न ख़बर है.....अमित प्रकाश "मीत"

by amit_prakash_meet on March 28, 2014, 04:47:23 PM
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दोस्तों....कुछ दिन पहले मैंने एक ग़ज़ल "कैसा कहर है" आप लोगों की नज़र की थी और आप लोगों ने उसको काफ़ी सराहा था....अब उसी कड़ी को आगे बढ़ाते हुये, आपके सामने ये ग़ज़ल पेश कर रहा हूँ....गौर फरमाइयेगा...(दो मिसरे पहली वाली ग़ज़ल से लिये हैं...)



रोने भी न दे  ओ मारे जबर है
ख़ुदा भी इंसा का   न रहबर है

चले गये हो तुम  न जाने कहाँ
न कोई चिट्ठी  न ही ख़बर है

अंधी दौड़    निकलने की आगे
न तो है संतोष  न ही सबर है

अब इबादत की इन्तहा न देखो
न राम है कोई  न ही शबर है

स्याह रातों सा आलम है पसरा
घर नहीं ‘मीत’ ये कोई कबर है


शबर (Shabar): here it is used for “Shabri”


Rone Bhi Na De O Maare Jabar Hai
Khuda Bhi Insaan Ka Na Rehbar Hai

Chale Gaye Ho Tum Na Jaane Kahan
Na Koi Chitthi Na Hi Khabar Hai

Andhi Daud Niklne Kee Aage
Na To Santosh Hai Na Hi Sabar Hai

Ab Ibaadat Kee Inteha Na Dekho
Na Raam Hai Koi Na Hi Shabar Hai

Syaah Raaton Sa Aalam Hai Pasra
Ghar Nahi “MEET” Ye Koi Kabar Hai
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बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया सैनी जी.....
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wah wah bohut khub waaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh
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Quote from: Akash Basudev on March 28, 2014, 06:18:42 PM
Bahut Badiya Amit ji Usual Smile

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया आकाश जी....
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Sundar.

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बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया उषा राजेश जी.....
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
wah wah bohut khub waaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया जीत जी.....
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