sksaini4
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खोखल रिश्ता है इसको तोड़ दो |
हाल पर मुझको मेरे अब छोड़ दो ||
ख़ुद करो ग़लती तो ये जायज़ नहीं |
ठींकरा औरों के सर पे फोड़ दो ||
लफ्ज़ जो लिखते हों बस अलगाव के |
एसे क़लमों को उठा कर तोड़ दो ||
चार होते हैं फ़क़त दो और दो |
चाहे उनको जिस तरह से जोड़ दो ||
बाद मुद्दत के उठे दिल में ख़याल |
ख़ूबसूरत सा इन्हें इक मोड़ दो ||
दिल का शायर फिर जगायेगा तुम्हे |
अब भले ही आप कहना छोड़ दो ||
हादिसों ने सख्त की दिल की ज़मीन |
खुश ख़यालों से इसे अब गोड़ दो ||
डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
Khokhlaa rishtaa hai isko tod do.
Haal par mujhko mere ab chhod do.
Khud karo ghaltee to ye jaayaz naheeN.
Theenkraa auroN ke sar pe fod do.
Lafz jo likhte hoN bas algaaw ke.
Ese qalmoN ko uthaa kar tod do.
Chaar hote haiN faqat do aur do.
Chaahe unko jis tarah se jod do.
Baad muddat ke uthe dil men khyaal.
Khoobsoorat saa inhe ik mod do.
Dil kaa shaayar fir jagaayegaa tumhe.
Ab bhale hee aap kahnaa chhod do.
HaadisoN ne sakht kee dil kee zameen.
Khush khyaaloN se ise ab god do.
Dr.Surendra Saini
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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2012, 08:22:41 AM » |
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2012, 08:32:48 AM » |
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boht khoob sir
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2012, 01:55:27 PM » |
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bahut khoob , saini saheb.Achhi ghazal ke liye mubrakbaad.Hasan
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2012, 04:25:26 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2012, 04:47:54 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2012, 04:33:20 AM » |
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Qalb saheb bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2012, 05:45:20 AM » |
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Sahil ji shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2012, 06:50:01 AM » |
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Suresh ji bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2012, 06:59:10 AM » |
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Wah wah Saini sahab kya hi khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne. Parhne mein aanand aaya. Bahot behtreen tareeqe see apne apna falsafa munakkash kiya. Is murassa takhleeq ke liye daad pesh karta hun.
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2012, 09:11:30 AM » |
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Shihab ji bahut bahut shukriya janaab
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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2012, 11:02:45 AM » |
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Hasan saheb bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2012, 06:50:37 AM » |
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Usha ji thanks
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«Reply #14 on: February 01, 2012, 09:51:04 AM » |
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Mukesh ji bahut bahut shukriya
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on eTI community..
