sksaini4
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पास सबके न बैठता हूँ मैं |
लोग कहते हैं नकचढा हूँ मैं ||
आज बच्चों ने फीस मांगी है |
जेब ख़ाली टटोलता हूँ मैं ||
हो गयी चूक तो कहीं मुझसे |
सोच कर ख़ुद को कोसता हूँ मैं ||
गीत गाऊँ वतन परस्ती के |
क्यूँ समझते हो सरफिरा हूँ मैं ?
रोज़ हाथों की इन लकीरों में |
एक बदलाव ढूंढता हूँ मैं ||
सबने अपने हुक़ूक मांगे हैं |
टुकड़ों-टुकड़ों में बँट चुका हूँ मैं ||
मेरे नक़्शे क़दम पे मत चलना |
अपने बेटे को बोलता हूँ मैं ||
ये ख़लल सा हुआ ज़िहन में क्यूँ ?
उफ़! ये क्या सोचने लगा हूँ मैं ?
डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
Paas sabke n baithtaa hooN maiN.
Log kahte hain nakchadhaa hooN maiN.
Aaj bachhoN ne fees mangee hai.
Jeb khaalee tatoltaa hooN maiN.
Ho gayee chook to kaheeN mujhse.
Soch kar khud ko kostaa hooN maiN.
Geet gaaooN vatan parastee ke.
KyooN samajhte ho sarfiraa hooN main?
Roz haathon kee in lakeeron meN.
Ek badlaaw dhoondhtaa hooN maiN.
Sabne apne huqook maange haiN.
TukdoN tukdoN meN bant chukaa hooN maiN.
Mere naqshe qadam pe mat chalnaa.
Apne bete ko boltaa hooN maiN.
Ye khalal saa huaa zihan meN kyooN?
Uf ! ye kyaa sochne lagaa hooN maiN?
Dr. Surendra Saini
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krshna sukumar
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«Reply #1 on: January 20, 2012, 11:18:09 AM » |
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 kya baat hei! badhaian!! Krishna Sukumar
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #3 on: January 20, 2012, 02:49:58 PM » |
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mere naqsh e qadam pe mat chalna
apne bete ko blta hoon main
bahut khoob saini saheb.Sahi hai nai nasl itne constraints ke saath na chale to behtar hai.
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«Reply #4 on: January 20, 2012, 02:57:18 PM » |
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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2012, 06:00:47 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2012, 08:41:49 PM » |
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Saini saheb aadaab
Sabne apne huqook maange haiN.
TukdoN tukdoN meN bant chukaa hooN maiN.
Yeh sher waqayee Daad ka mustheq hai
Daad marham hai zakhmi shayer ka
Baarha sab se kah chuka hoon maiN
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«Reply #8 on: January 21, 2012, 09:13:45 AM » |
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sksaini4
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2012, 05:00:01 AM » |
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Krishan sukumaar ji dhanyawaad
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sksaini4
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«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2012, 05:30:09 AM » |
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Mann ji bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2012, 05:39:05 AM » |
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very nice line Sir.
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«Reply #12 on: January 23, 2012, 07:08:20 AM » |
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Hasan saheb bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: January 23, 2012, 09:02:59 AM » |
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Sarfira ji bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #14 on: January 23, 2012, 09:36:04 AM » |
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Mukesh ji bahut bahut shukriya
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on eTI community..
