नजरों से मिली नज़रें...अमित प्रकाश “मीत”

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नजरों से मिली नज़रें और प्यार  हो  गया |
दिल ने  कहा दिल से और इकरार हो गया  ||

सदियों से जो दुशमन रहा इस जहाँ  में |
दो-दो जाम साथ चले और यार हो गया ||

झूठ और फरेब की ये दुनिया है यारों |
सच्चे का तो यहाँ  बऩटाधार हो गया ||

दुनिया के सामने थी “मीत” इज्ज़त बड़ी |
खुली हकीक़त तो दामन तार-तार हो गया ||
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«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2012, 10:39:16 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Amit ji....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2012, 01:40:15 PM »
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Amit jee.
wah waah waaah
kya baat hai.
sabhi sher acche hai par..
3 and 4...mindblowing..
bahut bahut badhiya.
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«Reply #3 on: August 09, 2012, 02:16:32 PM »
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Waah waah waah waah, Bahut bahut khoob Amit Jee. Maza aa gaya padh ke, kya khoob likha hai aapne. Dheron daad aur ek Rau bhi.
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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2012, 04:27:01 PM »
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bahut shaandaar pesh kash, bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2012, 04:48:02 PM »
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bahut khub bahut b adhiya rachna amit ji dhero daad qabool farmayae

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«Reply #6 on: August 09, 2012, 06:45:11 PM »
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नजरों से मिली नज़रें और प्यार  हो  गया |
दिल ने  कहा दिल से और इकरार हो गया  ||

सदियों से जो दुशमन रहा इस जहाँ  में |
दो-दो जाम साथ चले और यार हो गया ||

झूठ और फरेब की ये दुनिया है यारों |
सच्चे का तो यहाँ  बऩटाधार हो गया ||

दुनिया के सामने थी “मीत” इज्ज़त बड़ी |
खुली हकीक़त तो दामन तार-तार हो गया ||



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«Reply #7 on: August 11, 2012, 10:06:35 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Amit ji....!!!
Thanks a lot Hriday Ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 11, 2012, 10:26:45 AM »
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Amit jee.
wah waah waaah
kya baat hai.
sabhi sher acche hai par..
3 and 4...mindblowing..
bahut bahut badhiya.
Bahut bahut shukriya MKV Ji
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«Reply #9 on: August 13, 2012, 06:35:41 AM »
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Waah waah waah waah, Bahut bahut khoob Amit Jee. Maza aa gaya padh ke, kya khoob likha hai aapne. Dheron daad aur ek Rau bhi.
Bahut bahut shukriya Iftakhar Ji, is hosla afzaayi ke liye, rau aapne de diya iske liye shukriya lekin maine ab rau lene dele ka silsila band kar diya hai
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«Reply #10 on: August 13, 2012, 09:59:32 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: August 26, 2012, 05:58:16 AM »
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नजरों से मिली नज़रें और प्यार  हो  गया |
दिल ने  कहा दिल से और इकरार हो गया  ||

सदियों से जो दुशमन रहा इस जहाँ  में |
दो-दो जाम साथ चले और यार हो गया ||

झूठ और फरेब की ये दुनिया है यारों |
सच्चे का तो यहाँ  बऩटाधार हो गया ||

दुनिया के सामने थी “मीत” इज्ज़त बड़ी |
खुली हकीक़त तो दामन तार-तार हो गया ||


bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2012, 11:53:39 AM »
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bahut shaandaar pesh kash, bahut khoob
Thanks a lot
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«Reply #13 on: September 05, 2012, 10:58:03 AM »
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bahut khub bahut b adhiya rachna amit ji dhero daad qabool farmayae

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Many many thanks Soudagar Ji
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«Reply #14 on: September 05, 2012, 11:06:00 AM »
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very nice ghazal amit jee
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