ठोकर...अमित प्रकाश "मीत"

by amit_prakash_meet on January 16, 2013, 11:35:03 AM
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नासमझ समझ कर दुनिया ने मारी ठोकर

कभी भी ना रहने दिया किसी के भी होकर



हो गये वो गैर के  चाहा था जिनको कभी

उमर भर पछताते ही रहे हम उनको खोकर



सिला-ए-ज़िन्दगी  का तो कोई गुमां न था

फूल क्या चुनते जब आये थे काँटे बोकर

 

चार लफ़्ज़ों का फ़साना ही तो है ये ज़िन्दगी

जी भरकर जी ले इसको  क्यूँ गाता है रोकर



सपने सजों के  रखता रहा उम्र-ए-तमाम "मीत"

उठ जाग पा ले इनको क्यों खोता है सोकर

 

Nasamajh samajh kar duniya ne maari thokar

Kabhi bhi na rehne diya kise ke bhi hokar



Ho gaye vo gair ke chaha tha jinko kabhi

Umar bhar pachtaate hee rahe hum unko khokar



Sila-e-Zindagi ka to koi gumaan n tha

Phool kya chunte jab aaye the kaante bokar



Chaar lafzon ka fasaana hee to hai yeh zindagi

Jee  bhar ke jee le isko kyon gaata hai rokar



Sapne sajon ke rakhta raha umr-e-tamam "meet"

Uth jaag paa le inko kyon khota hai sokar
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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2013, 12:26:59 PM »
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waah kya baat hai amit jee..........ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2013, 12:49:45 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2013, 02:24:53 PM »
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bahut khubsurat likha hai , amit ji .  congrats.
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«Reply #4 on: January 16, 2013, 02:55:56 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah .. kyaa baat hai Amit ji... bahut bahut khoob....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: January 16, 2013, 02:57:56 PM »
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nice gazhal  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: January 16, 2013, 04:32:51 PM »
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waah kya baat hai amit jee..........ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
                                                                                                                                                          Thanks a lot Aru ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2013, 12:02:59 AM »
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नासमझ समझ कर दुनिया ने मारी ठोकर

कभी भी ना रहने दिया किसी के भी होकर



हो गये वो गैर के  चाहा था जिनको कभी

उमर भर पछताते ही रहे हम उनको खोकर



सिला-ए-ज़िन्दगी  का तो कोई गुमां न था

फूल क्या चुनते जब आये थे काँटे बोकर

 

चार लफ़्ज़ों का फ़साना ही तो है ये ज़िन्दगी

जी भरकर जी ले इसको  क्यूँ गाता है रोकर



सपने सजों के  रखता रहा उम्र-ए-तमाम "मीत"

उठ जाग पा ले इनको क्यों खोता है सोकर

 

Nasamajh samajh kar duniya ne maari thokar

Kabhi bhi na rehne diya kise ke bhi hokar



Ho gaye vo gair ke chaha tha jinko kabhi

Umar bhar pachtaate hee rahe hum unko khokar



Sila-e-Zindagi ka to koi gumaan n tha

Phool kya chunte jab aaye the kaante bokar



Chaar lafzon ka fasaana hee to hai yeh zindagi

Jee  bhar ke jee le isko kyon gaata hai rokar



Sapne sajon ke rakhta raha umr-e-tamam "meet"

Uth jaag paa le inko kyon khota hai sokar

khub
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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2013, 05:04:41 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya baat hai bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2013, 06:24:31 AM »
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Nice
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Nice
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2013, 10:49:44 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thanks a lot Mishra Ji
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bahut khubsurat likha hai , amit ji .  congrats.
Bahut bahut shukriya Siddiqui Ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 18, 2013, 05:15:18 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah .. kyaa baat hai Amit ji... bahut bahut khoob....!!!

Bahut bahut shukriya Hriday Ji
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«Reply #14 on: January 18, 2013, 06:30:42 AM »
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nice gazhal  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks a lot Suman Ji
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