ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी /Zurm hai khudkushee ..............SAINI:Ghazals

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ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी है बुरी मैकशी |
तुझसे रूठें तो हम क्या करें ज़िंदगी ||

फ़स्ल लाशों की लहरा रही चार सूँ |
सरफिरों ने बमों की वो बरसात की ||

बेबसी का सहारा जो थी अब तलक |
अब वो बैसाखियाँ टूटने को चली ||

आपसी रिश्ते जाते कभी के सुधर |
कुछ तुम्हारी कमी कुछ हमारी कमी ||

खो गयी शहर की इस चकाचोंध में |
गावँ के घर की छत चाँद की चाँदनी ||

प्यार भाई का सारा धरा रह गया |
मैंने हिस्से की अपनी ज़मीं मांग ली ||

अब यहाँ फिर वहाँ भागता फिर रहा |
कितना बेचैन है ? आजकल आदमी ||

प्यार होता है कैसा ? दिखायेंगे हम |
गावँ में तुम हमारे तो आना कभी ||

फोन पर,नेट पर और बाईक पे भी |
बढ़ गयी आज बच्चों की आवारगी ||

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी

Zurm hai khudkushee hai buree maikashee.
Tujhse rootheN to ham kyaa kareN zindagee.

Fasl laashoN kee lahraa rahee chaar soon.
SarfiroN ne bamoN kee vo barsaat kee.

Bebasee kaa sahaaraa jo thee ab talak.
Ab vo baisaakhiyaaN tootne ko chalee.

Aapsee rishte jaate kabhee ke sudhar.
Kuchh tumhaaree kamee kuchh hamaaree kamee.

Kho gayee shahr kee is chakachondh meN.
GaawN ke ghar kee chhat chaand kee chaandnee.

Pyaar bhaai kaa saaraa dharaa rah gayaa.
Maine hisse kee apnee zameeN maang lee.

Ab yahaaN fir vahaaN bhaagtaa fir rahaa.
Kitnaa bechain hai? aajkal aadmee.

Pyaar hotaa hai kaisaa ? dikhaayenge ham.
GaawN meN tum hamaare to aanaa kabhee.

Fon par,net par aur baaik pe bhee.
Badh gayee aaj bachhoN kee aawaargee.

Dr.Surendra Saini


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Re: ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी /Zurm hai khudkushee ..............SAINI

«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2011, 06:52:50 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on December 02, 2011, 04:44:59 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Saini Ji..

Sabhi A'shaar Khoob Rahe..


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Re: ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी /Zurm hai khudkushee ..............SAINI

«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2011, 07:18:26 AM »

Khub Saini Sahab Applause


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Re: ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी /Zurm hai khudkushee ..............SAINI

«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2011, 10:55:42 AM »

Sanjeev ji thanks


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Re: ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी /Zurm hai khudkushee ..............SAINI

«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2011, 11:24:57 AM »

Bebasi ka sahara jo thi ab talak
ab vo baishakhiyan tootne ko chali
Bahut khoob Sir


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Re: ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी /Zurm hai khudkushee ..............SAINI

«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2011, 06:43:40 PM »

Saini Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab aapke khayaaloN ki jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai
aur Masha Allaah aapki kalam bhi behad zordar chalti hai..

Aapki yeH kalaam bhi behad khoob rahi janab ..
Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye
Khuda Hafez..

Quote from: sksaini4 on December 02, 2011, 04:44:59 AM

Zurm hai khudkushee hai buree maikashee.
Tujhse rootheN to ham kyaa kareN zindagee.

Fasl laashoN kee lahraa rahee chaar soon.
SarfiroN ne bamoN kee vo barsaat kee.

Bebasee kaa sahaaraa jo thee ab talak.
Ab vo baisaakhiyaaN tootne ko chalee.

Aapsee rishte jaate kabhee ke sudhar.
Kuchh tumhaaree kamee kuchh hamaaree kamee.

Kho gayee shahr kee is chakachondh meN.
GaawN ke ghar kee chhat chaand kee chaandnee.

Pyaar bhaai kaa saaraa dharaa rah gayaa.
Maine hisse kee apnee zameeN maang lee.

Ab yahaaN fir vahaaN bhaagtaa fir rahaa.
Kitnaa bechain hai? aajkal aadmee.

Pyaar hotaa hai kaisaa ? dikhaayenge ham.
GaawN meN tum hamaare to aanaa kabhee.

Fon par,net par aur baaik pe bhee.
Badh gayee aaj bachhoN kee aawaargee.

Dr.Surendra Saini

Saini Sahaab Muafi chahte hai ke aapse yeH sawaal puchne ki
gustaqui kar raheN hai.. Hum mante haiN ke hum ( maiN ) koi shayar nahi..
Par ilm meiN izaafe ke liye yeH sawaal kar raheN hai..

Humne jo red highlight kiye huye kafiye haiN woH kafiye.. Naami kafiye hai.. aur jo maroon meiN highlight kiye haiN woH kafiye karni kafiye hai...

Humara yeHi sawaal aapse aapki aik post par tha par humara dobara us post par jana nahi ho payaa ... Humne ustaad shohraoN se sunaa tha ke Naami kafiye ke saath karni kafiye ka istemaal jayaaz nahi hai par kyuN jayaz nahi hai.. hume iski wajhaa nahi maloom.. par aapki us post meiN aapke sabhi kafiye ka sangam hume puri tarhaa se jayaz laga tha.. par aaj is kalaam meiN ustad shohara i baat jayaz lag rahi hai..

