दो दिलों के प्यार को मत छेडिये.-सुधीर अश्क

by Sudhir Ashq on March 16, 2013, 11:27:36 AM
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वक्त की रफ्तार को मत छेडिये.
दो दिलों के प्यार को मत छेडिये.

भस्म हो जायेगा,पल भर में जहाँ,
दुखते दिल के तार को मत छेडिये.

आप दौलतमंद हैं माना मगर,
मुफलिसे-बीमार को मत छेडिये.

आप फूलों के हैं मालिक,सत्य है,
बेबसी के खार को मत छेडिये.

ढक रही है आबरू जो गरीब की,
आप उस दीवार को मत छेडिये.

बहती है जो बेबसी में जुल्म सहकर,
अश्क की उस धार को मत छेडिये.

         -सुधीर अश्क
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2013, 11:31:22 AM »
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waah waah waah sudhir ji kya baat hai bohut khub
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2013, 12:14:04 PM »
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nice,ashq ji.
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2013, 12:39:04 PM »
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Superb hai. dheron daad...
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2013, 12:47:20 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2013, 01:10:08 PM »
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Maashaa allah mashaa allah so nice mubaarak ho
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2013, 01:24:22 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2013, 01:45:14 PM »
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Sudhir Jee Aadaab!



Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob badi hi umdaa fikra aur gazab ki gehraai
sameti hai aapne lafzoN meiN... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad pur asar aur dilfareb rahe...
Aik khubsurat aur umdaa kalaam huyi hai... Humari dheroN dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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Wah Wah!!! Bohat hi khubsurat ghazal Sudheer Jee!!

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Kamaal air be had khoob ghazal
Dili daad aur  mubarakbad
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«Reply #10 on: March 16, 2013, 04:40:08 PM »
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waah waah waah wah kyaa kehne Sudhir ji... bahut bahut khoob.... jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai... shabd nahi hain is rachnaa ki taarif ke liye mere paas....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: March 16, 2013, 05:56:24 PM »
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वक्त की रफ्तार को मत छेडिये.
दो दिलों के प्यार को मत छेडिये.

भस्म हो जायेगा,पल भर में जहाँ,
दुखते दिल के तार को मत छेडिये.

आप दौलतमंद हैं माना मगर,
मुफलिसे-बीमार को मत छेडिये.

आप फूलों के हैं मालिक,सत्य है,
बेबसी के खार को मत छेडिये.

ढक रही है आबरू जो गरीब की,
आप उस दीवार को मत छेडिये.

बहती है जो बेबसी में जुल्म सहकर,
अश्क की उस धार को मत छेडिये.

         -सुधीर अश्क

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«Reply #12 on: March 16, 2013, 07:36:55 PM »
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वक्त की रफ्तार को मत छेडिये.
दो दिलों के प्यार को मत छेडिये.
waqt ke raftaar ko koi chhed nahin sakta. waqt apni raftaar mein hi guzar jataa hai. albatta hum late naa hoo.n iska dhyaan rahe. haan ye to sahi hai. per maanta kaun hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
भस्म हो जायेगा,पल भर में जहाँ,
दुखते दिल के तार को मत छेडिये.
dukh kahne sunne se halka hota hai. dil halka hota hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
आप दौलतमंद हैं माना मगर,
मुफलिसे-बीमार को मत छेडिये.
sahi kahaa........! Applause Applause Applause
आप फूलों के हैं मालिक,सत्य है,
बेबसी के खार को मत छेडिये.
bahut khoob.........! Applause Applause Applause
ढक रही है आबरू जो गरीब की,
आप उस दीवार को मत छेडिये.
wah-wah.........! Applause Applause Applause
बहती है जो बेबसी में जुल्म सहकर,
अश्क की उस धार को मत छेडिये.
kya kahne janaab............!
         -सुधीर अश्क


bahut khoob......!
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«Reply #13 on: March 17, 2013, 02:43:02 AM »
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