ग़ज़ल और गीत नज़्मों की यहाँ फुलवारियाँ होंगी .....salim raza

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कहीं  पे  चीख होगी और कहीं किलकारीयाँ  होंगी !
अगर हाकिम के आगे भूख और लाचारियाँ होंगी !
 
अगर हर दिल में चाहत हो शराफ़त हो सदाक़त हो!
मुहब्बत  का  चमन होगा ख़ुशी की क्यारियाँ  होंगी !
 
किसी को शौक़ यूँ होता नहीं ग़ुरबत में  जीने का!
यक़ीनन  सामने  उसके  बड़ी  मज़बूरियां  होंगी !
 
ये होली ईद कहती है भला कब अपने  हांथों में !
वफ़ा का रंग  होगा  प्यार  की पिचकारियाँ होंगी !
 
न  छोड़ो  ये  समझ  के  आग  अब  ठंडी हुई  होगी !
 ये मुम्किन है दबी कुछ राख  में चिंगारियाँ  होंगी!
 
मुक़ाबिल में  है आया एक जुगनू आज सूरज के!
यक़ीनन  पास  उसके  भी  बड़ी  तैयारियाँ  होंगी !
 
सुख़नवर  का  ये आंगन है रज़ा शेरों की  ख़ुश्बू !
ग़ज़ल  और गीत नज़्मों  की यहाँ फुलवारियाँ होंगी   !
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2013, 10:39:08 PM »
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Thanks sharing a nice ghazal.
3rd  sher  check  kar lijye ,
'majbooriyan' kke bajai shayed
'dushwaariyaan' lafz hoga.
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«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2013, 12:02:23 AM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on April 20, 2013, 09:28:51 PM
कहीं  पे  चीख होगी और कहीं किलकारीयाँ  होंगी !
अगर हाकिम के आगे भूख और लाचारियाँ होंगी !
 
अगर हर दिल में चाहत हो शराफ़त हो सदाक़त हो!
मुहब्बत  का  चमन होगा ख़ुशी की क्यारियाँ  होंगी !
 
किसी को शौक़ यूँ होता नहीं ग़ुरबत में  जीने का!
यक़ीनन  सामने  उसके  बड़ी  मज़बूरियां  होंगी !
 
ये होली ईद कहती है भला कब अपने  हांथों में !
वफ़ा का रंग  होगा  प्यार  की पिचकारियाँ होंगी !
 
न  छोड़ो  ये  समझ  के  आग  अब  ठंडी हुई  होगी !
 ये मुम्किन है दबी कुछ राख  में चिंगारियाँ  होंगी!
 
मुक़ाबिल में  है आया एक जुगनू आज सूरज के!
यक़ीनन  पास  उसके  भी  बड़ी  तैयारियाँ  होंगी !
 
सुख़नवर  का  ये आंगन है रज़ा शेरों की  ख़ुश्बू !
ग़ज़ल  और गीत नज़्मों  की यहाँ फुलवारियाँ होंगी   !



bahot khoob achchci sharing hai anmol ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2013, 12:15:55 AM »
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Acchi sharing Anmol jee
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 20, 2013, 10:39:08 PM
Thanks sharing a nice ghazal.
3rd  sher  check  kar lijye ,
'majbooriyan' kke bajai shayed
'dushwaariyaan' lafz hoga.
Aadaab Sir
Kitni baareeki se ghazal padhte hai aap..
choti si ghalti bhi aapki nigaah se na bach sakee..
Maine aaj ek aur cheez seekhi aapse.
Thanks
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2013, 03:45:38 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2013, 11:14:12 AM »
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bahut khoob. thanks for sharing anmol jee
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«Reply #7 on: April 21, 2013, 11:33:40 AM »
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nice sharing anmol ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 21, 2013, 02:16:45 PM »
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wonderful
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«Reply #9 on: April 21, 2013, 03:10:52 PM »
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anmolarora ji,

Waaah waaah ...bahut khoob...aapki pasand
achchhee hai...Salim Raza Sahab ki ghazal
bahut achchhee lagee...

Maqte ke oola misre men aapse copy ya type
karne men kuchh chhoot gaya hai...fir se dekhen
kyon ke Raza Sahab aaisa naheen kah sakte aur
mauzooda misra behr men naheen hai....

Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #10 on: April 21, 2013, 06:05:49 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 20, 2013, 10:39:08 PM
Thanks sharing a nice ghazal.
3rd  sher  check  kar lijye ,
'majbooriyan' kke bajai shayed
'dushwaariyaan' lafz hoga.
sukriya siddiqui ji mayne chck ker liya hai majbooriyan hi likha hua hai
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Quote from: adil bechain on April 21, 2013, 12:02:23 AM


bahot khoob achchci sharing hai anmol ji Applause Applause Applause
tah dil se sukriya adil ji
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Quote from: mkv on April 21, 2013, 12:15:55 AM
Acchi sharing Anmol jee

thnks MKV ji
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Quote from: mkv on April 21, 2013, 12:32:26 AM
Aadaab Sir
Kitni baareeki se ghazal padhte hai aap..
choti si ghalti bhi aapki nigaah se na bach sakee..
Maine aaj ek aur cheez seekhi aapse.
Thanks

sahi kaha aap ne MKV ji yaha per hame her roz kuch na kuch sikhne ko milta hai
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on April 21, 2013, 03:45:38 AM
Bahut Khoob.
ravinder ji aap ka sukriya
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