चाँद छत पर आता नहीं...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

by amit_prakash_meet on February 16, 2013, 05:17:17 AM
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सिवा तेरे दिल को कोई भाता नहीं
भूलना भी चाहूँ तू भुलाया जाता नहीं


जिसको चाहा वही रूठ कर चल दिया
लगता है प्यार करना हमें आता नहीं


जाने वाले से कोई उम्मीद क्या करें
चला जाता है जो लौटकर आता नहीं


जीना तो पड़ता है आखिरी सांस तक
मरने वाले के साथ तो मारा जाता नहीं


सर-ए-शाम से बदली छायी है नभ पर
शायद आज चाँद छत पर आता नहीं


अंदाज-ए-बयाँ कुछ जुदा है “मीत” का
हमेशा लहरों के साथ बहा जाता नहीं  




SIVA TERE DIL KO KOI BHATA NAHI
BHULNA BHI CHAHUN TU BHULAYA JATA NAHI


JISKO CHAHA VAHI RUTH KAR CHAL DIYA
LAGTA HAI PYAAR KARNA HAMEIN AATA NAHI


JAANE VAALE SE KOI UMEED KYA KAREIN
CHAL JAATA HAI JO LOUTKAR AATA NAHI


JEENA TO PADTA HAI AAKHIRI SAAN TAK
MARNE VAALE KE SAATH TO MARA JAATA NAHI


SAR-E-SHAAM SE BADLI CHAIYE HAI NABH PAR
SHAAYAD AAJ CHAAND CHAT PAR AATA NAHI


ANDAZ-E-BAYAAN KUCH JUDA HAI “MEET” KA
HAMESHA LEHRON KE SAATH BAHA JAATA NAHI

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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2013, 05:31:33 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2013, 05:32:35 AM »
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Bahut khoob amit prakash ji. bahut achche ehsaas rahe. dheron daad
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2013, 05:41:09 AM »
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Wah.Amit ji.Bahut khub.Bhav achcha hai lekin metre sudharne ki zarurat hai.Amit ji,Aeik baat ki aapse jankaari chahta hu.Yaar aap hindi language me poetry kaise upload karte ho is site per.Maine bhi try kiya,leking mughe Idia nahi laga.please tell me the way by which  we can upload poems in hindi language on this web site.you may write me to my personal email address given below-
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2013, 05:47:37 AM »
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bhaut badiya...ek dam mast hai
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2013, 05:54:50 AM »
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waah waah Amit ji ekdam jabardst
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2013, 06:38:12 AM »
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VERY NICE SAID ........GOOD ONE ...WAH WAH
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2013, 07:14:41 AM »
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waah ji waah... bahut khoooob...
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2013, 07:19:57 AM »
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Amit Ji

Nice thought...keep on writinig
as well as reading some good poets

Wish you all the best...in poetic world...

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2013, 08:38:35 AM »
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Meet Jee Aadaab!



WaaH janab waaH kia baat hai badi hi gehri aur khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai
aapne... Usual Smile

Gazab ke ashaar rahe sabhi, kafi dilfareb khayaaloN ka muzaheraa kiya hai
janab... Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
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Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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JISKO CHAHA VAHI RUTH KAR CHAL DIYA
LAGTA HAI PYAAR KARNA HAMEIN AATA NAHI

Kia baat hai achcha sher hai janab daad...

JAANE VAALE SE KOI UMEED KYA KAREIN
CHAL JAATA HAI JO LOUTKAR AATA NAHI

Achcha sher hai yeH bhi daad..

JEENA TO PADTA HAI AAKHIRI SAAN TAK
MARNE VAALE KE SAATH TO MARA JAATA NAHI

Bahut bahut umdaa sher kaha hai janab daad daad daad

ANDAZ-E-BAYAAN KUCH JUDA HAI “MEET” KA
HAMESHA LEHRON KE SAATH BAHA JAATA NAHI

Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob daad..

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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2013, 08:44:31 AM »
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Bahut khoob Amit jee
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«Reply #11 on: February 16, 2013, 09:30:09 AM »
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बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद रविन्द्र जी
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«Reply #13 on: February 16, 2013, 09:54:54 AM »
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Kya Baat Hai!!! Bohat Hi Khub Yeh Ghazal Rahi..!!!

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