नाता जोड़ ज़रा/Naataa jod zaraa......................................SAINI

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अपनी ज़िद को छोड़ ज़रा |

मुझसे नाता जोड़  ज़रा ||
 

बेदारी  को रोक    रही |

वो जंजीरें   तोड़  ज़रा ||
 

मोती चुनना  चाहता  है |

तो घुटनों को मोड़ ज़रा ||


सीधे -सीधे बात   बता |

आना-कानी  छोड़ ज़रा ||
 

दामन के दिख दाग रहे |

मोटी चादर  ओढ़ ज़रा ||
 

इस दारू में ज़ह्र  मिला |

सारी  बोतल फोड़ ज़रा ||
 

खैरातों  का  दौर  चला |

‘सैनी’तू भी दौड़ ज़रा ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी


Apnee  zid  ko  chhod  zaraa.
Mujhse   naataa  jod   zaraa.

Bedaaree   ko    rok   rahee.
Vo   zanjeereN   tod   zaraa.

Motee  chunnaa  chahtaa  hai.
To   ghutnoN   ko  mod zaraa.

Seedhe-seedhe   baat   bataa.
Aanaa- kaanee  chhod   zaraa.

Daaman   ke  dikh  daag rahe.
Motee  chadar    odh   zaraa.

Is  daaroo  meN  zahr  milaa.
Saaree   botal   fod   zaraa.

KhairaatoN  kaa daur chalaa .
‘Saini’ too  bhee daud zaraa.

Dr.Surendra Saini

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«Reply #18 on: May 22, 2012, 09:47:52 AM »
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अपनी ज़िद को छोड़ ज़रा |

मुझसे नाता जोड़  ज़रा ||
 

बेदारी  को रोक    रही |

वो जंजीरें   तोड़  ज़रा ||
 

मोती चुनना  चाहता  है |

तो घुटनों को मोड़ ज़रा ||


सीधे -सीधे बात   बता |

आना-कानी  छोड़ ज़रा ||
 

दामन के दिख दाग रहे |

मोटी चादर  ओढ़ ज़रा ||
 

इस दारू में ज़ह्र  मिला |

सारी  बोतल फोड़ ज़रा ||
 

खैरातों  का  दौर  चला |

‘सैनी’तू भी दौड़ ज़रा ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र  सैनी


Apnee  zid  ko  chhod  zaraa.
Mujhse   naataa  jod   zaraa.

Bedaaree   ko    rok   rahee.
Vo   zanjeereN   tod   zaraa.

Motee  chunnaa  chahtaa  hai.
To   ghutnoN   ko  mod zaraa.

Seedhe-seedhe   baat   bataa.
Aanaa- kaanee  chhod   zaraa.

Daaman   ke  dikh  daag rahe.
Motee  chadar    odh   zaraa.

Is  daaroo  meN  zahr  milaa.
Saaree   botal   fod   zaraa.

KhairaatoN  kaa daur chalaa .
‘Saini’ too  bhee daud zaraa.

Dr.Surendra Saini


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