ताबीर-ए-ख्व़ाब....अमित प्रकाश "मीत"

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कोई कल कह रहा था वो आयेंगे मेरे दर पर  
ताबीर-ए-ख्व़ाब है या करम मौला का मुझ पर


न जाने क्या करूँगा जब वो होंगे रूबरू मुझसे
देखूंगा सिर्फ़ उनको तसल्ली से मैं जी भर कर


कभी खेलूँगा उनके मुलायम रेशमी बालों से मैं
कभी चूमूंगा उनके मरमरी हाथों को रह रह कर


ये बाहें तो मचलेंगी उन्हें बाहों में भरने को
लब थर्थारायेंगे उनके लबों से मिल मिल कर


अब तो चलती रहें कभी न खत्म हो ये रातें
चाँदनी ही बिछी रहे अब “मीत” की छत पर  



Koi kal keh raha tha vo aayenge mere dar par
Taabir-e-khwaab hai ya karam maula ka mujh par

Na jaane kya karunga jab vo honge rubaru mujhse
Dekhoonga sirf unko tasalli se main jee bhar kar

Kabhi kheloonga unke mulayam reshmi balon se main
Kabhi chumunga unke marmari hathon ko reh reh kar

Ye baahein to machlengi unhe baahon mein bharne ko
Lab thartharayenge unke labon se mil mil kar

Ab to chalti rahein kabhi na khatam ho ye raatein
Chandani hi bichhi rahe ab “meet” kee chhat par
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2013, 07:20:47 PM »
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bahut badhiya bahut hee khubsurat qallaam amit bhai.... bade romantic ho rahe ho... NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2013, 07:21:40 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on August 05, 2013, 07:18:29 PM
कोई कल कह रहा था वो आयेंगे मेरे दर पर  
ताबीर-ए-ख्व़ाब है या करम मौला का मुझ पर


न जाने क्या करूँगा जब वो होंगे रूबरू मुझसे
देखूंगा सिर्फ़ उनको तसल्ली से मैं जी भर कर


कभी खेलूँगा उनके मुलायम रेशमी बालों से मैं
कभी चूमूंगा उनके मरमरी हाथों को रह रह कर


ये बाहें तो मचलेंगी उन्हें बाहों में भरने को
लब थर्थारायेंगे उनके लबों से मिल मिल कर


अब तो चलती रहें कभी न खत्म हो ये रातें
चाँदनी ही बिछी रहे अब “मीत” की छत पर  



Koi kal keh raha tha vo aayenge mere dar par
Taabir-e-khwaab hai ya karam maula ka mujh par

Na jaane kya karunga jab vo honge rubaru mujhse
Dekhoonga sirf unko tasalli se main jee bhar kar

Kabhi kheloonga unke mulayam reshmi balon se main
Kabhi chumunga unke marmari hathon ko reh reh kar

Ye baahein to machlengi unhe baahon mein bharne ko
Lab thartharayenge unke labon se mil mil kar

Ab to chalti rahein kabhi na khatam ho ye raatein
Chandani hi bichhi rahe ab “meet” kee chhat par

superlike creation... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2013, 07:34:15 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on August 05, 2013, 07:20:47 PM
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bahut badhiya bahut hee khubsurat qallaam amit bhai.... bade romantic ho rahe ho... NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa
बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया सौदागर जी, मौसम की मेहरबानी है
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2013, 08:09:08 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on August 05, 2013, 07:18:29 PM





Koi kal keh raha tha vo aayenge mere dar par
Taabir-e-khwaab hai ya karam maula ka mujh par
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Na jaane kya karunga jab vo honge rubaru mujhse
Dekhoonga sirf unko tasalli se main jee bhar kar
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Kabhi kheloonga unke mulayam reshmi balon se main
Kabhi chumunga unke marmari hathon ko reh reh kar
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Ye baahein to machlengi unhe baahon mein bharne ko
Lab thartharayenge unke labon se mil mil kar
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Ab to chalti rahein kabhi na khatam ho ye raatein
Chandani hi bichhi rahe ab “meet” kee chhat par
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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waah waah amit bhai.. ghazab dhaa rahe ho.. behad umdaa peshkash.. Usual Smile

lagta hai aaj sabpe baarish ka jabardast asar hua hai.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2013, 08:11:10 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2013, 09:59:34 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2013, 10:21:01 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on August 05, 2013, 07:18:29 PM
कोई कल कह रहा था वो आयेंगे मेरे दर पर 
ताबीर-ए-ख्व़ाब है या करम मौला का मुझ पर


न जाने क्या करूँगा जब वो होंगे रूबरू मुझसे
देखूंगा सिर्फ़ उनको तसल्ली से मैं जी भर कर


कभी खेलूँगा उनके मुलायम रेशमी बालों से मैं
कभी चूमूंगा उनके मरमरी हाथों को रह रह कर


ये बाहें तो मचलेंगी उन्हें बाहों में भरने को
लब थर्थारायेंगे उनके लबों से मिल मिल कर


अब तो चलती रहें कभी न खत्म हो ये रातें
चाँदनी ही बिछी रहे अब “मीत” की छत पर   



Koi kal keh raha tha vo aayenge mere dar par
Taabir-e-khwaab hai ya karam maula ka mujh par

Na jaane kya karunga jab vo honge rubaru mujhse
Dekhoonga sirf unko tasalli se main jee bhar kar

Kabhi kheloonga unke mulayam reshmi balon se main
Kabhi chumunga unke marmari hathon ko reh reh kar

Ye baahein to machlengi unhe baahon mein bharne ko
Lab thartharayenge unke labon se mil mil kar

Ab to chalti rahein kabhi na khatam ho ye raatein
Chandani hi bichhi rahe ab “meet” kee chhat par


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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2013, 11:15:14 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob Amit ji.....!!!
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Woooooooooooow. bahut hi romantic peshkash amitji. mujhe aapki yeh ghazal behad pasand aayi. dheron dheron daad..
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umda ehsaashon se labrez is peshkash pe meri dheroN daad hai aapko... yuNhi likhte rahen janaab...
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«Reply #12 on: August 06, 2013, 06:14:44 AM »
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Kya baat kya baat waaaah waah Usual Smile
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 Applause Applause
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so sweet
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