तेरे दर्द से सब अंजान हैं... "ऋषि अग्रवाल"

by Rishi Agarwal on January 22, 2015, 02:18:10 PM
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ख्वाब देखा तूने या देख लिया तूफ़ान हैं,
अधूरे जज्बातों से बिखरी तेरी दुकान हैं..

उलझनों से तो घिर आई, तेरी जिंदगानी,
जिधर भी तू जा रहा, खाली गुलिस्तान हैं..

भाग रहा हैं क्यूँ पीछे, जाती खुशियों के,
पलट के देख तो सही गलियाँ सुनसान हैं..

चेहरे पे उभर आई, ख्यालों की उलझने,
सिमटती खुशियाँ, बिखरी तेरी दास्तान हैं..

भटक रहा हैं तू दरदर लियें अरमानों को,
गिरती दीवारें नहीं बनती कभी मकान हैं..

मौज मस्ती में लुटा दी, तूने सारी जवानी,
बुझता दिया नहीं बनता कभी सुलतान हैं..

मत सूना कहानी, बदल रहे हालातों की,
मर गया जमीर, इंसानियत लहूलुहान हैं..

देखा नहीं तूने, आईने से आगे कुछ भी,
डूबती कश्तियां, नहीं बनाती पहचान हैं..

बैठा हैं क्यूँ अँधेरे में, दीपक जलाएं हुवे,
उजड़ी हुई जिन्दगी तो मौत के समान हैं..

वक्त बेवक्त मत सताया कर साहिलों को,
जानता हैं 'ऋषि' तेरे दर्द से सब अंजान हैं..


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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2015, 02:51:55 PM »
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अति सुन्दर रचना श्री ऋषि जी -आर के रस्तोगी
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2015, 03:21:34 PM »
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अति सुन्दर रचना श्री ऋषि जी -आर के रस्तोगी

सादर आभार आदरणीय राम कृष्ण रस्तोगी जी
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2015, 07:17:56 PM »
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Rishi jee Aadaab ... !

Waah janab waaH kia kahne ... behad gehre ahsaas O khayaaloN ko khoob lafz diye hai janab ...

Bahut khoob bahut umdaa ... Aaj waqai laga hume ke Rishi jee ne is kalaam ko dil ki gehraai se nikaala hai ...
Is umda peshkash par humari hazaaroN dili daad kabul kijiye...


Likhte rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... 



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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2015, 04:20:40 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

baut khub rishiji......
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2015, 01:03:24 PM »
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Rishi jee Aadaab ... !

Waah janab waaH kia kahne ... behad gehre ahsaas O khayaaloN ko khoob lafz diye hai janab ...

Bahut khoob bahut umdaa ... Aaj waqai laga hume ke Rishi jee ne is kalaam ko dil ki gehraai se nikaala hai ...
Is umda peshkash par humari hazaaroN dili daad kabul kijiye...


Likhte rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... 





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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2015, 01:08:39 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

baut khub rishiji......

सादर आभार आदरणीय मन जी
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