Hum bahut confuse se ho gaye haiN Plz humare is masail ko koi ustad shohara bhi suljhaye..

Gustaqui ke liye phir se muafi chahte haiN .. hum ilm meiN izafe ke hadh tak bahut khudgarz hai..

Humare sawaal ko khuda ke waste dil par nahi lijiyeNga.. yeH humare self Knowlege ke liye kiya hua sawaal hai

Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..


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Re: ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी /Zurm hai khudkushee ..............SAINI

«Reply #6 on: December 05, 2011, 04:25:53 AM »

Parwaaz saheb aadaab,
main aapkaa bahut hi shukrguzaar hooN.aapne ne jo swaal mujhse poochha hai uske baare men filhaal maiN itnaa kahoongaaki..
MaiN udu n likh saktaa n padh saktaa. jitnaa mere ghazal meN urdu kaa istemaal hotaa hai vo sab aap logo ke sohbat se seekhaa hai.rahee qafiye kee baat jo swwal aapne kiyaa hai uske baare men main zero hoon. maiN kuchh ustaad logoN se maswiraa karoongaa uske baad hee kuchh kahne kee position men hoongaa.jo bhee result hogaa usee se seekh kar main aage badhuungaa.main ye bhee maantaa hoon ki kaheen kaheen lfzon ke istemaal men bhee mujhse galtiyaan hui hain.mujhe unkaa ilm post karne ke baad hua aur tabhi maine unhe apni original script men theek kiyaa hai.kul milaa kar main bakhud ek muqammal shair naheen hoon main to abhee bhee seekhne kee stage se ghuzar rahaa. hoon main aapkaa ehsaanmand hoon jo aapne mujhe itnee qeemtee baat ke baare men batayaa hai main aapse phone par batiyaane kee khwaish rakhtaa hoon shukriyaa. 09719001632


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Re: ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी /Zurm hai khudkushee ..............SAINI

«Reply #7 on: December 05, 2011, 04:36:18 AM »

ghalat type ho gayaa thaa is tarah snjhe

"वो बैसाखी अब टूटने को चली"
"vo baisaakhee ab tootne ko chalee."


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Re: ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी /Zurm hai khudkushee ..............SAINI

«Reply #8 on: December 07, 2011, 06:22:19 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on December 02, 2011, 04:44:59 AM

ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी है बुरी मैकशी |
तुझसे रूठें तो हम क्या करें ज़िंदगी ||

फ़स्ल लाशों की लहरा रही चार सूँ |
सरफिरों ने बमों की वो बरसात की ||

बेबसी का सहारा जो थी अब तलक |
अब वो बैसाखी भी टूटने को चली ||

आपसी रिश्ते जाते कभी के सुधर |
कुछ तुम्हारी कमी कुछ हमारी कमी ||

खो गयी शहर की इस चकाचोंध में |
गावँ के घर की छत चाँद की चाँदनी ||

प्यार भाई का सारा धरा रह गया |
मैंने हिस्से की अपनी ज़मीं मांग ली ||

अब यहाँ फिर वहाँ भागता फिर रहा |
कितना बेचैन है ? आजकल आदमी ||

प्यार होता है कैसा ? दिखायेंगे हम |
गावँ में तुम हमारे तो आना कभी ||

फोन पर,नेट पर और बाईक पे भी |
बढ़ गयी आज बच्चों की आवारगी ||

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी

Zurm hai khudkushee hai buree maikashee.
Tujhse rootheN to ham kyaa kareN zindagee.

Fasl laashoN kee lahraa rahee chaar soon.
SarfiroN ne bamoN kee vo barsaat kee.

Bebasee kaa sahaaraa jo thee ab talak.
Ab vo baisaakhee bhee tootne ko chalee.

Aapsee rishte jaate kabhee ke sudhar.
Kuchh tumhaaree kamee kuchh hamaaree kamee.

Kho gayee shahr kee is chakachondh meN.
GaawN ke ghar kee chhat chaand kee chaandnee.

Pyaar bhaai kaa saaraa dharaa rah gayaa.
Maine hisse kee apnee zameeN maang lee.

Ab yahaaN fir vahaaN bhaagtaa fir rahaa.
Kitnaa bechain hai? aajkal aadmee.

Pyaar hotaa hai kaisaa ? dikhaayenge ham.
GaawN meN tum hamaare to aanaa kabhee.

Fon par,net par aur baaik pe bhee.
Badh gayee aaj bachhoN kee aawaargee.

Dr.Surendra Saini


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Re: ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी /Zurm hai khudkushee ..............SAINI

«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2012, 11:54:01 PM »

Bahut sundar hai...


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Re: ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी /Zurm hai khudkushee ..............SAINI

«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2012, 04:29:13 AM »

Khwaish ji shukriya


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Re: ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी /Zurm hai khudkushee ..............SAINI

«Reply #11 on: February 16, 2012, 04:30:03 AM »

Mukesh ji shukriya


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Re: ज़ुर्म है ख़ुदकुशी /Zurm hai khudkushee ..............SAINI

«Reply #12 on: February 16, 2012, 04:30:32 AM »

Bakbaki ji Bahut bahut shukriya


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