किस सफ़र का ग़ुबार देखोगे....

by Anaarhi on November 24, 2012, 05:19:00 AM
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हिम्मतों में उतार देखोगे,
पस्त सब कोहसार देखोगे.
 
हमसफ़र मेरे का तो क्या कहना,
थक चुकी रहग़ुज़ार देखोगे.
 
ख़ाक ख़ाकी ये हो गई कैसे,
किस सफ़र का ग़ुबार देखोगे ?
 
जीत जाओगे जब भी अपनो से,
मुस्कुराती ही हार देखोगे.
 
सर्द रिश्तों की सूनी वादी में,
इक जमा आबशार* देखोगे.  (*= झरना)
 
ले तो जाए बुलंदी पर किस्मत,
पर टिके होशियार देखोगे.
 
वो हवा लग गई जवानी को,
शर्म भी शर्म सार देखोगे.
 
कौम की रहबरी करोगे 'परम',
तुम जो सदियों के पार देखोगे.
 
"परम" २४/११/२०१२
 
जब नयाँ इश्तिहार देखोगे,
इक नईं और दरार देखोगे.
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2012, 05:34:20 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
beautiful
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«Reply #2 on: November 24, 2012, 05:54:03 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut khoob dheron daad
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«Reply #3 on: November 24, 2012, 06:03:54 AM »
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हिम्मतों में उतार देखोगे,
पस्त सब कोहसार देखोगे.
 
हमसफ़र मेरे का तो क्या कहना,
थक चुकी रहग़ुज़ार देखोगे.
 
ख़ाक ख़ाकी ये हो गई कैसे,
किस सफ़र का ग़ुबार देखोगे ?
 
जीत जाओगे जब भी अपनो से,
मुस्कुराती ही हार देखोगे.
 
सर्द रिश्तों की सूनी वादी में,
इक जमा आबशार* देखोगे.  (*= झरना)
 
ले तो जाए बुलंदी पर किस्मत,
पर टिके होशियार देखोगे.
 
वो हवा लग गई जवानी को,
शर्म भी शर्म सार देखोगे.
 
कौम की रहबरी करोगे 'परम',
तुम जो सदियों के पार देखोगे.
 
"परम" २४/११/२०१२
 
जब नयाँ इश्तिहार देखोगे,
इक नईं और दरार देखोगे.



khubsurat kalaam,sir
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«Reply #4 on: November 24, 2012, 09:07:23 AM »
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Param Jee Aadaab!


Janab kia kahne aapke gehre aur umdaa khayaaloN ke
behad umdaa ashaaroN meiN dhala hai apne khoob khayaaloN
ko ... Sabhi ashaar behad umdaa rahe janab... Usual Smile


Is khoob gazal par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #5 on: November 24, 2012, 02:44:31 PM »
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bahut hi umda ghazal pesh kee hai aapne
ek se badhkar ek..ashaar
Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2012, 10:51:27 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #7 on: November 25, 2012, 10:53:46 AM »
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param sahab bahut behtareen, aage bhi yunhi apni rangat bikherte rahiye...
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«Reply #8 on: November 27, 2012, 02:52:23 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
beautiful
Shukriya Aqsh sahab...
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«Reply #9 on: November 27, 2012, 02:55:43 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 01, 2012, 08:41:08 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut khoob dheron daad
Tahe Dil se shukrguzaar hoon shiri S k Saini sahab.....
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«Reply #11 on: December 01, 2012, 01:05:18 PM »
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waah, bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal, daad kabool ki jiye
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«Reply #12 on: December 05, 2012, 07:20:34 AM »
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khubsurat kalaam,sir
Thanks ....Janaab
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«Reply #13 on: December 12, 2012, 05:56:06 AM »
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Param Jee Aadaab!


Janab kia kahne aapke gehre aur umdaa khayaaloN ke
behad umdaa ashaaroN meiN dhala hai apne khoob khayaaloN
ko ... Sabhi ashaar behad umdaa rahe janab... Usual Smile


Is khoob gazal par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile


tahe dil se shukeguzaar hoon janaab ParwaaZ sahab
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