दिल तलबगार होने लगा.-सुधीर अश्क

by Sudhir Ashq on March 19, 2013, 11:35:53 AM
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आपसे प्यार होने लगा.
जीना दुश्वार होने लगा.

सुर्ख लब देखकर आपके,
दिल तलबगार होने लगा.

आप मोती बने प्यार के,
और मैं हार होने लगा.

देखकर शोखियाँ आपकी,
गुल भी गुलजार होने लगा.

आपका नाम लब से लिया,
मैं खतावार होने लगा.

दोस्तों से सिला ये मिला,
पीठ पर वार होने लगा.

ख्वाब टूटे तो मैं दोस्तों,
अश्क की धार होने लगा.

     -सुधीर अश्क
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2013, 11:36:54 AM »
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waah sudhir ji bohut khub
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2013, 11:58:48 AM »
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behatreen peshkash keep it up
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2013, 12:15:04 PM »
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nice sudhir ji.
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«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2013, 12:45:51 PM »
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Behad pyaari ghazal hai sudhir ji. bahut khoob. dheron daad.
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«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2013, 01:27:30 PM »
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Sudhir Jee Aadaab!



WaaH janab waaH badi achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne... behad khoobsurat
aur umdaa ashaar rahe... Usual Smile

Aur in quoted ashaaroN ke kia kahne janab waaH waaH waaH behad umdaa
sher huye haiN... Usual Smile
Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..


Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile


Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on March 19, 2013, 11:35:53 AM

सुर्ख लब देखकर आपके,
दिल तलबगार होने लगा.

आप मोती बने प्यार के,
और मैं हार होने लगा.

दोस्तों से सिला ये मिला,
पीठ पर वार होने लगा.



     -सुधीर अश्क
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«Reply #6 on: March 19, 2013, 02:17:12 PM »
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Wah Wah!!! Bohat Khub Sudhir Jee!!! Very Romantic!!!

आपसे प्यार होने लगा.
जीना दुश्वार होने लगा.
 
सुर्ख लब देखकर आपके,
दिल तलबगार होने लगा.

देखकर शोखियाँ आपकी,
गुल भी गुलजार होने लगा.

आपका नाम लब से लिया,
मैं खतावार होने लगा.

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bahut hi achi rachna hai...wah wah wah.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: March 19, 2013, 02:41:05 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on March 19, 2013, 11:35:53 AM
आपसे प्यार होने लगा.
जीना दुश्वार होने लगा.

सुर्ख लब देखकर आपके,
दिल तलबगार होने लगा.

आप मोती बने प्यार के,
और मैं हार होने लगा.

देखकर शोखियाँ आपकी,
गुल भी गुलजार होने लगा.

आपका नाम लब से लिया,
मैं खतावार होने लगा.

दोस्तों से सिला ये मिला,
पीठ पर वार होने लगा.

ख्वाब टूटे तो मैं दोस्तों,
अश्क की धार होने लगा.

     -सुधीर अश्क

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bahut bahut khoob excellant ghazal  Thumbs UP
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KEEP UP THE GUD JOB....
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«Reply #11 on: March 21, 2013, 06:32:11 PM »
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Waah waah waah waah Sudhir ji, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut achcha lagaa padh ke....!!!
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on March 19, 2013, 11:35:53 AM
आपसे प्यार होने लगा.
जीना दुश्वार होने लगा.

सुर्ख लब देखकर आपके,
दिल तलबगार होने लगा.

आप मोती बने प्यार के,
और मैं हार होने लगा.

देखकर शोखियाँ आपकी,
गुल भी गुलजार होने लगा.

आपका नाम लब से लिया,
मैं खतावार होने लगा.

दोस्तों से सिला ये मिला,
पीठ पर वार होने लगा.

ख्वाब टूटे तो मैं दोस्तों,
अश्क की धार होने लगा.

     -सुधीर अश्क


                      jab  se ishq  hua hai mujhe!
                      waswasa baar-baar hone laga!!



bahut khoob........!
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«Reply #13 on: May 14, 2013, 03:00:56 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khub Sudhir Ji


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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