जहाँ पर हौसला दम तोड़ देता है

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जहाँ पर हौसला दम तोड़ देता है
सफ़र वहीँ पे मुसाफिर छोड़ देता है
 
ज़मीं जब बेवफ़ाई पे उतर आती  है
रुख़ रास्ता अपना ख़ुद मोड़ देता है
 
पत्थर कभी दूरियाँ नहीं पैदा करते
दो किनारों को पत्थर जोड़ देता है
 
बाज़ियाँ वो ही फतह करता अक्सर
जो ख़ुद को खुद से ही होड़ देता है

"दीपक" क्यूं दिल से काम करते हो
दिल कोई अपना ही झकझोड़ देता है


 
Jahan par hausala dum todh deta hai ,
Safar Wahin pe musafir  chodh deta hai.
 
Zameen jab be wafai pe uhar aati hai ,
Rukh rasta apna khud modh deta hai .
 
Patthat kabhi dooriyaan nahi paida karte
do kinaro'n ko patthar jodh deta hai
 
Baaziya'n wo hi fatak karta aqsar
jo khud ko khud se hi hodh deta hai
 
" Deepak" kyoon dil se kaam karte ho
dil koi apna hi jhakjhodh deta hai
@ Deepak Sharma


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«Reply #1 on: May 30, 2013, 10:14:19 PM »
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जहाँ पर हौसला दम तोड़ देता है
सफ़र वहीँ पे मुसाफिर छोड़ देता है
 
ज़मीं जब बेवफ़ाई पे उतर आती  है
रुख़ रास्ता अपना ख़ुद मोड़ देता है
 
पत्थर कभी दूरियाँ नहीं पैदा करते
दो किनारों को पत्थर जोड़ देता है
 
बाज़ियाँ वो ही फतह करता अक्सर
जो ख़ुद को खुद से ही होड़ देता है

"दीपक" क्यूं दिल से काम करते हो
दिल कोई अपना ही झकझोड़ देता है


 
Jahan par hausala dum todh deta hai ,
Safar Wahin pe musafir  chodh deta hai.
 
Zameen jab be wafai pe uhar aati hai ,
Rukh rasta apna khud modh deta hai .
 
Patthat kabhi dooriyaan nahi paida karte
do kinaro'n ko patthar jodh deta hai
 
Baaziya'n wo hi fatak karta aqsar
jo khud ko khud se hi hodh deta hai
 
" Deepak" kyoon dil se kaam karte ho
dil koi apna hi jhakjhodh deta hai
@ Deepak Sharma




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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2013, 12:58:55 AM »
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जहाँ पर हौसला दम तोड़ देता है
सफ़र वहीँ पे मुसाफिर छोड़ देता है
 
ज़मीं जब बेवफ़ाई पे उतर आती  है
रुख़ रास्ता अपना ख़ुद मोड़ देता है
 
पत्थर कभी दूरियाँ नहीं पैदा करते
दो किनारों को पत्थर जोड़ देता है
 
बाज़ियाँ वो ही फतह करता अक्सर
जो ख़ुद को खुद से ही होड़ देता है

"दीपक" क्यूं दिल से काम करते हो
दिल कोई अपना ही झकझोड़ देता है


 
Jahan par hausala dum todh deta hai ,
Safar Wahin pe musafir  chodh deta hai.
 
Zameen jab be wafai pe uhar aati hai ,
Rukh rasta apna khud modh deta hai .
 
Patthat kabhi dooriyaan nahi paida karte
do kinaro'n ko patthar jodh deta hai
 
Baaziya'n wo hi fatak karta aqsar
jo khud ko khud se hi hodh deta hai
 
" Deepak" kyoon dil se kaam karte ho
dil koi apna hi jhakjhodh deta hai
@ Deepak Sharma




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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2013, 01:46:34 PM »
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KDT ji, pehli baar mukhatib huN aapke kalam se, aur yakeen maaniye bahut ahcha laga padh kar, umeed karta hun ki aage bhi aapke  kalam se hume aisi ahchi rachnaayeN kehne ko milti raheNgi...
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«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2013, 03:06:52 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahut khoob.
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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2013, 07:04:25 PM »
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bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2013, 08:54:03 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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