol, saudebaazi me miyaan- jism ko hi hi tol, yahaan kirdaar ko na dekh'  bahut talkh haqeeqat bayaan karta hai!!
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«Reply #13 on: December 05, 2012, 10:39:22 AM »
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beautifully written
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Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on December 05, 2012, 10:09:34 AM
bahut khoob likha hai aapne.
mgar
"kuchalta ja siron ko,raftar ko na dekh"
zara achha an laga waise hi aaj kal la parwahi samaj men barh rahee hai. mera sochan sahi na ho to maaf kar deejeeyega  

Namaste bansi Ji...

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Iss mein Sanjeev Ji Ne Likha Hai Ke....

"Daulat Ko Dekhna Hai To Dastaar Ko Na Dekh
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Agar Sirf daulat Ko Paane Ki  Khwaish Rakhte Ho To Iss kadar Insaan Ko Aajkal Hona Padh Raha Hai..(Jo Ki Galat Hai) Par Shayar Ne Yahan Aaj Ke Halaat pesh Kiye Hai , Unn Halaat Ko sahee Thodi Naa Tehraaya hai..Woh To Ek Sach Ka Aaena Unhone Rakha Hai Jisse Woh Humein Aaj Ke Halaat  Rubaru Karwa Rahe Hai ..Jo Ki Har Shayar Shayad Apne Lafzon mein karwa Bhi Naa Sake..
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