sksaini4
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धरती क्या मेरा घर भी |
गिरवी रक्खा है सर भी ||
साँपों की हिम्मत तो देख |
चढ़ जाते हैं छत पर भी ||
दिलकश जल्वे हैं लेकिन |
लगता है उनसे डर भी ||
नेता मतलब की ख़ातिर |
करवा सकते हैं शर भी ||
उड़ने की चालाकी में |
कट जायेंगे ये पर भी ||
कर्जा है जो कुदरत का |
देना पड़ता मर कर भी ||
चींज़ों की जब हो क़िल्लत |
रक्खा रह जाता ज़र भी ||
मेरा हक़ ये तेरा हक़ |
क्या मिल पाया लड़ कर भी ||
ख़ुद्दारी के बदले में |
मैं दे सकता हूँ सर भी ||
सब की ख़ातिर खोला है |
दिल ही क्या मैंने दर भी ||
डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
Dhartee kyaa meraa ghar bhee.
Girwee rakkhaa hai sar bhee.
SaanpoN kee himmat to dekh.
Chadh jaate haiN chhat par bhee.
Dilkash jalwe haiN lekin.
Lagtaa hai unse dar bhee.
Netaa matlab kee khaatir.
Karwaa sakte haiN shar bhee.
Udne kee chaalaakee meN.
Kat jaayenge ye par bhee.
Karzaa hai jo kudrat kaa.
Denaa padtaa mar kar bhee.
CheenzoN kee jab ho qillat.
Rakkhaa rah jaataa zar bhee.
Meraa haq ye teraa haq.
Kyaa mil payaa lad kar bhee.
Khuddaaree ke badle meN.
MaiN de saktaa hooN sar bhee.
Sab kee khaatir kholaa hai.
Dil hee kyaa maine dar bhee.
Dr.Surendra Saini
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the soul shaker
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«Reply #1 on: February 21, 2012, 07:15:18 AM » |
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surender ji bahut bahut badhai aapko in behad khoobsurat panktiyon ke liye...
aapko shubhkaamnayein
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Satish Shukla
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«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2012, 08:24:36 AM » |
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Saini Sahab,
Chhotee behr kee ek aur
khoobsoorat ghazal...waah waah..
Dili Mubaarabaad kubool farmaayen.
Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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khujli
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«Reply #3 on: February 21, 2012, 08:35:34 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2012, 12:17:15 PM » |
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 :clap:Bahut sundar ...my fav sher: udne ki chalaki mein kat jayenge yeh par bhi....itni chhoti beher mein kaise samaa jaata hai itna falsafa?...shayad usi tarah jis tarah aank ki putli mein saara falak samaa jaata hai. bahut badhayi
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riyaz106
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2012, 12:39:06 PM » |
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Wah wah wah Saini Sahab kya hi khoob likha hai aapne. Bahot bahot badhai ho. Ho zor-e-qalam aur zyada.
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Sadiq Rizvi
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«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2012, 02:05:57 PM » |
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Khuddaaree ke badley meiN.
De saktaa hooN maiN sar bhee.
Saini saheb Choti Baher mein achchi ghazal kahi hai Mubarak ho
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #9 on: February 21, 2012, 02:07:56 PM » |
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beautiful creation saini ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Umda likha hai !!!
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #10 on: February 21, 2012, 02:41:57 PM » |
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cheezon ki jub qillat ho
rakhha rah jata zar bhi.
Bahut achhi ghazal.Isss sher mein to Economics ki theory nazm kar di.bahut mubarakbaad.
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sarfira
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«Reply #11 on: February 21, 2012, 04:46:51 PM » |
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janaab Saini sahab--
sabse pehle to ye ki mujhe Bher ka mtlb nhi pata--
sirf ghazalen padhta hoon jinme bht kuch hota hai--
ek ghazal me poori kitaab ka kamaal hota hai jise padhkar
dil jhoom utha hai--
zindgi ki sachai,mohabbt ki achai,apno parayon ka nazara,jahan ki khoobsurti aur bhi bht kuch hota hai ghazlon me--
aapki ye taaza ghazal inhi me shamil hai--
daad dene ko shabd nhi milte aapki ghazals par
behad umdaa soch aur alfaazon ki behtareen adaegi--
mubarakbaad kubul karen
khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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sksaini4
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«Reply #13 on: February 22, 2012, 04:10:46 AM » |
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Prem sharma ji bahut bahut shukriya
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sksaini4
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«Reply #14 on: February 22, 2012, 04:43:03 AM » |
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Satish ji bahut bahut shukriya
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