चोट गहरी /Chot gahree ......................SAINI

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चोट गहरी दिल पे जब  सहता  हूँ  मैं |

तब कहीँ जा  कर ग़ज़ल कहता हूँ मैं ||


इक नदी  सा रोज़  खोता  हूँ  वुजूद |

जब  समुंदर की तरफ़ बहता हूँ  मैं ||
 

खुश  ख़यालों के  सफ़र में रात दिन |

तेरे  पीछे  भागता   रहता  हूँ  मैं ||
 

तू नहीं मिलता तो  बस थक हार कर |

फिर  किसी मीनार सा ढहता हूँ  मैं ||
 

दूसरों  को  दूँ खुशी मैं  किस  तरह |

हर  घड़ी  ये सोचता  रहता  हूँ मैं ||  
 

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Chot gahree dil pe  jab  sahtaa  hooN maiN.
Tab kaheeN jaa kar ghazal kahtaa hooN maiN.

Ik  nadee   saa  roz  khotaa  hooN  vujood.
Jab  samunder  kee  taraf bahtaa hooN maiN.

Khush  khyaaloN   ke   safar  meN raat din.
Tere  peechhe  bhaagtaa  rahtaa  hooN maiN.

Too  naheeN  miltaa  to  bas thak haar kar.
Fir  kisee  meenaar  saa dhahtaa hooN maiN.

DoosroN  ko  dooN  khushee  maiN kis tarah.
Har  ghadee  ye  sochtaa  rahtaa hooN maiN.  

Dr. Surendra Saini
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«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2012, 07:07:07 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on February 07, 2012, 07:05:03 AM
चोट गहरी दिल पे जब  सहता  हूँ  मैं |

तब कहीँ जा  कर ग़ज़ल कहता हूँ मैं ||


इक नदी  सा रोज़  खोता  हूँ  वुजूद |

जब  समुंदर की तरफ़ बहता हूँ  मैं ||
 

खुश  ख़यालों के  सफ़र में रात दिन |

तेरे  पीछे  भागता   रहता  हूँ  मैं ||
 

तू नहीं मिलता तो  बस थक हार कर |

फिर  किसी मीनार सा ढहता हूँ  मैं ||
 

दूसरों  को  दूँ खुशी मैं  किस  तरह |

हर  घड़ी  ये सोचता  रहता  हूँ मैं ||   
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी


Chot gahree dil pe  jab  sahtaa  hooN maiN.
Tab kaheeN jaa kar ghazal kahtaa hooN maiN.

Ik  nadee   saa  roz  khotaa  hooN  vujood.
Jab  samunder  kee  taraf bahtaa hooN maiN.

Khush  khyaaloN   ke   safar  meN raat din.
Tere  peechhe  bhaagtaa  rahtaa  hooN maiN.

Too  naheeN  miltaa  to  bas thak haar kar.
Fir  kisee  meenaar  saa dhahtaa hooN maiN.

DoosroN  ko  dooN  khushee  maiN kis tarah.
Har  ghadee  ye  sochtaa  rahtaa hooN maiN.   

Dr. Surendra Saini


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«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2012, 08:12:41 AM »
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ApplauseApplauseApplause:clap:bahut hi umda surender ji ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2012, 08:42:47 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Saheb!!!!

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«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2012, 08:55:41 AM »
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चोट गहरी दिल पे जब  सहता  हूँ  मैं |

तब कहीँ जा  कर ग़ज़ल कहता हूँ मैं ||


इक नदी  सा रोज़  खोता  हूँ  वुजूद |

जब  समुंदर की तरफ़ बहता हूँ  मैं ||

बहूत ही खूबसूरत एहसास और शब्दचयन, ढेरों दाद
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«Reply #5 on: February 07, 2012, 02:56:46 PM »
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Saini Jee, bahut umdaa, Hamesha ki tarah.
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«Reply #6 on: February 07, 2012, 03:26:13 PM »
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waah saini sahab--
badi hi gazabb ki ghazal kahi aapne
dili daad aur mubarakbad kubul karen
khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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«Reply #7 on: February 07, 2012, 05:58:27 PM »
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Bahur khoob Sir

kya baat hai Sir

Umda khayalaat
दूसरों  को  दूँ खुशी मैं  किस  तरह |

हर  घड़ी  ये सोचता  रहता  हूँ मैं ||  Applause
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wah kya baat hai. really good Usual Smile
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 Bahut khoob, Saini saheb.
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