जब दिल टूट जाता है... " ऋषि अग्रवाल"

by Rishi Agarwal on May 05, 2015, 03:59:01 PM
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महोब्बत करके, जब दिल टूट जाता है
पल भर में ही, अपनापन छुट जाता है

बीतते थे जिसके साथ, हर पल लम्हा
इन्तजार में उसके, वक्त रूठ जाता है

रहती थी कभी जिसके हरपल की खबर
ये सिलसिला भी दूरियों में छुट जाता है

नजर आता था चेहरा, जिसका आईने में
अब तो देखकर आंसू वो भी टूट जाता है

होता था दर्द कभी, देख अश्क आँखों में 
टूटते रिश्तें में ये कारवां भी छुट जाता है

वादें थे जिसके संग जीने मरने के 'ऋषि'
साहिल पे आके तो, वो भी टूट जाता हैं


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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2015, 07:02:09 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2015, 07:47:45 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut aur bahut khoob rishi bhai.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2015, 07:58:34 PM »
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Bahut khoob kahaa hai aapne Rishi Jee.
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2015, 06:59:30 AM »
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bahut sunder waah waah
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2015, 07:26:26 AM »
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श्री ऋषि जी बहुत ही सुंदर रचना है लेकिन छूट शब्द में बड़े ऊ के मात्रा होनी चाहिए जबकि आपने छोटे उ की मात्रा लगाई है -आर के रस्तोगी
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waaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaah
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