जो कुछ भी हूँ फज़ल तुम्हारी है ...

by Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on November 08, 2013, 05:00:14 PM
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मुशायरे में ये हलचल तुम्हारी है...
अल्फाज़ मेरे हैं ग़ज़ल तुम्हारी है...

मैं भरा हूँ पोशीदा ऐब से यारब...
जो कुछ भी हूँ फज़ल तुम्हारी है...

तेरे होने का अब सबूत मांगे  है..
ऐ खुदाई ये  अज़ल  तुम्हारी है...

कितने खुश हैं  हारकर भी  हम...
जीत तो ये मुकम्मल तुम्हारी है...

माना कि बेचैन बहुत हैं रहते हम...
पर  इशारों कि  पहल तुम्हारी है...

दूर से दिखे है जलसागाह  सा ये...
"मुसाहिब" ये मकतल तुम्हारी है...

Mushaiire Mein Ye Halchaal Tumhaari Hai...
Alfaaz mere haiN Ghazal Tumhaari Hai...

MaiN Bhara HuN Poshiidaa Aib Se Yarab...
Jo Kuch Bhi HuN Fazal Tumhaari Hai...

Tere Hone Ka ab sabut Maange Hai...
Ae Khudaii Ye Azal Tumhaari Hai...

Kitne Khush HaiN Harkar Bhi Ham...
Jeet To Ye Mukammal Tumhaari Hai...

Mana Ki BechaiN Bahut HaiN Rahte Hum...
Par IsharoN Ki Pahal Tumhaari Hai...

Door Se Dikhe Hai JalsaGaah Se Ye...
"Musaahib" Ye Maqtal Tumhaari Hai...


पोशीदा - hidden, अज़ल - death, मकतल - place of execution/punishment
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«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2013, 05:15:34 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2013, 05:18:02 PM »
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मुशायरे में ये हलचल तुम्हारी है...
अल्फाज़ मेरे हैं ग़ज़ल तुम्हारी है...

मैं भरा हूँ पोशीदा ऐब से यारब...
जो कुछ भी हूँ फज़ल तुम्हारी है...

तेरे होने का अब सबूत मांगे  है..
ऐ खुदाई ये  अज़ल  तुम्हारी है...

कितने खुश हैं  हारकर भी  हम...
जीत तो ये मुकम्मल तुम्हारी है...

माना कि बेचैन बहुत हैं रहते हम...
पर  इशारों कि  पहल तुम्हारी है...

दूर से दिखे है जलसागाह  सा ये...
"मुसाहिब" ये मकतल तुम्हारी है...

Mushaiire Mein Ye Halchaal Tumhaari Hai...
Alfaaz mere haiN Ghazal Tumhaari Hai...

MaiN Bhara HuN Poshiidaa Aib Se Yarab...
Jo Kuch Bhi HuN Fazal Tumhaari Hai...

Tere Hone Ka ab sabut Maange Hai...
Ae Khudaii Ye Azal Tumhaari Hai...

Kitne Khush HaiN Harkar Bhi Ham...
Jeet To Ye Mukammal Tumhaari Hai...

Mana Ki BechaiN Bahut HaiN Rahte Hum...
Par IsharoN Ki Pahal Tumhaari Hai...

Door Se Dikhe Hai JalsaGaah Se Ye...
"Musaahib" Ye Maqtal Tumhaari Hai...


पोशीदा - hidden, अज़ल - death,(no begining, supreme,eternal) मकतल - place of execution/punishment

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«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2013, 05:28:13 PM »
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Waah waah waah musahib ji ... khoobsurat aashaar ... Fiqr ki gehraayee aur alfaaz ki dilkashi se ek dilfareb qalaam taameer kiya apne .... Dheron daad !!!
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«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2013, 05:31:44 PM »
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very  n ice............. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 08, 2013, 05:50:31 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2013, 06:58:29 PM »
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bahut khoob Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2013, 07:11:58 PM »
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bahut khoob..happy9
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«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2013, 08:22:25 PM »
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Bishwajeet Jee Aadaab...!

Bahut khoob janab bahut umdaa badi achchi kalaam huyi hai...
Khoob khayaaloN ko achche lafz diye haiN janab...

Waise toH kalaam khoob rahi par yeH quoted sher behad laa jawaab rahe... In par humari hazaaroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...




मैं भरा हूँ पोशीदा ऐब से यारब...
जो कुछ भी हूँ फज़ल तुम्हारी है...

कितने खुश हैं  हारकर भी  हम...
जीत तो ये मुकम्मल तुम्हारी है...

माना कि बेचैन बहुत हैं रहते हम...
पर  इशारों कि  पहल तुम्हारी है...



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«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2013, 09:07:15 PM »
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Waaaah bahut khoob...keep it up...Raqeeb
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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2013, 09:08:16 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut khoooooooooob..bishwajeet qalam chalne hi lagi nahin hai mashallah bahut jaan bhi aa gayi hai.. bole to zabardastttttttt likhe ho... dheron dheron daaaaaad...

MaiN Bhara HuN Poshiidaa Aib Se Yarab...
Jo Kuch Bhi HuN Fazal Tumhaari Hai...

Kitne Khush HaiN Harkar Bhi Ham...
Jeet To Ye Mukammal Tumhaari Hai...

Mana Ki BechaiN Bahut HaiN Rahte Hum...
Par IsharoN Ki Pahal Tumhaari Hai...
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«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2013, 09:32:30 PM »
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Beautiful..
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«Reply #13 on: November 09, 2013, 12:03:33 AM »
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मैं भरा हूँ पोशीदा ऐब से यारब...
जो कुछ भी हूँ फज़ल तुम्हारी है...

कितने खुश हैं  हारकर भी  हम...
जीत तो ये मुकम्मल तुम्हारी है...

Kya baat hai..
bahut badhiya Musahib saheb
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«Reply #14 on: November 09, 2013, 12:05:56 AM »
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मुशायरे में ये हलचल तुम्हारी है...
अल्फाज़ मेरे हैं ग़ज़ल तुम्हारी है...

मैं भरा हूँ पोशीदा ऐब से यारब...
जो कुछ भी हूँ फज़ल तुम्हारी है...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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