जलते हुए घरों का धुआं देख रही हूं

by suman59 on December 12, 2012, 02:27:17 AM
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जलते हुए घरों का धुआं  देख रही हूं
ये कैसा बगावत का समां देख रही हूं

पगंडडियों से सडकों  पे आए थे जो उनके
मिटते हुए  क़दमों  के निशां देख रही हूं

मंदिर में तू, मस्जिद में तू, गिरजे में भी तू
तू एक, तुझे कहां -कहां देख रही हूं

शहरों तले दबी रही खेतों  की सिसकियां
उठता हुआ चिमनी का धुआं देख रही हूं

घर में जो अंधेरा है बहुत बोलता रहा
खामोश उजालों की जुबां देख रही हूं
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«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2012, 03:01:10 AM »
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bahut badhiya
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2012, 04:00:38 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2012, 05:54:00 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on December 12, 2012, 02:27:17 AM
जलते हुए घरों का धुआं  देख रही हूं
ये कैसा बगावत का समां देख रही हूं

पगंडडियों से सडकों  पे आए थे जो उनके
मिटते हुए  क़दमों  के निशां देख रही हूं

मंदिर में तू, मस्जिद में तू, गिरजे में भी तू
तू एक, तुझे कहां -कहां देख रही हूं

शहरों तले दबी रही खेतों  की सिसकियां
उठता हुआ चिमनी का धुआं देख रही हूं

घर में जो अंधेरा है बहुत बोलता रहा
खामोश उजालों की जुबां देख रही हूं


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«Reply #4 on: December 12, 2012, 06:31:10 AM »
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Jis gahraayi ki ghazal hai ye..
vahaN tak sochna bhi mushkil hai.
bahut badhiya.

मंदिर में तू, मस्जिद में तू, गिरजे में भी तू
तू एक, तुझे कहां -कहां देख रही हूं
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«Reply #5 on: December 12, 2012, 08:05:39 AM »
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waah waah kya kahne janaab ke bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: December 12, 2012, 11:09:27 AM »
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waaaah very nice suman jee
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«Reply #7 on: December 12, 2012, 02:25:36 PM »
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nice one
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«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2012, 02:50:48 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaah, bahut bahut khoob.

Mandir meiN tu, Masjid meiN tu, Girje meiN bhi tu
Tu ek, tujhe kahaaN kahaaN dekh rahi huN

Bahuuuuuuuuuuuuut achha laga ye she'r, is per meri dheroN daad aur mubarakbaad aur saath meiN ek Rau bhi.
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«Reply #9 on: December 12, 2012, 03:34:22 PM »
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Very very very very very very beatifull gazal. Mind Blowing.
Simply superB.
Quote from: suman59 on December 12, 2012, 02:27:17 AM
जलते हुए घरों का धुआं  देख रही हूं
ये कैसा बगावत का समां देख रही हूं

पगंडडियों से सडकों  पे आए थे जो उनके
मिटते हुए  क़दमों  के निशां देख रही हूं

मंदिर में तू, मस्जिद में तू, गिरजे में भी तू
तू एक, तुझे कहां -कहां देख रही हूं

शहरों तले दबी रही खेतों  की सिसकियां
उठता हुआ चिमनी का धुआं देख रही हूं

घर में जो अंधेरा है बहुत बोलता रहा
खामोश उजालों की जुबां देख रही हूं
Very very very very very very beatifull gazal. Mind Blowing.
Simply superB.
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«Reply #10 on: December 12, 2012, 07:51:08 PM »
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Suman Jee AAdaab!


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bus waaH hi nikal rahi hai zubaaN se .. bade hi umdaa khayaalat
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Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2012, 04:19:17 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Suman ji....!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: December 16, 2012, 12:33:04 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya friends
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bahut hi gehraaye tak le gayi mujhe yeh ghazal, bahut hi khoobsurat
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«Reply #14 on: December 28, 2012, 05:35:37 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on December 17, 2012, 03:00:22 AM
bahut hi gehraaye tak le gayi mujhe yeh ghazal, bahut hi khoobsurat
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