तुझसे ना मिला होता..... "ऋषि अग्रवाल"

by Rishi Agarwal on March 25, 2016, 03:48:03 AM
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तुझसे ना मिला होता तो अच्छा होता
तुझे अपना न कहता तो अच्छा होता

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«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2016, 05:09:45 AM »
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श्री श्री ऋषि जी, बहुत ही सुंदर कलाम ढेरो दाद एक राऊ के साथ स्वीकार करे
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2016, 05:17:59 AM »
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श्री श्री ऋषि जी, बहुत ही सुंदर कलाम ढेरो दाद एक राऊ के साथ स्वीकार करे

आभार आपका आदरणीय राम कृष्ण रस्तोगी जी
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2016, 05:46:09 AM »
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bahut achha hai kalaam huzur aapka.. dhero daad meri taraf se , Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2016, 10:04:26 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat qalaam hai Rishi Jee. I do have a suggestion though. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Sher 1.  Tujh se naa milaa hotaa to achhaa hotaa
              Tujhe apnaa naa kahaa hotaa to achhaa hotaa

Sher 2.  Main mitaa thaa terey chere kee hansi dekh
             Gar nazar hee naa milaa hotaa to achhaa hotaa

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«Reply #5 on: March 27, 2016, 07:00:21 AM »
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Bahot khooob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 27, 2016, 07:56:41 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah Rishi ji, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke....!!!
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