देने लगी सदाएं Ghazal by Samir Parimal

by samir parimal on December 06, 2013, 02:01:54 AM
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देने लगीं सदाएं तन्हाइयां मकाँ से
 उठने लगा धुआं भी खामोशी-ए-जुबां से

 अश्क़ों से धो रहे हैं यादों के पैरहन को
 खुशबू मगर वफ़ा की जाती नहीं जहाँ से

रोते हैं आबले भी पैरों से फूटकर अब
 रोएगा आसमां भी कब मेरी दास्ताँ से

 दिल मुंतज़िर रहा है इक तेरी बेरुखी का
 कर ले ज़रा किनारा अब तू भी जिस्मो-जाँ से

 मंज़ूर ग़र तुझे है है जो हुस्न की तिजारत
 लायेंगे अक्स तेरा हम भी किसी दुकां से

 ताक़त कहाँ बची है, ज़ख्मों को थपथपाएं
 खेलेंगे कबतलक वो इक ऐसे नीमजां से

 क़दमों तले कुचलकर जो ख़ाक हो चुका है
'परिमल' बता कि वो दिल अब लाएं हम कहाँ से

--- Samir Parimal
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«Reply #1 on: December 06, 2013, 02:14:09 AM »
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behad khubsurat ghazal... parimal saahab dheron daad... ultimate creation jitni bhi tareef karein kam hongi iss khubsurat kriti ki... meri taraf se ek rau qubool farmayein Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: December 06, 2013, 02:44:06 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Parimal jee waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bas itna kahuNga ke hamesha aate rahiye.
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2013, 09:08:57 AM »
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superb parimal jee dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2013, 09:09:27 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: December 06, 2013, 11:04:36 AM »
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whawha wha bhut umda
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«Reply #6 on: December 06, 2013, 11:54:58 AM »
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 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

Bahut hi khoobsurat Likha hai. Saare Ashaar ek se badkar Ek Hain. Dheron daad.
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«Reply #7 on: December 06, 2013, 12:11:15 PM »
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waaaaaaahhhhh parimal sahab waaaah kamal

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: December 06, 2013, 01:48:57 PM »
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Bahut khoob , Parimal saheb . Itni khubsurat shairy lekar kahaan chhupe thhe . aaiye is Bazm pe aap ka purzor khair maqdam hai .
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«Reply #9 on: December 06, 2013, 07:32:29 PM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 07, 2013, 04:24:30 AM »
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Bahut khoob , Parimal saheb . Itni khubsurat shairy lekar kahaan chhupe thhe . aaiye is Bazm pe aap ka purzor khair maqdam hai .

bahut bahut shukriya janaab
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«Reply #11 on: December 07, 2013, 04:26:18 AM »
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behad khubsurat ghazal... parimal saahab dheron daad... ultimate creation jitni bhi tareef karein kam hongi iss khubsurat kriti ki... meri taraf se ek rau qubool farmayein Usual Smile Usual Smile

tahe dil se shukriya janaab
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«Reply #12 on: December 07, 2013, 04:28:05 AM »
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Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

Bahut hi khoobsurat Likha hai. Saare Ashaar ek se badkar Ek Hain. Dheron daad.

inaayat hai aapki
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«Reply #13 on: December 07, 2013, 04:30:00 AM »
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superb parimal jee dheron daad

shukriya.... inaayat
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«Reply #14 on: December 08, 2013, 10:49:44 AM »
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waah waah
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