दुश्मन बराबरी का न मिल पाएगा कोई....'परम'

by Anaarhi on July 30, 2013, 11:55:17 AM
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, Param jee, excellent, jitni taa'reef karuN kam hai. Poori ki poori ghazal shaandaar hai, mujhe behad pasand aai, bahut achha message diya hai, sirf 4th sher thoda samajh meiN nahiN aaya, maqte ka sher to zabardast hai, maza aa gaya. Meri taraf se dheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye par Rau baad meiN de paauNga. YuN hi likhte rahiye aur bazm ko raushan karte rahiye.
Janaab Iftakhar Ahmad Sahab,
Aadaab,
Ghazal pasand karne ka shukriya.
पत्ता अगरचे उङने लगे आसमान में,
तो है हवा में,  इल्म न उसमें बढ़ा कोई.
bilkul saamne ka sher hai ye Janaab. yaani agar koee aisa kaam kar raha hai jo ki uski ability nahin hai ("pat'ta"  bina paroN ki nirjeev vastu) to wo kisi doosry ke influence se hi possible hai. jise muhawre k taur par "hawa main udhna"  kehte hain...yani waise to ud'dh nahin sakta par hawa ki wajha se ud'dhta lag raha hai.....
Aise aadmi ki tareef nahin karni chahiye jo bina kamaye halaat ki wazh se kuchh paa jaye kyunki usme koee nyaN gun paida nahin huaa.

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Paramjit
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