"क्यूँ चले गए तुम"... गायत्री गुप्ता.....

by gaytri gupta on October 05, 2012, 04:16:42 PM
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«Reply #30 on: October 07, 2012, 06:38:12 AM »
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sheel didi thank u....didi maine aap ko fb per msg ker k apna no. diya tha...aap ne wahan dekha nahi hoga..mujhe aap ka no. mil gaya tha but mujhe lag ki aap busy hain ..thanks didi main aap ko monday ko call karun gi...
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«Reply #31 on: October 08, 2012, 02:19:29 PM »
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bahut umda
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«Reply #32 on: October 08, 2012, 02:29:43 PM »
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N K JI shukriya...
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«Reply #33 on: October 08, 2012, 02:38:55 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob gaytri jee
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«Reply #34 on: October 08, 2012, 03:18:28 PM »
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Suman ji thank u...
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«Reply #35 on: October 11, 2012, 07:10:24 PM »
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Very good work Gayatri ji but why you have posted this in Ghazal section. It is not a Ghazal but a Nazm.
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«Reply #36 on: October 11, 2012, 07:13:41 PM »
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~~~"क्यूँ चले गए तुम"~~~

जब तुम थे साथ हमारे ,पाँव हमारे जमीन पर  न पड़ते थे
जब तुम थे साथ हमारे , आँखों में सतरंगी सपने तैरते रहते थे
जब तुम थे साथ हमारे , दिल की धड़कनों की रवानी में संगीत बहता था
जब तुम थे साथ हमारे , दिन  रात हमारे रंगीन रहते थे
जब तुम थे साथ हमारे हर मुश्किल आसान सी लगती रहती  थी

आज जब तुम नहीं साथ हमारे पाँव जमीन पर भी आगे नहीं बढ़ते हैं
आज जब तुम नहीं साथ हमारे आँखों मैं सिर्फ उदासी तैरती रहती है
आज जब तुम नहीं साथ हमारे धडकनों की रवानी मद्धम रहती है
आज जब तुम नहीं साथ हमारे सारे दिन रात बदरंग से रहते हैं
आज जब तुम नहीं साथ हमारे हर आसान  बात भी मुश्किल लगती है

क्यूँ छोड़ गए तुम हमें इस तरह से भटकने के लिए
क्यूँ छोड़ गए तुम हमे सपनो को देखने से डरते हुए
कयूं छोड़ गए तुम हमें दिल की धडकनों का शोर सुनने के लिए
क्यूँ छोड़ गए तुम हमें इस तरह  दिन रात तड़पने के लिए
क्यूँ छोड़ गए तुम हमे हर मुश्किल से लड़ने के लिए

बोलो न क्यूँ चले गए तुम ??
क्यूँ चले गए तुम???  
                        ~~गायत्री गुप्ता~~

~~~"kyun chale gaye tum"~~~

jab tum the sath hamare ,paon hamare jameen per  nahi rahte the
jab tum the sath hamare , aankhon me satrangi sapne tairate the
jab tum the sath hamare , dil ki dhadkano ki rawani main sangeet bahta tha
jab tum the sath hamare , din raat humare rangeen rahte the
jab tum the sath hamare , har mushkil aasaan see lagti thi

aaj jab tum nahi sath hamare paon jameen per bhi aage nahi badhate hain
aaj jab tum nahi sath hamare aankho main udasi see tairati rahti hai
aaj jab tum nahi sath hamare dhadkano ki rawani madham see rahti hai
aaj jab tum nahi sath hamare har din-raat badrang rahte hain
aaj jab tum nahi sath hamare her aasaan see baat bhi mushkil lagti hai

kyun chod gaye tum hume is tarah se bhatakane ke liye
kyun chod gaye tum hume din raat tadpane ke liye
kyun chod gaye tum hume dil ki dhadkano ka shor sunne ke liye
kyun chod gaye tum hame yun din raat tadpne ke liye
kyun chod gaye tum hame har mushkil se ladne ke liye

bolo na kyun chale gaye tum ??    
kyun chale gaye tum ??  
                         ~~Gaytri Gupta~~


very touching gyatri tearyeyed...!
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«Reply #37 on: October 12, 2012, 07:10:26 AM »
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Very good work Gayatri ji but why you have posted this in Ghazal section. It is not a Ghazal but a Nazm.

aap ne sahi kaha but mujh se galti se post ho gaya tha ghazaj section main ....thank u CIC JI ...
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«Reply #38 on: October 12, 2012, 07:11:40 AM »
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SHEBA JI THANK U...
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