कैसा कहर है.....अमित प्रकाश "मीत"

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ये कैसा सितम कैसा कहर है
इस रात की अब कहाँ सहर है

यहाँ साँस लेना मुश्किल बड़ा
इन फिजाओं में भरा ज़हर है

मौसम-ए-खिज़ां का है आलम
नदी नाला न कोई नहर है

बहारे आती नहीं यहाँ पर
इस ज़मीं पर न ख़ुदा की महर है

उमर-ए-तमाम कटेगी कैसे
अब कटता ना एक भी पहर है

अब तुम मानो चाहे न मानो
दिल में उठती उसी की लहर है

निकल जाना  नज़रें  चुराकर
क्या  यही  दस्तूर-ए-शहर  है

ग़ज़ल तो कहने लगे हैं “मीत”
न काफ़िया न रदीब न बहर है




Ye Kaisa Sitam Kaisa Kahar Hai
Is Raat Kee Ab Kahan Sahar Hai

Yahan Saans Lena Mushkil Bada
In Fijaaon Mein Bhara Zahar Hai

Mausam-e-Khizan Ka Hai Aalam
Nadi Nala Na Koi Nahar Hai

Baharen Aati  Nahi Yahan Par
Is Zamin Par N Khuda Kee Mahar Hai

Umar-E-Tammam Kategi Kaise
Ab Kata Na Ek Bhi Pahar Hai

Ab Tum Maano Chahe Na Maano
Dil Mein Uthti Usi Kee Lahar Hai

Nikal Jaana Nazerein Churakar
Kya Yahi Dastur-E-Shahar Hai

Ghazal To Kehne Lage Hain “Meet”
Na Kaafiya Na Radeeb Na Bahar Hai

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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2014, 02:33:29 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai. Bahut khoob.
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Wah Wah!!!! Kya Kehne!!!! La-Jawaab Ghazal!!! Mujhe aap ki yeh ghazal bohat bohat bohat hi pasand aayi hai. Har ek ashaar ek se bad kar ek hai aur meaningful hai.

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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2014, 03:49:37 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2014, 03:55:01 PM »
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Waah waah !!
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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2014, 04:07:58 PM »
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ये कैसा सितम कैसा कहर है
इस रात की अब कहाँ सहर है

यहाँ साँस लेना मुश्किल बड़ा
इन फिजाओं में भरा ज़हर है
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मौसम-ए-खिज़ां का है आलम
नदी नाला न कोई नहर है

बहारे आती नहीं यहाँ पर
इस ज़मीं पर न ख़ुदा की महर है
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चले गये हो तुम न जाने कहाँ
न कोई चिट्ठी न ही ख़बर है
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उमर-ए-तमाम कटेगी कैसे
अब कटता ना एक भी पहर है

अब तुम मानो चाहे न मानो
दिल में उठती उसी की लहर है

ग़ज़ल तो कहने लगे हैं “मीत”
न काफ़िया न रदीब न बहर है




Ye Kaisa Sitam Kaisa Kahar Hai
Is Raat Kee Ab Kahan Sahar Hai

Yahan Saans Lena Mushkil Bada
In Fijaaon Mein Bhara Zahar Hai

Mausam-e-Khizan Ka Hai Aalam
Nadi Nala Na Koi Nahar Hai

Baharen Aati  Nahi Yahan Par
Is Zamin Par N Khuda Kee Mahar Hai

Chale Gaye Ho Tum Na Jaane Kahan
Na Koi Chitthi Na Hi Khabar Hai

Umar-E-Tammam Kategi Kaise
Ab Kata Na Ek Bhi Pahar Hai

Ab Tum Maano Chahe Na Maano
Dil Mein Uthti Usi Kee Lahar Hai

Ghazal To Kehne Lage Hain “Meet”
Na Kaafiya Na Radeeb Na Bahar Hai


bahut khoob..
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«Reply #6 on: March 21, 2014, 04:34:42 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai. Bahut khoob.

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया सक्सेना जी.....
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«Reply #7 on: March 21, 2014, 05:53:54 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: March 21, 2014, 10:00:45 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2014, 10:04:59 PM »
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ये कैसा सितम कैसा कहर है
इस रात की अब कहाँ सहर है

यहाँ साँस लेना मुश्किल बड़ा
इन फिजाओं में भरा ज़हर है

मौसम-ए-खिज़ां का है आलम
नदी नाला न कोई नहर है

बहारे आती नहीं यहाँ पर
इस ज़मीं पर न ख़ुदा की महर है

चले गये हो तुम न जाने कहाँ
न कोई चिट्ठी न ही ख़बर है

उमर-ए-तमाम कटेगी कैसे
अब कटता ना एक भी पहर है

अब तुम मानो चाहे न मानो
दिल में उठती उसी की लहर है

ग़ज़ल तो कहने लगे हैं “मीत”
न काफ़िया न रदीब न बहर है




Ye Kaisa Sitam Kaisa Kahar Hai
Is Raat Kee Ab Kahan Sahar Hai

Yahan Saans Lena Mushkil Bada
In Fijaaon Mein Bhara Zahar Hai

Mausam-e-Khizan Ka Hai Aalam
Nadi Nala Na Koi Nahar Hai

Baharen Aati  Nahi Yahan Par
Is Zamin Par N Khuda Kee Mahar Hai

Chale Gaye Ho Tum Na Jaane Kahan
Na Koi Chitthi Na Hi Khabar Hai

Umar-E-Tammam Kategi Kaise
Ab Kata Na Ek Bhi Pahar Hai

Ab Tum Maano Chahe Na Maano
Dil Mein Uthti Usi Kee Lahar Hai

Ghazal To Kehne Lage Hain “Meet”
Na Kaafiya Na Radeeb Na Bahar Hai




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«Reply #10 on: March 22, 2014, 02:52:24 AM »
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wah wah bhot he umda peshkash meet ji
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«Reply #11 on: March 22, 2014, 05:14:27 AM »
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Bahut khoob Amit jee, dheroN daad aur mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #12 on: March 22, 2014, 01:00:24 PM »
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Wah Wah!!!! Kya Kehne!!!! La-Jawaab Ghazal!!! Mujhe aap ki yeh ghazal bohat bohat bohat hi pasand aayi hai. Har ek ashaar ek se bad kar ek hai aur meaningful hai.

Very Very Good!!



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«Reply #13 on: March 22, 2014, 02:14:38 PM »
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bahut khoob

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया नन्द जी.....
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«Reply #14 on: March 22, 2014, 04:46:06 PM »
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Waah waah !!

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया जैफ जी.....
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