क्या ज़रूरी है बदन की यूं नुमाइश....***सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

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मीठे अल्फ़ाज़ की जज़्बात पे बारिश करना
भा गया दिल को मेरे उसका नवाज़िश करना

फ़ितरते-हुस्न में शामिल है सितम आशिक़ पर
फ़ितरते-इश्क़ सितम सह के है नाज़िश करना

मैंने जब उसकी सहेली से कहा, हँसने लगी
रात को छत पे मिले, उससे गुज़ारिश करना

दिल तो दिल है वो अदाओं पे भी आ सकता है
क्या ज़रूरी है बदन की यूं नुमाइश करना

जिसने उम्मीद का आईना कुचल डाला हो
उससे बेकार है दिल, प्यार की ख़्वाहिश करना

मैं तो शाइर हूँ किया नज़्म तुझे मैंने 'रक़ीब'
"कोई आसां नहीं औरों की सताइश करना"  

                  --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2011, 05:04:37 PM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab bahut umdaa aur khoob kavish par kaha hai aapne..
Behad achche ashaar rahe... Usual Smile

Puri Gazal hi behad umdaa hai humari daad O mubarakbad
dil se kabul kijiye.... Usual Smile

         


Quote from: Satish Shukla on July 30, 2011, 01:19:47 PM

मीठे अल्फ़ाज़ की जज़्बात पे बारिश करना
भा गया दिल को मेरे उसका नवाज़िश करना

Kia kahne janab bahut khoob behad achcha matla kaha hai daad Usual Smile         

फ़ितरते-हुस्न में शामिल है सितम आशिक़ पर
फ़ितरते-इश्क़ सितम सह के है नाज़िश करना

Kia kahne bahut khoob aur shayraana sher hai ..
Daad daad daad Usual Smile         

मैंने जब उसकी सहेली से कहा, हँसने लगी
रात को छत पे मिले, उससे गुज़ारिश करना

Waah janab waah kia kahne bahut umdaa Usual Smile         

दिल तो दिल है वो अदाओं पे भी आ सकता है
क्या ज़रूरी है बदन की यूं नुमाइश करना

Waah kia kahne janab ... bahut umdaa
dilkash O dilfareb sher kaha hai daad Usual Smile         

जिसने उम्मीद का आईना कुचल डाला हो
उससे बेकार है दिल, प्यार की ख़्वाहिश करना

Behad sahiN janab daad Usual Smile         

मैं तो शाइर हूँ किया नज़्म तुझे मैंने 'रक़ीब'
"कोई आसां नहीं औरों की सताइश करना" 

Bahut khoob janab achcha Maqta hai..
Daad Usual Smile         

                  --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

Is dilkash gazal par dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Aur haaN aik guzarish hai ke roman meiN hi apni kalaam pesh kariye jisse sabhi padh sakte hai... Aisa hum isliye kah rahe haiN..
KyuN ke humare office ke system se hindi yaa aur launguage ke tittle wale links nahi khulte hai.. :)Aur aisa hi shayad bahut logoN ke saath hota ho jisse abhi tak aapki is khubsurat gazal par koi reply post nahi hua ..?

Khair khush O aabaad rahiye... Likhate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile           
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2011, 05:48:49 PM »
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behatareen "raqeeb" zi
bahut sunder !!
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«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2011, 04:07:06 AM »
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Bhuat Khoob Satish Ji Bahut Sunder Likha Hai Janab  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2011, 11:20:58 AM »
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ParwaaZ Ji,

Aapke comments padkar wakai bahut achchha
lagta hai bahut bahut shukriya, har she'r
par aapki opinion bhi khoob hoti hai.

Aapka huqm sar aankhon par ye ghazal roman
men bhi post kar di hai.

Main to yahi samajhta tha ki ya to logon
ko ghazal achchhee naheen lagee hogi, aage se
roman men bhi post kar doonga.

Ek baar fir se shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2011, 11:24:02 AM »
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Manish Ji,

Jawab dene aur ghazal pasand karne
ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Raqeeb
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«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2011, 11:27:00 AM »
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SHIHAB SAHAB,

BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA

RAQEEB
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«Reply #7 on: July 31, 2011, 11:27:36 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on July 30, 2011, 01:19:47 PM

मीठे अल्फ़ाज़ की जज़्बात पे बारिश करना
भा गया दिल को मेरे उसका नवाज़िश करना

फ़ितरते-हुस्न में शामिल है सितम आशिक़ पर
फ़ितरते-इश्क़ सितम सह के है नाज़िश करना

मैंने जब उसकी सहेली से कहा, हँसने लगी
रात को छत पे मिले, उससे गुज़ारिश करना

दिल तो दिल है वो अदाओं पे भी आ सकता है
क्या ज़रूरी है बदन की यूं नुमाइश करना

जिसने उम्मीद का आईना कुचल डाला हो
उससे बेकार है दिल, प्यार की ख़्वाहिश करना

मैं तो शाइर हूँ किया नज़्म तुझे मैंने 'रक़ीब'
"कोई आसां नहीं औरों की सताइश करना" 

                  --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'


dil to dol hai wo adaaon pe aa sakta hai.................wah janaab bahut khoob raqeeb sb


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Sanjeev Ji,

Aap sab ka pyar hai aage bhi
banaaye rahen.

Jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Raqeeb
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khamosh_aawaaz Ji,

Shukriya janab...

Raqeeb
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahooot khoob ghazal kahi aapne satish ji...sabhi shaer pasand aaye. daad kabool karen
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sach hai badan ki numaaish karna jaroori nahi hai...
Par kya karein wo bhi......
Jab maal achha nahi hota tou packing par joor dena padta hai
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bekarar Ji,

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab
dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut Umda Janab
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ANAAM JI,

Thanks for your reply & comment...

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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