जिन पे लिखा था एक दिन नाम हमारा....

by usha rajesh on October 15, 2011, 05:04:55 PM
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Khwaish ji & Adil bechain ji,

Apki khwahish ke mutabik "jin pe likha tha...." lafjon ko mukammal gazal ka jama pahnane ki koshish ki hai. Umeed hai aapko pasand ayegi.

जिन पे लिखा था एक दिन नाम हमारा,खुद उन्होंने बडे रुआब से
बेरहमी से फाड दिए वही पन्ने दोस्तों ने,आज दोस्ती की किताब से
    
आज फुर्सत नहीं उन्हें दो पल, के पूछ लें मुड के खैरियत हमारी  
अभी कल ही की बात है, होता था जिक्र हमारा, घंटों माहताब से

हमें भी कसम है दोस्तों की, करेंगे दुआ उनके लिए तमाम उम्र
ऐ-खुदा खेलने ना पाए दुश्मन भी, इस कदर उनके ज़ज्बात से  
    
लाख कोशिशें की, ना करें उफ़ मगर, बेबसी बढ़ी कुछ इस क़दर
छलक ही पडे ये नामुराद अश्क, भरे जाम की तरह, हिजाब से  

तोड डाले तोहफे हमारे , जला के खाक कर दिए खत-ओ-किताबत
काश बता देते, क़र्ज़ हमारे प्यार का मगर, चुकायेंगे किस हिसाब से

जता के हक दोस्ती का हमने, जो पूछा सबब उनकी बेरुखी का
देखा निगाहों ने इस तरह, बुत बन के रह गए उनके जवाब से


                                        ----- उषा राजेश शर्मा
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«Reply #1 on: October 15, 2011, 07:13:15 PM »
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Usha Jee Aadaab!

Masha Allaah Janab behad khoob aur umdaa khayaalat
bayaaN kiye hai aapne... ashaaroN meiN kafi gehrai
sameti hai... Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe...

Is khub O umdaa kalaam par dili daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye... Likhate rahiye..

Aate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile   
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«Reply #2 on: October 16, 2011, 05:24:16 AM »
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 bahut khoob,ushaji. Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 16, 2011, 01:10:20 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 16, 2011, 05:24:16 AM
bahut khoob,ushaji. Applause

Siddiqui ji,
Bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #4 on: October 16, 2011, 01:11:11 PM »
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Usha Jee Aadaab!

Masha Allaah Janab behad khoob aur umdaa khayaalat
bayaaN kiye hai aapne... ashaaroN meiN kafi gehrai
sameti hai... Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe...

Is khub O umdaa kalaam par dili daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye... Likhate rahiye..

Aate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile   


Parwaaz Saheb,

Bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #5 on: October 16, 2011, 01:22:04 PM »
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Khwaish ji & Adil bechain ji,

Apki khwahish ke mutabik "jin pe likha tha...." lafjon ko mukammal gazal ka jama pahnane ki koshish ki hai. Umeed hai aapko pasand ayegi.

जिन पे लिखा था एक दिन नाम हमारा,खुद उन्होंने बडे रुआब से
बेरहमी से फाड दिए वही पन्ने दोस्तों ने,आज दोस्ती की किताब से
   
आज फुर्सत नहीं उन्हें दो पल, के पूछ लें मुड के खैरियत हमारी 
अभी कल ही की बात है, होता था जिक्र हमारा, घंटों माहताब से

हमें भी कसम है दोस्तों की, करेंगे दुआ उनके लिए तमाम उम्र
ऐ-खुदा खेलने ना पाए दुश्मन भी, इस कदर उनके ज़ज्बात से 
   
लाख कोशिशें की, ना करें उफ़ मगर, बेबसी बढ़ी कुछ इस क़दर
छलक ही पडे ये नामुराद अश्क, भरे जाम की तरह, हिजाब से 

तोड डाले तोहफे हमारे , जला के खाक कर दिए खत-ओ-किताबत
काश बता देते, क़र्ज़ हमारे प्यार का मगर, चुकायेंगे किस हिसाब से

जता के हक दोस्ती का हमने, जो पूछा सबब उनकी बेरुखी का
देखा निगाहों ने इस तरह, बुत बन के रह गए उनके जवाब से


                                        ----- उषा राजेश शर्मा


Waah Waah Waah!!! Kya kehne Usha Ji..Lajawaab..Khaas Taur Pe yeh As'haar..

"Laakh Koshishe Ki Naa Kare Uff Magar Bebasi Badhi Kuch Iss Kadar
 Chalak Hi Padhe Hai Namurad Ashq Bhare Jaam Ki Tarah Hijab Se

 Tod Daale Tohfe Humare Jala Ke Khaak Kar Diye Khat-o-Kitabaat
 Kaash Bata Dete,karz Humare pyaar Ka Magar Chukayenge Kis Hisab Se

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya Usha Ji Jo Aapne Humari Baat Rakhi.. happy9
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«Reply #6 on: October 16, 2011, 01:27:08 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 16, 2011, 01:22:04 PM

Waah Waah Waah!!! Kya kehne Usha Ji..Lajawaab..Khaas Taur Pe yeh As'haar..

"Laakh Koshishe Ki Naa Kare Uff Magar Bebasi Badhi Kuch Iss Kadar
 Chalak Hi Padhe Hai Namurad Ashq Bhare Jaam Ki Tarah Hijab Se

 Tod Daale Tohfe Humare Jala Ke Khaak Kar Diye Khat-o-Kitabaat
 Kaash Bata Dete,karz Humare pyaar Ka Magar Chukayenge Kis Hisab Se

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya Usha Ji Jo Aapne Humari Baat Rakhi.. happy9

Khwaish ji,
Bahut bahut shukriya hosla afjai ka.
Asha'ar Apko pasand aaye meri koshish kamyab ho gayi.icon_flower
Aage bhi yun hi sath dete rahiye.
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«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2011, 04:11:17 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Qais ji,

Thank you so much.
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Suresh ji,

Tahedil se shukriya.
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

sksaini ji,

Hosla afjai ka tahe dil se shukriya
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Sanjeev ji,

Bahut bahut shukriya apka waqt dene aur sarahne ke liye.
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