दिल में कितना गुबार रखते हैं.-सुधीर अश्क

by Sudhir Ashq on June 19, 2013, 04:14:34 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 19, 2013, 11:27:52 PM »
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waah waah waah Sudhir jee, bahut hi khoob, bahut achhi ghazal hai, 5th she'r khususann bahut pasand aaya, dheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN.
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«Reply #16 on: June 19, 2013, 11:48:32 PM »
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Wwwwaaaahhhhh zabardast ghazal .... Paanee ki tarah saaf, gehree aur jise chhue use apna ehsaas karaatee huwee ." beshumaar daad apko !
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«Reply #17 on: June 20, 2013, 04:08:55 AM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 19, 2013, 04:14:34 PM
लफ्ज़  होठों  पे  चार   रखते हैं.
दिल में कितना गुबार रखते हैं.

वक्त पे कोई साथ दिखता नहीं,
दोस्त    वैसे   हज़ार   रखते हैं.

लेखा जोखा ही बन न पाये कभी,
इतना  सर  पे  उधार  रखते हैं.

यूँ तो मिलते हैं गर्म जोशी से,
लोग  दिल  में  दरार  रखते हैं.

आप पायेगें यकीनन मंजिल,
खुद पे  गर  एतबार  रखते हैं.

बात जो दिल की साफ कहते हैं,
अश्क  उनमें शुमार रखते हैं.

-सुधीर अश्क

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LAFZ  HOTON PE CHAAR RAKHTE HAIN.
DIL ME KITNAA GUBAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

WAQT  PE  KOI  SAATH DIKHTA NAHI,
DOST  WAISE  HAZAAR  RAKHTE HAIN.

LEKHA JOKHA HI BAN NA PAYA KABHI,
ITNA  SAR  PE UDHAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

YUN  TO MILTE HAIN GARM JOSHI SE,
LOG  DIL  ME  DARAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

AAP   PAAYENGE  YAKINAN   MANZIL,
KHUD  PE GAR AITBAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

BAAT  JO  DIL KI SAAF KAHTE HAIN,
ASHQ  UNMEN  SHUMAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

-SUDHIR ASHQ

बहोत खूब भाई 'अश्क' जी....!!
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«Reply #18 on: June 20, 2013, 04:30:06 AM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 19, 2013, 04:14:34 PM
लफ्ज़  होठों  पे  चार   रखते हैं.
दिल में कितना गुबार रखते हैं.

वक्त पे कोई साथ दिखता नहीं,
दोस्त    वैसे   हज़ार   रखते हैं.

लेखा जोखा ही बन न पाये कभी,
इतना  सर  पे  उधार  रखते हैं.

यूँ तो मिलते हैं गर्म जोशी से,
लोग  दिल  में  दरार  रखते हैं.

आप पायेगें यकीनन मंजिल,
खुद पे  गर  एतबार  रखते हैं.

बात जो दिल की साफ कहते हैं,
अश्क  उनमें शुमार रखते हैं.

-सुधीर अश्क

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LAFZ  HOTON PE CHAAR RAKHTE HAIN.
DIL ME KITNAA GUBAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

WAQT  PE  KOI  SAATH DIKHTA NAHI,
DOST  WAISE  HAZAAR  RAKHTE HAIN.

LEKHA JOKHA HI BAN NA PAYA KABHI,
ITNA  SAR  PE UDHAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

YUN  TO MILTE HAIN GARM JOSHI SE,
LOG  DIL  ME  DARAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

AAP   PAAYENGE  YAKINAN   MANZIL,
KHUD  PE GAR AITBAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

BAAT  JO  DIL KI SAAF KAHTE HAIN,
ASHQ  UNMEN  SHUMAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

-SUDHIR ASHQ
bahut khub
aa gayaya kaisa kalyug hai ab
imaan beimaan bhi rakhte hai

kahe bewafa hame tu to kya
maan teri her baat ka rakte hai
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«Reply #19 on: June 20, 2013, 09:18:41 AM »
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bahut sunder hameshaa kee tarah dheron daad
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«Reply #20 on: June 20, 2013, 12:59:22 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 19, 2013, 04:14:34 PM
लफ्ज़  होठों  पे  चार   रखते हैं.
दिल में कितना गुबार रखते हैं.

वक्त पे कोई साथ दिखता नहीं,
दोस्त    वैसे   हज़ार   रखते हैं.

लेखा जोखा ही बन न पाये कभी,
इतना  सर  पे  उधार  रखते हैं.

यूँ तो मिलते हैं गर्म जोशी से,
लोग  दिल  में  दरार  रखते हैं.

आप पायेगें यकीनन मंजिल,
खुद पे  गर  एतबार  रखते हैं.

बात जो दिल की साफ कहते हैं,
अश्क  उनमें शुमार रखते हैं.

-सुधीर अश्क

*****************************

LAFZ  HOTON PE CHAAR RAKHTE HAIN.
DIL ME KITNAA GUBAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

WAQT  PE  KOI  SAATH DIKHTA NAHI,
DOST  WAISE  HAZAAR  RAKHTE HAIN.

LEKHA JOKHA HI BAN NA PAYA KABHI,
ITNA  SAR  PE UDHAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

YUN  TO MILTE HAIN GARM JOSHI SE,
LOG  DIL  ME  DARAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

AAP   PAAYENGE  YAKINAN   MANZIL,
KHUD  PE GAR AITBAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

BAAT  JO  DIL KI SAAF KAHTE HAIN,
ASHQ  UNMEN  SHUMAAR RAKHTE HAIN.

-SUDHIR ASHQ

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