दायरा तोडना ही मुश्किल था...."परम"

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दायरा तोङना ही मुश्किल था,
ये हुनर सीखना ही मुश्किल था.

उम्र भर ओंठ बस हिलाते रहे,
शोर में बोलना ही मुश्किल था.

अब नजूमी को दोष क्या देना,
हादसा रोकना ही मुश्किल था.

उम्र कमज़ोरियों के साथ कटी,
आदतें छोङना ही मुश्किल था.

अपनी परछाइयों से घिरते गए,
आइने तोङना ही मुश्किल था.

वो गली छूट ही गई आख़िर,
रास्ता मोङना ही मुश्किल था.

शेर बेवज़्न कर गयी वो "परम"
फ़िक्र को तौलना ही मुश्किल था.

“परम”
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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2014, 01:23:53 PM »
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दायरा तोङना ही मुश्किल था,
ये हुनर सीखना ही मुश्किल था.

उम्र भर ओंठ बस हिलाते रहे,
शोर में बोलना ही मुश्किल था.

अब नजूमी को दोष क्या देना,
हादसा रोकना ही मुश्किल था.

उम्र कमज़ोरियों के साथ कटी,
आदतें छोङना ही मुश्किल था.

अपनी परछाइयों से घिरते गए,
आइने तोङना ही मुश्किल था.

वो गली छूट ही गई आख़िर,
रास्ता मोङना ही मुश्किल था.

शेर बेवज़्न कर गयी वो "परम"
फ़िक्र को तौलना ही मुश्किल था.

“परम”


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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2014, 01:42:34 PM »
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bahut khub paramji....
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2014, 02:54:08 PM »
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अपनी परछाइयों से घिरते गए,
आइने तोङना ही मुश्किल था.

Khoobsurat Peshkash..
Bahut khoob..
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2014, 03:09:50 PM »
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दायरा तोङना ही मुश्किल था,
ये हुनर सीखना ही मुश्किल था.

उम्र भर ओंठ बस हिलाते रहे,
शोर में बोलना ही मुश्किल था.

अब नजूमी को दोष क्या देना,
हादसा रोकना ही मुश्किल था.

उम्र कमज़ोरियों के साथ कटी,
आदतें छोङना ही मुश्किल था.

अपनी परछाइयों से घिरते गए,
आइने तोङना ही मुश्किल था.

वो गली छूट ही गई आख़िर,
रास्ता मोङना ही मुश्किल था.

शेर बेवज़्न कर गयी वो "परम"
फ़िक्र को तौलना ही मुश्किल था.

“परम”

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Kya Khoobsurat Likha hai. Kehne ko shabd nahin hai.
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Wah Wah!!! Bohat hi Khub!!! Kya Khub Likhna Hai Aap Ne!! Har Ashaar Qabil-e-Tareef Hai. Aaise hi likhte Rahiye.

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Bahut umda ghazalat hai .......daad o mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2014, 03:14:26 AM »
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Quote from: Anaarhi on April 02, 2014, 12:48:21 PM
दायरा तोङना ही मुश्किल था,
ये हुनर सीखना ही मुश्किल था.

उम्र भर ओंठ बस हिलाते रहे,
शोर में बोलना ही मुश्किल था.

अब नजूमी को दोष क्या देना,
हादसा रोकना ही मुश्किल था.

उम्र कमज़ोरियों के साथ कटी,
आदतें छोङना ही मुश्किल था.

अपनी परछाइयों से घिरते गए,
आइने तोङना ही मुश्किल था.

वो गली छूट ही गई आख़िर,
रास्ता मोङना ही मुश्किल था.

शेर बेवज़्न कर गयी वो "परम"
फ़िक्र को तौलना ही मुश्किल था.

“परम”


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Bahut Bahut Khooob...

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Waaaaaaaaaaah Param ji kya kehne.....bahut hi umda peshkash kee hai aapne... mujhe aapki yeh rachna bahut pasand aayi...hazaron dili daaaaad qubool kare...
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bahut hi umdaa ....shabd hi nahi mil rahe h, taafir karne ke liye........(/colour)
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.bahut hi umda peshkash kee hai aapne... mujhe aapki yeh rachna bahut pasand aayi...hazaron dili daaaaad qubool kare...
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ek  rau kubool karein param ji
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bahut khub paramji....
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Quote from: Armaan.Armaan on April 02, 2014, 02:54:08 PM
अपनी परछाइयों से घिरते गए,
आइने तोङना ही मुश्किल था.

Khoobsurat Peshkash..
Bahut khoob..
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