किरदार को न देख -Panna 3:Ghazals

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«Reply #30 on: December 11, 2012, 10:18:06 AM »

Quote from: shara63 on December 05, 2012, 10:36:31 AM

bahut khoob likha hai..khusoosan ye sher - 'jazbaat ka kya mol, saudebaazi me miyaan- jism ko hi hi tol, yahaan kirdaar ko na dekh' bahut talkh haqeeqat bayaan karta hai!!

बहूत शुक्रिया शारा जी


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Re: किरदार को न देख

«Reply #31 on: December 11, 2012, 10:19:27 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on December 05, 2012, 10:39:22 AM

beautifully written

thanks aqsh ji


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Re: किरदार को न देख

«Reply #32 on: December 11, 2012, 10:20:47 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on December 05, 2012, 11:29:18 AM

Namaste bansi Ji...

Bansi Ji Aapne Iss Sher Ke Ehsaas Ko Shayad Sahee Tareeke se Nahi Samjha..

Iss mein Sanjeev Ji Ne Likha Hai Ke....

"Daulat Ko Dekhna Hai To Dastaar Ko Na Dekh
Kuchalta Jaa Siiro Ko, Raftaar Ko Na Dekh"

Agar Sirf daulat Ko Paane Ki Khwaish Rakhte Ho To Iss kadar Insaan Ko Aajkal Hona Padh Raha Hai..(Jo Ki Galat Hai) Par Shayar Ne Yahan Aaj Ke Halaat pesh Kiye Hai , Unn Halaat Ko sahee Thodi Naa Tehraaya hai..Woh To Ek Sach Ka Aaena Unhone Rakha Hai Jisse Woh Humein Aaj Ke Halaat Rubaru Karwa Rahe Hai ..Jo Ki Har Shayar Shayad Apne Lafzon mein karwa Bhi Naa Sake..

फिर से आभार भाई ख्वाहिश, समझाने की आपकी कोशिश लगता है कामयाब रही है,