चाहते हैं अब भुला दें, उसको अपने दिल से हम.......सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

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चाहते हैं अब भुला दें उसको अपने दिल से हम
प्यार करते हैं बहुत जिस हुस्ने-लाहासिल से हम
chaahate haiN ab bhula deN usko apne dil se ham
pyar karte haiN bahut jis husn-e-laahaasil se hum
 
गर्मिए लब से किसी की रोज़ पाते हैं हयात
क़त्ल होते हैं हमेशा अब्रुए-क़ातिल से हम
garmiye lab se kisee kee roz paate haiN hayaat
qatl hote haiN hamesha abru-e-qaatil se ham

बस, ख़ुदा का शुक्र कह कर, टाल देता है हमें
हाल जब भी पूछते हैं इस दिले-बिस्मिल से हम
bas khuda ka shukra kah kar, taal deta hai hameN
haal jab bhee poochhate haiN is dele-bismil se hum
 
आएगा भी या नहीं अब वो सफ़ीना लौटकर
बारहा पूछा किये मंझधार और साहिल से हम
aayegaa bhee yaa naheeN ab wo safeena lautkar
baarhaa poochhaa kiye majhdhaar aur saahil se hum

मुस्कुराहट पर किसी की, खा गए धोका 'रक़ीब'
दिल लगा बैठे किसी मगरूर से, संगदिल से हम
muskuraahat par kisee kee khaa gaye dhoka 'Raqeeb'
dil laga baithe kisee magroor se, sangdil se hum

                         --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'
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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2011, 11:23:05 AM »
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wahhhhhhhhhhhh bahut khub...
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2011, 03:48:42 PM »
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bht bht khoob satish ji....
Sply last one...
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2011, 04:57:35 AM »
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manzil-e -ishq ji,

Thanks for your reply & comments..

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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2011, 06:16:39 AM »
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Satish Bhai...Kya ghazal kahi hai...Subhan Allah...Behtariin..."garmiyen lab se kisi ke roz paate hain hyaat...." wala sher to bas Kamaal ka hai...Dili daad kabool karen.

Neeraj
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2011, 07:15:34 AM »
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Neeraj Sahab,

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawaab dene
ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2011, 04:02:11 PM »
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Satish ji,Eid ke liye watan Lucknow ke safar pe thha.Aapki khoobsurat ghazal parhne meiN taakher hui.Bahut achhe ashaar se murassa kalam pesh kiya hai .Mubarak ho.3ra sheir 'Garmi e lab...' khaas taur se qaabil e tahseen hai.Aapko meri taraf se Eid ki tahe dil se mubarakbaad .Hasan
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2011, 05:51:32 PM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Eid Mubarak. Aaj malum hua ki aapka taalluk
bhi Lucknow se hai. Main to filhaal Mumbai men
hee hoon.

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawaab dene ka bahut
bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2011, 01:03:41 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on August 29, 2011, 11:10:30 AM

चाहते हैं अब भुला दें उसको अपने दिल से हम
प्यार करते हैं बहुत जिस हुस्ने-लाहासिल से हम
chaahate haiN ab bhula deN usko apne dil se ham
pyar karte haiN bahut jis husn-e-laahaasil se hum
 
गर्मिए लब से किसी की रोज़ पाते हैं हयात
क़त्ल होते हैं हमेशा अब्रुए-क़ातिल से हम
garmiye lab se kisee kee roz paate haiN hayaat
qatl hote haiN hamesha abru-e-qaatil se ham

बस, ख़ुदा का शुक्र कह कर, टाल देता है हमें
हाल जब भी पूछते हैं इस दिले-बिस्मिल से हम
bas khuda ka shukra kah kar, taal deta hai hameN
haal jab bhee poochhate haiN is dele-bismil se hum
 
आएगा भी या नहीं अब वो सफ़ीना लौटकर
बारहा पूछा किये मंझधार और साहिल से हम
aayegaa bhee yaa naheeN ab wo safeena lautkar
baarhaa poochhaa kiye majhdhaar aur saahil se hum

मुस्कुराहट पर किसी की, खा गए धोका 'रक़ीब'
दिल लगा बैठे किसी मगरूर से, संगदिल से हम
muskuraahat par kisee kee khaa gaye dhoka 'Raqeeb'
dil laga baithe kisee magroor se, sangdil se hum

                         --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'



DEAR SS ACHI GHAZAL HAI.

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AUR MAQTE MEIN...DIL LAGAA BAITHE EK SANGDIL SE HUM  YAHAAN MAGHROOR KI KOI ZARURAT NAHIN SHAYAD


AAP EK QABIL AUR DANISHWAR HAIN . MUJH LA ILM KO AISA LAGA TO LIKH DIYA KYON KI AAP EK BEHTREEN SHAYAR HAIN. ISS WAJH KAR AGAR BURA LAGA HO TO MERI BAAT DARGUZAR KAREIN AUR MAAF BHI KAREIN

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khamosh_aawaaz ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur jawab
dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Aap ke suggestations bhi padhe achchha laga
ki koyee to dhyan se padhta hai.

Waise aapki jaankaaree ke liye bata doon
ki dono hee sher apne aap men sahee hain.
aap kee baat aur meri baat dono ko tarannum
men kahne kee koshish keejiye antar pata
lag jaayega.

Mujhe kuchh bhee BURA naheen laga aap aage
bhi haq se apni pratikriya vyakt keejiye
achchha lagega.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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sksaini4 ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Aage bhi aaise hi sneh banaye rahen.

Aabhaar,

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2011, 10:55:54 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on August 29, 2011, 11:10:30 AM

चाहते हैं अब भुला दें उसको अपने दिल से हम
प्यार करते हैं बहुत जिस हुस्ने-लाहासिल से हम
chaahate haiN ab bhula deN usko apne dil se ham
pyar karte haiN bahut jis husn-e-laahaasil se hum
 
गर्मिए लब से किसी की रोज़ पाते हैं हयात
क़त्ल होते हैं हमेशा अब्रुए-क़ातिल से हम
garmiye lab se kisee kee roz paate haiN hayaat
qatl hote haiN hamesha abru-e-qaatil se ham

बस, ख़ुदा का शुक्र कह कर, टाल देता है हमें
हाल जब भी पूछते हैं इस दिले-बिस्मिल से हम
bas khuda ka shukra kah kar, taal deta hai hameN
haal jab bhee poochhate haiN is dele-bismil se hum
 
आएगा भी या नहीं अब वो सफ़ीना लौटकर
बारहा पूछा किये मंझधार और साहिल से हम
aayegaa bhee yaa naheeN ab wo safeena lautkar
baarhaa poochhaa kiye majhdhaar aur saahil se hum

मुस्कुराहट पर किसी की, खा गए धोका 'रक़ीब'
दिल लगा बैठे किसी मगरूर से, संगदिल से हम
muskuraahat par kisee kee khaa gaye dhoka 'Raqeeb'
dil laga baithe kisee magroor se, sangdil se hum

                         --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'


Waah Waah Waah

Bahut Bahut khoob Satsihji..

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«Reply #13 on: September 07, 2011, 11:46:20 AM »
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khwaish ji,

Jawab dene aur ghazal pasand karne
ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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