चाँद छत पर आता नहीं...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

by amit_prakash_meet on February 16, 2013, 05:17:17 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 16, 2013, 10:49:48 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on February 16, 2013, 05:32:35 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob amit prakash ji. bahut achche ehsaas rahe. dheron daad
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद अक्श जी
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«Reply #16 on: February 16, 2013, 11:12:44 AM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on February 16, 2013, 05:41:09 AM
Wah.Amit ji.Bahut khub.Bhav achcha hai lekin metre sudharne ki zarurat hai.Amit ji,Aeik baat ki aapse jankaari chahta hu.Yaar aap hindi language me poetry kaise upload karte ho is site per.Maine bhi try kiya,leking mughe Idia nahi laga.please tell me the way by which  we can upload poems in hindi language on this web site.you may write me to my personal email address given below-
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बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद सुधीर जी
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«Reply #17 on: February 16, 2013, 12:36:18 PM »
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JISKO CHAHA VAHI RUTH KAR CHAL DIYA
LAGTA HAI PYAAR KARNA HAMEIN AATA NAHI

JAANE VAALE SE KOI UMEED KYA KAREIN
CHAL JAATA HAI JO LOUTKAR AATA NAHI

JEENA TO PADTA HAI AAKHIRI SAAN TAK
MARNE VAALE KE SAATH TO MARA JAATA NAHI

ANDAZ-E-BAYAAN KUCH JUDA HAI “MEET” KA
HAMESHA LEHRON KE SAATH BAHA JAATA NAHI

Bahut khoob Amit jee..
kya baat hai..ek se ek khoobsurat ashaar
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«Reply #18 on: February 16, 2013, 01:42:49 PM »
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«Reply #19 on: February 16, 2013, 07:26:31 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on February 16, 2013, 05:17:17 AM
सिवा तेरे दिल को कोई भाता नहीं
भूलना भी चाहूँ तू भुलाया जाता नहीं


जिसको चाहा वही रूठ कर चल दिया
लगता है प्यार करना हमें आता नहीं


जाने वाले से कोई उम्मीद क्या करें
चला जाता है जो लौटकर आता नहीं


जीना तो पड़ता है आखिरी सांस तक
मरने वाले के साथ तो मारा जाता नहीं


सर-ए-शाम से बदली छायी है नभ पर
शायद आज चाँद छत पर आता नहीं


अंदाज-ए-बयाँ कुछ जुदा है “मीत” का
हमेशा लहरों के साथ बहा जाता नहीं   




SIVA TERE DIL KO KOI BHATA NAHI
BHULNA BHI CHAHUN TU BHULAYA JATA NAHI


JISKO CHAHA VAHI RUTH KAR CHAL DIYA
LAGTA HAI PYAAR KARNA HAMEIN AATA NAHI


JAANE VAALE SE KOI UMEED KYA KAREIN
CHAL JAATA HAI JO LOUTKAR AATA NAHI


JEENA TO PADTA HAI AAKHIRI SAAN TAK
MARNE VAALE KE SAATH TO MARA JAATA NAHI


SAR-E-SHAAM SE BADLI CHAIYE HAI NABH PAR
SHAAYAD AAJ CHAAND CHAT PAR AATA NAHI


ANDAZ-E-BAYAAN KUCH JUDA HAI “MEET” KA
HAMESHA LEHRON KE SAATH BAHA JAATA NAHI


Bhut khub ji
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«Reply #20 on: February 17, 2013, 03:55:14 AM »
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«Reply #21 on: February 17, 2013, 08:57:45 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #22 on: February 18, 2013, 04:37:58 AM »
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Quote from: piyush_amrit on February 16, 2013, 05:47:37 AM
bhaut badiya...ek dam mast hai
बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया पीयुष जी
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«Reply #23 on: February 18, 2013, 04:40:12 AM »
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kya bat kya bat
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«Reply #24 on: February 18, 2013, 05:01:38 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on February 16, 2013, 05:54:50 AM
waah waah Amit ji ekdam jabardst
बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया सैनी जी
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«Reply #25 on: February 19, 2013, 11:51:21 AM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on February 16, 2013, 05:17:17 AM
सिवा तेरे दिल को कोई भाता नहीं
भूलना भी चाहूँ तू भुलाया जाता नहीं

meri shakhsiya hi aisi hai.tumhaari gahlti nahin hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
जिसको चाहा वही रूठ कर चल दिया
लगता है प्यार करना हमें आता नहीं
pahle training school join karo. baarikiyaan seekh phir gaadi ko sadak pe chalaao Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

जाने वाले से कोई उम्मीद क्या करें
चला जाता है जो लौटकर आता नहीं
ye duniya ka uslool hai icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent

जीना तो पड़ता है आखिरी सांस तक
मरने वाले के साथ तो मारा जाता नहीं
yess practical baat hai icon_flower icon_flower

सर-ए-शाम से बदली छायी है नभ पर
शायद आज चाँद छत पर आता नहीं
doa karo badli hat jaaye Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

अंदाज-ए-बयाँ कुछ जुदा है “मीत” का
हमेशा लहरों के साथ बहा जाता नहीं  
sahi farmayaa icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower




SIVA TERE DIL KO KOI BHATA NAHI
BHULNA BHI CHAHUN TU BHULAYA JATA NAHI


JISKO CHAHA VAHI RUTH KAR CHAL DIYA
LAGTA HAI PYAAR KARNA HAMEIN AATA NAHI


JAANE VAALE SE KOI UMEED KYA KAREIN
CHAL JAATA HAI JO LOUTKAR AATA NAHI


JEENA TO PADTA HAI AAKHIRI SAAN TAK
MARNE VAALE KE SAATH TO MARA JAATA NAHI


SAR-E-SHAAM SE BADLI CHAIYE HAI NABH PAR
SHAAYAD AAJ CHAAND CHAT PAR AATA NAHI


ANDAZ-E-BAYAAN KUCH JUDA HAI “MEET” KA
HAMESHA LEHRON KE SAATH BAHA JAATA NAHI



good one.........!
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«Reply #26 on: February 20, 2013, 12:40:01 PM »
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Quote from: ghayal0786 on February 16, 2013, 06:38:12 AM
VERY NICE SAID ........GOOD ONE ...WAH WAH
Thanks a lot Ghayal Ji
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«Reply #27 on: February 22, 2013, 05:45:59 AM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on February 16, 2013, 07:14:41 AM
waah ji waah... bahut khoooob...
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Thanks a lot Vimmi Ji
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«Reply #28 on: February 23, 2013, 03:38:15 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on February 16, 2013, 07:19:57 AM
Amit Ji

Nice thought...keep on writinig
as well as reading some good poets

Wish you all the best...in poetic world...

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद शुक्ला जी
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«Reply #29 on: February 23, 2013, 06:00:03 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 16, 2013, 08:38:35 AM
Meet Jee Aadaab!



WaaH janab waaH kia baat hai badi hi gehri aur khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai
aapne... Usual Smile

Gazab ke ashaar rahe sabhi, kafi dilfareb khayaaloN ka muzaheraa kiya hai
janab... Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



इस होसला अफज़ाई के लिये बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया परवाज़ भाई
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