जिन्दगी है कि जी नहीं जाती.-सुधीर अश्क

by Sudhir Ashq on April 03, 2013, 09:39:55 PM
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खुदकुशी हमसे की नहीं जाती.
जिन्दगी है कि जी नहीं जाती.

दोस्ती टूटती है पल भर में,
उम्र भर दुश्मनी नहीं जाती.

जिस तरफ कहर है अंधेरों का,
क्यूँ वहाँ रोशनी  नहीं जाती.

कुछ नहीं,है सिला मुहब्बत का,
दिल से जो बेकली नहीं  जाती.

        -सुधीर अश्क

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Khudkushi hamse kee nahi jaati.
Zindgi hai ki jee nahi jaati.

Dosti Tootti hai pal bhar me,
Umr bhar dushmani nahi jaati.

Jis taraf kahar hai aandheron ka,
Kyon wahan roshni nahi jaati.

Kuchh nahi hai sila muhabbat ka,
Dil se jo bekali nahi jaati.

         -SUDHIR ASHQ
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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2013, 10:14:06 PM »
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bahut khoob सुधीर Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2013, 12:14:29 AM »
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Sudhir Ashq saheb,
              Bahut hi umda ghazal kahi hai aapne, Meri Mubarakbaad qubool farmayein.......................
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«Reply #4 on: April 04, 2013, 12:40:57 AM »
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Sudhir Ji Bahut Achchha Likha Hai Aapne. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2013, 12:45:51 AM »
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Very Nice!!!

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Khudkushi hamse kee nahi jaati.
Zindgi hai ki jee nahi jaati.   Thumbs UP

Dosti Tootti hai pal bhar me,
Umr bhar dushmani nahi jaati.      bahut sahi  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kahar barpa hai andheron ka jahan,
Kyon wahan roshni nahi jaati.      Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kuchh nahi hai sila muhabbat ka,
Dil se jo bekali nahi jaati.       wah waaaah  Thumbs UP

-SUDHIR ASHQ


Wonderful ghazal sudhir jee. bahut bahut daad
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«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2013, 02:06:42 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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Matla laajavaab..
is muqammal ghazal par daad haazir hai.
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«Reply #9 on: April 04, 2013, 12:53:16 PM »
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excellent
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«Reply #10 on: April 06, 2013, 08:54:05 PM »
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खुदकुशी हमसे की नहीं जाती.
जिन्दगी है कि जी नहीं जाती.

दोस्ती टूटती है पल भर में,
उम्र भर दुश्मनी नहीं जाती.

जिस तरफ कहर है अंधेरों का,
क्यूँ वहाँ रोशनी  नहीं जाती.

कुछ नहीं,है सिला मुहब्बत का,
दिल से जो बेकली नहीं  जाती.

        -सुधीर अश्क

**********************

Khudkushi hamse kee nahi jaati.
Zindgi hai ki jee nahi jaati.

Dosti Tootti hai pal bhar me,
Umr bhar dushmani nahi jaati.

Jis taraf kahar hai aandheron ka,
Kyon wahan roshni nahi jaati.

Kuchh nahi hai sila muhabbat ka,
Dil se jo bekali nahi jaati.

         -SUDHIR ASHQ


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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2013, 10:42:47 PM »
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खुदकुशी हमसे की नहीं जाती.
जिन्दगी है कि जी नहीं जाती.

दोस्ती टूटती है पल भर में,
उम्र भर दुश्मनी नहीं जाती.

जिस तरफ कहर है अंधेरों का,
क्यूँ वहाँ रोशनी  नहीं जाती.

कुछ नहीं,है सिला मुहब्बत का,
दिल से जो बेकली नहीं  जाती.

        -सुधीर अश्क

**********************

Khudkushi hamse kee nahi jaati.
Zindgi hai ki jee nahi jaati.

Dosti Tootti hai pal bhar me,
Umr bhar dushmani nahi jaati.

Jis taraf kahar hai aandheron ka,
Kyon wahan roshni nahi jaati.

Kuchh nahi hai sila muhabbat ka,
Dil se jo bekali nahi jaati.

         -SUDHIR ASHQ

bahut khoobsurati se likhi gayi rachana......
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«Reply #12 on: April 10, 2013, 07:28:57 PM »
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very very good, bahut dino baad kuch aisa padha hai ki lutf aa gaya, very beautiful
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