"क्यूँ चले गए तुम"... गायत्री गुप्ता.....

by gaytri gupta on October 05, 2012, 04:16:42 PM
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«Reply #15 on: October 05, 2012, 07:03:49 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar... bahut bahut khoob Gaytri ji...  feelings chhoo gayi dil ko... bahut bahut pyaari peshkash .. too good... !!!

kuch bandhan the aise ki mujhe jaanaa padaa
kuch rishton ko nibhane mujhe jaanaa padaa
chahaa thaa saath nibhanaa umra bhar lekin
bich raah me sab chhod mujhe duur jaanaa padaa

wo kasme jo tumse kiye the toot gaye
saath wo haseen lamho ke chhot gaye
waqt ne kuch aisaa mod liya zindagi me
ki hamaare muskuraahat hi humse rooth gaye

chaah ke bhi khud ko jaane se  rok naa sakaa main
kareeb tumhaare aa ke bhi tumko na paa sakaa main
ye kismat ka khel nahi to aur kya hai meri jaanaa
kisi ko khud se zyaadaa chaah ke bhi apna naa sakaa main


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«Reply #16 on: October 05, 2012, 07:38:03 PM »
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gaytri ji kya bolu, kuch boolne ke kaabil nahi...
behad khoobsurat...wah
alfazo ko kya khoob sajaya aap ne...very nice...Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: October 06, 2012, 02:51:26 AM »
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Hariday ji thank u....
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«Reply #18 on: October 06, 2012, 02:52:54 AM »
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Ritesh ji aap ko hmari rachna pasand aayi es k liye bahut-bahut shukriya........
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«Reply #19 on: October 06, 2012, 02:54:55 AM »
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bahut hi khubsoorat ehsass Gaytri Ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: October 06, 2012, 03:38:51 AM »
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Thanks Sanjeev ji.....
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«Reply #21 on: October 06, 2012, 04:33:36 AM »
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Aati sunder, dard se bhari khubsurat rachna. apke en sunder ehsason ki kadar karte hen . 
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«Reply #22 on: October 06, 2012, 05:04:03 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya baat hai gayatriji bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne
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«Reply #23 on: October 06, 2012, 05:05:31 AM »
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Thank u PREM JI hmare essason ki kadder karne k liye....
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«Reply #24 on: October 06, 2012, 05:06:11 AM »
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Aqsh ji thank u....
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«Reply #25 on: October 06, 2012, 07:52:36 AM »
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wah kya bat hai bahut khoob
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«Reply #26 on: October 06, 2012, 08:14:58 AM »
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Anmol ji thank u..........
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«Reply #27 on: October 06, 2012, 01:55:46 PM »
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just very beautiful words ,,,likhte rahen
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«Reply #28 on: October 06, 2012, 03:32:39 PM »
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Sunil ji shukria....
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«Reply #29 on: October 07, 2012, 01:01:03 AM »
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Gaytri yeh rachna par kar mn kuch nam ho giya kuch vichar sanjeh karney ko karta hai.my phone no of India is  9915500159 send me sms
sheel didi
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