जितने करने थे /Jitne karne the ...SAINI

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जितने करने थे उसको सितम कर  गया |

और तो कुछ नहीं आँख नाम कर गया ||


इस  सफ़ाई  से चुकता किया है हिसाब |

एक  पाई  ज़ियादा  न कम कर गया ||


याद करने की  कोई बची  अब न बात |

आज सारा ही क़िस्सा ख़तम कर गया ||
 

पाल  रक्खे  थे दिल में जो उसके लिए |

दूर  सारे  के   सारे  भरम कर गया ||


जिसके  बनने  बनाने  में  बरसों लगे |

वो ख़तम रिश्ता सब एकदम कर गया ||
 

या  ख़ुदा  यूँ  हमारी  वफ़ाओं पे कौन ?

पैदा  सबके  दिलों  में वहम कर गया ||


अश्क़   मेरे   बता  देंगे इसका जवाब |

ज़ुल्म वो कर गया या करम  कर गया ||
 

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Jitne  karne  the  usko  sitam kar gayaa.
Aur to kuchh naheeN aankh  nam kar gayaa.

Is  safaai  se  chuktaa kiyaa hai hisaab.
Ek  paai   ziyaadaa  n  kam  kar   gayaa.

Yaad  karne  kee  koi  bachee  ab n baat.
Aaj  saaraa  hee qissaa khatam kar gayaa.

Paal  rakkhe  the  dil  meN jo uske liye.
Door  saare  ke  saare  bharam kar gayaa.

Jiske  banne  banaane  meN  barsoN  lage.
Vo  khatam  rishtaa  sab ekdam kar gayaa.

Yaa khudaa yooN hamaaree vafaaoN pe kaun.
Paidaa sabke diloN meN vaham  kar  gayaa.

Ashq   mere   bataa   denge  iskaa jwaab.
Zulm  vo  kar  gayaa yaa karam kar gayaa.


Dr. Surendra Saini




 
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«Reply #1 on: November 29, 2011, 05:23:07 AM »
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nice
jadoo kuch aisa wo mere dil per kar gaya
bina uske lagta hai jaise mei mar gaya
जितने करने थे उसको सितम कर  गया |

और तो कुछ नहीं आँख नाम कर गया ||


इस  सफ़ाई  से चुकता किया है हिसाब |

एक  पाई  ज़ियादा  न कम कर गया ||


याद करने की  कोई बची  अब न बात |

आज सारा ही क़िस्सा ख़तम कर गया ||
 

पाल  रक्खे  थे दिल में जो उसके लिए |

दूर  सारे  के   सारे  भरम कर गया ||


जिसके  बनने  बनाने  में  बरसों लगे |

वो ख़तम रिश्ता सब एकदम कर गया ||
 

या  ख़ुदा  यूँ  हमारी  वफ़ाओं पे कौन ?

पैदा  सबके  दिलों  में वहम कर गया ||


अश्क़   मेरे   बता  देंगे इसका जवाब |

ज़ुल्म वो कर गया या करम  कर गया ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी


Jitne  karne  the  usko  sitam kar gayaa.
Aur to kuchh naheeN aankh  nam kar gayaa.

Is  safaai  se  chuktaa kiyaa hai hisaab.
Ek  paai   ziyaadaa  n  kam  kar   gayaa.

Yaad  karne  kee  koi  bachee  ab n baat.
Aaj  saaraa  hee qissaa khatam kar gayaa.

Paal  rakkhe  the  dil  meN jo uske liye.
Door  saare  ke  saare  bharam kar gayaa.

Jiske  banne  banaane  meN  barsoN  lage.
Vo  khatam  rishtaa  sab ekdam kar gayaa.

Yaa khudaa yooN hamaaree vafaaoN pe kaun.
Paidaa sabke diloN meN vaham  kar  gayaa.

Ashq   mere   bataa   denge  iskaa jwaab.
Zulm  vo  kar  gayaa yaa karam kar gayaa.


Dr. Surendra Saini




 
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«Reply #2 on: November 29, 2011, 09:17:00 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: November 29, 2011, 09:25:06 AM »
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behad umdah .....gahari soch kaa aainaa,waaaaaaah!
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«Reply #4 on: November 29, 2011, 09:29:16 AM »
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Saini Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab kafi achchai kalaam se bazam ko
nawaaza hai.. Sabhi khayaal behad khoob rahe.. Usual Smile


Is khub kalaam par dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... Shaad o aabaad rahiye.
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2011, 10:23:31 AM »
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Wah wah Saini Saheb
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2011, 10:57:17 AM »
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sksaini4 ji,

Waah waah Saini Sahab bahut khoob
kya kahne.

Dili mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayen.

Saadar,

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #7 on: November 29, 2011, 12:06:18 PM »
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Saini saheb, Phir eik khoobsurat ghazal parhne ko mili.Shukriya aur mubarakbaad.Hasan
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«Reply #8 on: November 29, 2011, 12:33:21 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Sir
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«Reply #9 on: November 30, 2011, 04:00:49 AM »
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thanks shihab saheb
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