खाबों में खोने दो /KhaaboN meN khone do......................SAINI

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«Reply #15 on: June 23, 2012, 06:52:37 PM »
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waah...waah...Saini Ji, khoob kaha,  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #16 on: June 24, 2012, 01:11:49 AM »
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«Reply #17 on: June 24, 2012, 04:51:03 AM »
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अभी तो रात बाक़ी है ज़रा सा  और  सोने  दो |

किसी के ख़ाब आने हैं  मुझे खाबों में खोने दो ||


ज़बरदस्ती किसी  को तुम हँसाओगे  भला  कैसे |

लिखा तक़दीर में उसकी अगर रोना तो रोने  दो ||
 

बना रक्खा है मैंने  पैर  के  तलुओं को फ़ौलादी |

बला से राह में कांटें कोई  बोता  है  बोने  दो ||
 

गुनाहगारों से भर के कश्ती  दरिया  में  उतारी है |

डुबाता है अगर माझी तो कश्ती  को  डुबोने  दो ||
 

मेरी आग़ोश में सर रख के वो ग़म हल्का करते हैं |

उन्हें आंसू  बहा कर मेरे दामन को  भिगोने  दो ||


जिसे ग़म से  मुहब्बत है जिसे ग़म रास आते हैं |

अकेले ही  उसे  उसके ग़मों  का बोझ  ढ़ोने दो ||
 

खड़ा चुपचाप ‘सैनी ’तो  तमाशा  देखता  रहता |

ग़ज़ल कहनी कहे जाओ  जो होता है सो होने दो ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी


Abhee  to  raat  baaqee  hai  zaraa  saa  aur  sone  do.
Kisee  ke  khaab  aane  haiN mujhe khaaboN meN khone do.

Zabardastee   kisee  ko   tum  hansaaoge  bhalaa  kaise.
Likhaa   taqdeer  meN  uskee  agar  ronaa  to  rone  do.

Banaa  rakkhaa  hai  maine  pair ke taluoN ko faulaadee.
Balaa  se  raah  meN  kaanteN  koi  botaa  hai  bone do.

GunaahgaaroN se bhar ke kashtee dariyaa meN utaaree hai.
Dubaataa  hai  agar  maajhee  to  kashtee  ko dubone do.

Meree aaghosh meN sar rakh ke vo gham halkaa karte haiN.
Unhe  aansoo  bahaa  kar  mere  daaman  ko  bhigone  do.

Jise  gham  se  muhabbat  hai  jise gham raas aate haiN.
Akele   hee   use   uske   ghamoN  kaa  bojh  dhone  do.

Khadaa  chupchaap  ‘saini’to  tamaashaa  dekhtaa rahtaa.
Ghazal  kahnee  kahe  jaao  jo  hotaa  hai  so  hone do.

Dr.Surendra Saini

 

 
saini ji,

samajh mein aata nahi kis sher ki tareef karoon
mujhko to poori gazal mein aaj khud ko khone do.

sir ji ,
ek ek sher ko aapne kuchh yoon sajaaya hai ki tareef mein shabdon ne sath hi chhod diya hai, bas aap samjh jaaiye mein kya kahna chahta hoon uparvale se meri prarthna hai ki ap par yeh kripa banaaye rakhe is rachna par dheron daad aur rau to banta hi hai jab tak hai.
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ek se badkar ek sab ke sab bahut khoob. likhte rahiye dr jee. aap ka likha padna bahut acha lagta hai
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«Reply #23 on: June 24, 2012, 02:59:30 PM »
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BAUT KHOOB SAINI JI.
AAP KI HAR COMPOSITION EK SE EK HOTI HAI
PARHNEWALE KO KHYALON MEN DUBOTI HAI
SOCHNE LAG JATE HAIN KI TARIF MEN KIYA KAHEN
SAHI ALFAZ DHOONDHNE MEN BAHUT MUSHKIL HOTI HAI
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kya baat hai.... Sain Ji, khoob bahut khoob,  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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