बिकने की आज वो हैं तमन्ना लिए हुए,

by Anaarhi on July 16, 2012, 01:31:03 AM
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दहशत में कारवां है ये आसार देख कर,
इन रहबरों के ज़ह् न को बीमार देख कर.

जिनको दिया है ताज उन्हें सर नहीं दिया,
हैराँ हूँ बे सरों को मैं सरदार देख कर.

आने दो आंधियों को, करेंगे मुकाबला,
नन्हे चिराग कह उठे आसार देख कर.

बिकने की आज वो हैं तमन्ना लिए हुए,
पर मोल हम लगाएंगे बाज़ार देख कर.

कोई मज़ा है मान गए कैदे हुस्न में,
खुश-बू को फूल ही में गिरफ्तार देख कर.

क्या होगा इस मकान का ये सोच कर डरा,
मैं नींव से अलग हुई दीवार देख कर.

मेहमाँ हूँ चार दिन का परेशान तू न हो,
मैं लौट जाउंगा तिरा संसार देख कर.

किस्मत से रेस का मुझे अब आएगा मज़ा,
"जी खुश हुआ है राह को पुरख़ार देखकर".

उस्ताद से न तुम कोई करना गिला 'परम',
सुर तो सजाए साज भी है तार देख कर.

"परम" ०५/०७/२०११

हज़ल

बेहोश इश्क हो गया आसार देख कर,
मचली हुई अचार पे हुस्नार देख कर.

शौहर ग़रीब जब कभी पीटा लुगाई ने,
सासू भी आ के जङ गई दो चार देख कर.

हाथों को सर पे फेर के देता नसीहतें,
बीवी को लाओ तुम मियाँ घरबार देख कर.

लैला गुलाब से नहीं पटती है आजकल,
तोहफा दो कीमती करेगी प्यार देख कर .

मेरी ग़ज़ल पे चुप है तू 'ग़ालिब' पे वाह वाह,
फ़न को सराहता है बे फ़नकार देख कर.

....."परम"
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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2012, 02:50:42 AM »
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waah waah waah, bahut hi behtareen andaaz ki ghazal rahi, ek ek sher padhkar mazaa aa gaya, bahut hi khoobsurat, very nice
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2012, 04:22:41 AM »
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waah waah parm ji nahlaa bhee dahlaa bhee tabiyat khush ho gayee padh kar dheron daad qubool karen
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2012, 04:31:05 AM »
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bahut khoob param vey nice
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2012, 02:46:18 PM »
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Bahut hi umda peshkash Param jee
maja aa gaya padhkar
aise khoobsurat kalaam bahut kam padhne ko milte hai.
2nd ghajal ke maqte ne dil loot liya..
vaah vaah
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2012, 03:49:32 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2012, 02:01:57 PM »
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Param ji tareef k liye shabdo ka abhav hai so thode mein hi jyada samjhna.......... Dhero daad aur dhero mubarak baad specially 2nd rachna ke liye
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«Reply #7 on: July 20, 2012, 01:24:55 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob. excellant  Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 20, 2012, 03:16:29 PM »
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waah waah waah, bahut hi behtareen andaaz ki ghazal rahi, ek ek sher padhkar mazaa aa gaya, bahut hi khoobsurat, very nice
Hausla afzaee ka shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: July 20, 2012, 03:17:27 PM »
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waah waah parm ji nahlaa bhee dahlaa bhee tabiyat khush ho gayee padh kar dheron daad qubool karen
Khyaal pasand karney ka tahe dil se shukarguzaar hoon S K Saini sahab
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«Reply #10 on: July 20, 2012, 03:18:45 PM »
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bahut khoob param vey nice
shukriya Janaab..... aabhari hoon
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«Reply #11 on: July 20, 2012, 03:20:06 PM »
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Bahut hi umda peshkash Param jee
maja aa gaya padhkar
aise khoobsurat kalaam bahut kam padhne ko milte hai.
2nd ghajal ke maqte ne dil loot liya..
vaah vaah
Ji Janaab ....ye ham naye likhney walon  ke dil ka dard hai...
Anyway Thanks...
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«Reply #12 on: July 20, 2012, 03:20:38 PM »
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nice
Ji Shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: July 20, 2012, 03:21:44 PM »
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Param ji tareef k liye shabdo ka abhav hai so thode mein hi jyada samjhna.......... Dhero daad aur dhero mubarak baad specially 2nd rachna ke liye
Koee baat nahin sir G ....aapke ahsaas hi kafi hain hausla afzaee k liye...dhaneywaad...
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«Reply #14 on: July 20, 2012, 03:22:25 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob. excellant  Applause Applause
Shukarguzaar hoon k khyaal pasand aaye....
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